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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear ... .first of all sorry cuz i had read ur story till chap 3 n havent commented..really sorry πŸ˜›
So im directly commenting on d 5 th chap...next chap se regularly comment karungi...pakka πŸ˜ƒ
Okk...coming to chap 5...really loved it...atlast taani n rey ne baat to ki πŸ˜†
N rey held taani's wrist n den kept his hand on her hand 😳 😳 😳...n d eyelocks were so cute!!
N their incomplete hi5...really felt bad for dem πŸ˜”
Sharon joining d IA...gud...n it was sooo sweet way of swayam to stop her frm crying ... dat stranger n apno ke beech ka farak...it was soo sensible n sweet!! 😳
I m still thinking wat striked intaarey's mind jo dono ek saath vaha se achanak chale gaye πŸ€“
Really curious about it...eagerly waiting to read d next chap
Ur an amazong writer dear πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Update d next chap soon n pls pls pm me!! N once again sorry!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shikha1997

<font size="4">Hey dear ... .first of all sorry cuz i had read ur story till chap 3 n havent commented..really sorry πŸ˜›
So im directly commenting on d 5 th chap...next chap se regularly comment karungi...pakka πŸ˜ƒ
Okk...coming to chap 5...really loved it...atlast taani n rey ne baat to ki πŸ˜†
N rey held taani's wrist n den kept his hand on her hand 😳 😳 😳...n d eyelocks were so cute!!
N their incomplete hi5...really felt bad for dem πŸ˜”
Sharon joining d IA...gud...n it was sooo sweet way of swayam to stop her frm crying ... dat stranger n apno ke beech ka farak...it was soo sensible n sweet!! 😳
I m still thinking wat striked intaarey's mind jo dono ek saath vaha se achanak chale gaye πŸ€“
Really curious about it...eagerly waiting to read d next chap
Ur an amazong writer dear πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Update d next chap soon n pls pls pm me!! N once again sorry!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ </font>


It's ok dear
Will wait for u to comment regularly from next time :)
Thanks for liking the update
I m glad u like the swaron convo :(
U will know y in next update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys we are here with the update

Part:6 "A Fail Attempt"

TR rushed into the DR followed by swaron.taani replayed the video and both taarey were obersvng it vry carefully and aftr few they both shouted in unicon"yes,i was rght" and on the other side swaron were hell confusd abt what this two were talking,they both were not able to figure out this two were talking about then finaaly swayam spoke up "do anyone think that there is a need to tell us also abt the clue?"he said crossing his hand aganst his chest,"yes ofcruse sherlocks..i will tell u not only u infact i will infrm every one in IA about this clue "repld rey "okay but when ?"asked swayam with a questing look.."well in few more secnds"he said trun towrds taani contnued "tho moti sab IA membr ko DR bolavogi pls"he said giving her a smile."yup ,sure ladu " she repld backhim back with smile."hey looser i think en dono ki bechki akwrdness katham hogahey..wat say?" Sharon asked.."i so wish ki esey ho"swayam replid her.soon all IA members assembled in the DR and everone took there places.an rey stood never the projecter and strtd talking to the members"so guys,hum logoko ye patha chegayahey ki hamarey head ko kaha raka gayahey..and me and team are going to do an rescue operation of our HOI and ah the newbie aur humarey HOI ki beti bi meri team hogi for this operatin ..i will contact whom ever i need so guys be ready for the operation by hook or crook we are going to get ourHOI back"said rey look at every one inthe hall.."now u people may go"he said ."so when are u planing for the mission"asked swayam."sherlock we don't have much time..we need to rush now it self"repld rey"but where did that jerk had hidden my dad?"sharon asked rey "well shar it a secrt place in a the a forest area wch is in the out side the city."taani said placng her hand on sharon's shouldr"and ah bas ethanahi nahi .we have already done an mission in the same place"said rey looking at swayam"really ,kab?"qustnd swayam."jab tu sharon key sath time spend karahatha tab "rey gve smrkd to swayam.swayam give an "i will kill u" look to rey."laddu now stop it ...marshall us mission per apa nahi ayathey bas me aur laddu gayethey"said taani tryng to clear her brother's cnfusn."okay okay ..ab no more qustn..lets get on to the work "said sharon."yup lets do it guys"said swayam."its time for some action guys"rey said.all the four got on the coperand they wer landed near the forest ..taarey were going in the front line and swaron were following them .soon they reached a old house and went into it .rey place d his cellphone's camera on the keyhole of the door and sign to look into that say if anyone was there or not."nope ansh ..koi nahi hey "Said swayam."i think we can go in" said taani,"yup lets go in" the four broked the door and enterd in ...

