Arhi FF: Destiny Games (upd note on pg 1)

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

Nice story just read it all this week! Wonder how khushi and Arnav will get together...

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Khushi will totally be part of the raizada

And she has a lot of similarity to Arnav

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

Yes the foundation is laid. Now we are eagr to see the construction!!

It's time for next update again! 😛

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

waiting for the next update eagerly..please continue soon..😊

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

Just came across ur ff simply amazing over every bit of it

Love to know how arnav and Kushi get along

It's indeed destiny s play

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

when are u updating this one

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ziya-farhannish

@ziya-farhannish

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

i know it has barely been 4 days...but i am really eager for the next one!

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

growing impatient for my DG fix already 😆😆😆

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

Hey I loved this story. This is also intriguing. But at some places there is an unneeded lag, or so I felt.

Example Payal's issue being stretched, and at some places. It is an interesting story and I'm on my toes when I'm reading this. I felt the same for Checkmate too. So in such moments, some places it feels like it is being lagged unnecessarily.

I did doubt Mr. Roy but I thought he had a bigger master behind it. And if this was the secret, then what did Shashi say about getting Arnav married to Kushi. That was not part of the deal.

I loved NK-Kushi-Anjali banter. Wish Payal could join too. Then it would be wonderful you know.

Please pm me when you update nest. Have not read the other two. My classes starts 2mo. So will take a little time for that. Hope you understand.