SS : Raison d'etre (Chapter 13 - P. 53) 25/03

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

How did I miss this story?? Just came across it in the forum.

You have done a wonderful job with each character!

I'm very curious to find out how Arnav and Khushi end up together, if the boy she's supposed to meet is Amar? I can understand her willingness to go along with her father's plans, her and Arnav share only a professional relationship, so why would she bank on that.

Great job, I loved reading all 5 chapters in one go. Looking forward to the next part.

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

The conversation between the two girls was awesome...

And la she asked all the right qns to Khushi even though she was drunk:)

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

I can't believe you are a first time writer, you are kidding right? you are pacing the story like a pro. I have a strong feeling Amar is Arnav and he is acting up with Khushi. L & K's friendship is worth envy, I wish I had one like that.

Pease let Arnav come back safely for Khushi, we want happy endings bas!!😛

Please pm me!!

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

hey! its a really nice..scratch that..amazing story..
its unique and interesting.

update soon! and pls let us hv a happy ending 😊

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jakhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

.Hey Athena... Just read 5 parts of this story..and it's wonderfully written.

Loved the intrigue that you brought in...yet keeping it simple. I think Khushi is being wise about Arnav and I can understand her predicament.

Of course...my understanding stems from the fact that they do end up together..so it ends well 😉😆.

I am still worried about why she felt some trepidation in the 1st chapter as she missed Arnav. I hope it was only because she is pregnant and nothing else...and Arnav comes back home to her safe and sound and makes good of his promise 😉.

Now waiting to hear the rest of their story and how they came together.

Have to say you are a wonderful writer and welcome to the IPK FF world!!!

- Khushi.

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Just came across this story, such a brilliant story!

I love the way your write it 👏

So instead of having lunch with Amar she had it with Arnav and didn't even inform or knew about Amar's name 🤣

Can't wait to read the next update and La's kitten idea is superb 👍🏼 🤣

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Are we in for an update soon? :)

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Hi :)

So I was just wandering around in Ipk forum when I came across this SS. I usually stay away from Fan fictions because of some particular reasons but when I read this, I couldn't resist reading it all. All the five parts. And ma'am let me tell you that you are one brilliant writer. I am in complete awe of the way your words flow when you write, it's just beautiful. I can visualise every single thing, right from the way Arnav raises his palm to save Khushi's head to the way they laugh over those hilarious desserts[So totally LOVED them😆]

My favourite part of the story is the beginning , the way you begin from a moment in the present and move onto how Arnav and Khushi's story actually began! A smile lingered on my face as I read the last line of the first chapter when you say that she is pregnant.

You portray tender and emotional moments as easily as you do the humorous ones. I specifically love those parts where Khushi remembers her mother, they are so subtle yet very touching. And you did con me into believing that Arnav was Amar at first[I still want to believe it, but I can be wrong at that!]. I couldn't help smiling and grinning all throughout their "date", extremely heartwarming.

An added delight is Lavanya and her "dog" Samar 😆 Her and Khushi's friendship comes out as very genuine, very real. Their secrets, sleepovers and taking care of each other is lovely :D

I am completely taken in to the story, I like Khushi's father as a chef already, even though I don't know much about him. Somehow he comes across as a very jolly happy old fellow :D

I can't wait to know who is Amar, if he is Arnav or not and how Arnav and Khushi finally end up together and if La and Samar finally get together too. In short, I need to read more of this story :')

PLEASE continue as soon as possible. Waiting eagerly!

-Risha

PS- I love Khushi's nickname as "Geeks" , I am one too ;)

PPS-The hair clip part. That. Loved it!

If I had to quote, I will quote the entire thing so I won't 😆

Edited by Amethyst. - 12 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Hey there! :)

So Amethyst., the girl who commented above me, was all praises about this FF & I just peeked in to see what is so intriguing about this story. And that little sneak-peek turned into a full fledged reading session. I read all the five chapters in one go & the first thing that came to my mind was- 'Beautiful' The way you have written this story is beautiful & flawless.

I loved the way you gave us a small insight into Arnav-khushi's present life & then took us for an eventful ride in the past. Arnav khushi are so much in love. I just loved the way Arnav left voicemails for khushi, reassuring her of his presence in her life. And the way Khushi reacted was overwhelming, the way she touches the answer machine, the way she sobs silently, every gesture has been beautifully described.

Loving the story so far. Khushi & Arnav are certified workaholics. Thank god khushi has a best friend like Lavanya. Geeks needs a break! No seriously!

I love Khushi's dad. He's brilliant & funny & a chef. Yummy! Though I understand khushi's reason of meeting Amar & tying the knot with him, I'd love to see Khushi accepting her true feelings for Arnav. Now don't say that she doesn't feel anything for Arnav, I won't believe you :P I still feel that Arnav is pretending to be Amar. Am I right?

Continue soon!

P.S.- Did I mention you're a brilliant writer?

P.P.S.- I loved their desserts. Arnav's dessert was scary & Khushi's dessert was...interesting :D

Edited by ...Doctor... - 12 years ago