Taarey went in one direction and swaron other. They all were very attentive except Sharon. She was eager to see her dad and it was her first mission so was nervous too. She was walking while looking around not paying attention much to the stuff around him. She collided with some boxes and they all were about to fell on her but swayam pulled her to him and she came crashing on his chest. All the boxes fell on the ground making a loud 'Thud' sound which startled taarey too. Taani jerked and turned around to see what happened and in that process she lost her balance and was about to fall but her ladu circles his arms around her waste and saved her in time. Taani's eyes were closed tightly unknowingly she held Rey's shirt tightly with both hands. Rey on the other hand was smiling and adoring his moti. She looked damn cute. He wondered how an IA agent can be strong and a fighter on one hand and on the other hand is scared of darkness and falling. He came out of his trance when he heard foot steps. Quickly he made taani stand up properly but taani was still holding him and her eyes were still closed. He went near her unable to stop himself. He kissed both her eyes and said near her ear "moti ladu k hotay howay no need to get scared". She smiled at his words and awkwardly opens her eyes and leave his shirt.

They both went to swaron and after making sure everyone is ok. They again got engrossed in finding HOI. Soon they realized that no one was here. Taarey found an hot stove from which they concluded that the goons didnt left long time ago. They kept searching around more clues. On the other hand swaron found the chair where HOI was tied up. Sharon rushed to that chair and hugged it. As if she was hugging her dad tears were rolling down her beautiful eyes. Seeing her like this swayam had tears too he wiped them off and went and sit beside her. "Siren it's ok we will find your dad soon. And also those who did this, will make sure that they got what they deserve DEATH" he said that while holding her from her arms. She turned around and saw anger in her loser's eyes and confidence that he will do what he said. She couldn't control herself anymore so she hugged him. Swayam was caught off guard. He never imagined Sharon doing this. He hugged her back as soon as he heated her sobbing. He hold her as protectively as possible comforting her by rubbing her back.
Scene shifts:
Taarey were still looking for clues. Rey was ahead and taani was behind him walking slowly. Taani kicked a cane of drink by mistake and Rey turned around to check on her. She made the cutest guilty face ever and Rey couldn't help but smile at his moti. While he was turning back again his eyes fell on something. Taani was busy in looking while Rey walked up to that thing. He picked it up and looked at carefully. It was a watch. No it wasn't an ordinary watch it was a special one an IA watch. Given to the members of IA only and is taken back when they quit IA.
It was not fully cleared that someone from IA had visited this place. The watch was a little broken and it was showing the date of yesterday. It meant that the person knew about this place and visited it yesterday. Rey was wondering why that person didnt inform anyone about this place. He was thinking and suddenly it struck him that only a traitor would not share about this news.
He tighten his fist and now he was fuming in anger. He looked at the watch and then at Taani. He again looks at the watch and something struck his mind again and he says "crap".

*THE END*


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Posted: 12 years ago
Soo spyc FF
totally soo different unexpected
lubd de nick name...
Rey jealous nd confused in his rlnship wid Taani
outstanding concept
brilliant job dear
w8ing for nxt updte
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Posted: 12 years ago
I gezz m de Rst 1 to read dis part6 nd comment also

no wrds its awesum
rey nd taani so concernd for deir wrk nd swayam too
Rey melt by taani's innocency i really lubd it
sharon huged swayam ws cute part...
But sad bF dey reached there sharon dad was taken away frm there as result team was unsucess
but they r they ..Will finout...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww It was a really sweet update !! TaaRey are back to moti and laddu !!! Yes !!!! Me Happy ! It was really cute and sweet how both of the couples were having their small moments together !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow very nic update

i hope shivam hi ho wo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res.. Will unres soon.
. Pm me wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww such a awesome update dears omg swayam was so funny when he asking questions to taarey i was rofling like idiot on his situation and finally taarey are back now , rey omg he is s funny poor swayam rey bhi an ajb dekho sharon ka nam lekar chidata rehta hai usse , aww little taarey scne was os cute and that eyes kisses was so adorable , swaron hug are too good feel bad for sharon but swayam ah na omg in last that means someone from iA is behind all this plz update soon and thanks for the pmπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg
totaly hatke updat
jst lvd it

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