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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my,Taarey r struggling fr tr lives frm d death deamon! It ws totaly an emotional power-pack dr,d tears wr trickling frm my eyes automaticaly whl rdng it.Swa pain ws vulnerable! I pray our TR to gt wel sn & gt bck wt tr lv.
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 5:

it was beautiful...
dnt have words to express how much i loved the chap...
the love, pain everything was perfectly shown...
jus lovedd it alot <3
great job ayesha =)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Its so emotional Taani trying to hide her feelings from Rey and Rey trying to find out what's bothering his Taani is so sad and then their accident omg, Rey although he is injured he still take his princess to the hospital. Hope Taarey get better soon. And as for that Tauji hope Swayam kick him out of taani life. Amazing update Ayesha, I love it anx Im happy that u decided to have a happy ending. Plz continue soon


Thank you so much, Natasha...😊
Hope you all will like the happy ending...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti094

U r too good a writer
read all 6 parts in one go n i m toh in luv wid dis story
so i hav sent u a buddy request plz do accept it n pm me wenever u update this ss


Awww.. Thank you so much, kriti(Hope that is your name)..😊
That is really a very big compliment for me...😆😉
And, yeah I have accepted your buddy request and will definitely pm you...😊
Hope you will like the further updates too...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Oh my,Taarey r struggling fr tr lives frm d death deamon! It ws totaly an emotional power-pack dr,d tears wr trickling frm my eyes automaticaly whl rdng it.Swa pain ws vulnerable! I pray our TR to gt wel sn & gt bck wt tr lv.


No, dear..Plz. don't be sad...😭 They will be fine...Don't worry..😉
And, yeah, thanks a lot for commenting..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

part 5:


it was beautiful...
dnt have words to express how much i loved the chap...
the love, pain everything was perfectly shown...
jus lovedd it alot <3
great job ayesha =)


Thank you so so much, dear...😊
I really loved all your comments...😊
Thanks a lot for commenting on all the updates even though you are busy..😛
This really means a lot to me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
chap 6

it was so sadd...
taani and rey...dono ka accident =(
cant believe it =(
hope they get better...
and glad to see the truth come out before the gang...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

chap 6


it was so sadd...
taani and rey...dono ka accident =(
cant believe it =(
hope they get better...
and glad to see the truth come out before the gang...


Thank you so much for liking it..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Guys!! How are you all??? Thanks a lot for your likes and comments... Thank you so so much... So, guys, here is the next update.. Hope you all like it..😊

Part 7

The gang was desperately waiting for the doctor..Swayam was very tensed for his sister and his best friend'At last, after a long wait, the doctor comes out..

They ran to the doctor'

Swayam- Doctor, how is Taani now???

Doctor'Dekhiye she is out of danger now.. But, still she is very weak'So we will keep her under observation till then.. But, yeah she is out of danger..You should really thank the person who brought her on time to the hospital or else it would have been impossible to save her'But, unfortunately, that person itself is in this condition'

Swayam(worried)'Doctor, Rey ki condition kaisi hai ab??

Doctor'Dekhiye Mr. Swayam, He is critical'We are trying each and every way possible but he is not responding to our treatments' It is as if he does not have the need to live any more.. As if he himself does not want to be alive'Only your prayers can help him out now'

Everyone was shocked'They knew what was stopping Rey to come back to life'Swayam just sat their in shock not knowing what to do.. He was losing an important part of his life..He was shattered..

Swayam(with tears in his eyes)'Plz. God.. Plz. Save him.. Main apne best friend ko lose karna afford nahi kar sakta..Agar Rey ko kuch bhi hua to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta..And then he looks towards his father who was wearing a confused expression on his face..

Swayam'Kya hua papa.. Aap itne worried kyun lag rahe ho.. Khush nahi ho aap.. Jo chahte the wohi hua.. Rey apni zindagi aur maut se fight kar raha hai.. In fact he does not even want to live more' Usne apni parwaah na karte hue Taani ko hospital lekar aaya.. Wo khud itne pain main tha par use bas Taani ki fikar thi..Jise aap Apni beti kehte ho aur us se itna pyaar karne ka naatak karte ho, wo agar aaj zinda hai to sirf aur sirf Rey ki wajah se'Apni jaan se bhi zyaada pyaar karta hai wo us se aur aapne isi pyaar ko Taani ki zindagi se door kar diya..

Tauji was shocked' He was feeling very guilty'He fell on his knees and tears were flowing out of his eyes as if seeking forgiveness for whatever he had done'

Taani's health was getting better' Yes, she wanted to live.. She was fighting to live for her love.. for Rey'His love was giving her strength'

Whereas Rey's condition was getting worse.. Taani's words were still in his mind "Main aapse nafrath karti hoon.. Mujhse door rahiye aap".. He really did not have the will to live any more.. He did not want to live such a life where he could not stay with his love'

After 2 hours'

Doctor comes towards the gang..

Doctor'Taani ko hosh aagaya hai.. Aap log unse mil sakte hain..But, plz. Be careful..Wo ab bhi weak hain, so no stress..

Everyone was very happy..Swayam rushed towards her ward followed by the gang'

Taani was lying there with her eyes closed with her head and hands covered with the bandages which were a little wet due to the blood.. Her face was very pale' She seemed really weak'

Swayam went towards her and carefully touched her face not wanting to hurt his baby sister any more.. Taani slowly opened her eyes.. Swayam's eyes quickly filled with tears.. He was not able to see her in this much pain' Taani smiled assuring him that she is O.K'He nodded his head'

Swayam holding her hands'Taani, I am really very sorry.. Main bohot bura bhai hoon na.. main tumhara khayaal nahi rakh paaya.. Jab tumhe meri sab se zyaada zarurath thi, main tumhaare saath nahi tha'Plz. Mujhe maaf kardo..

Taani in a very weak voice'Nahi Bhai, aap to dunya ke sab se best bhai ho' Plz. Aisa mat bolo aap.. Aap ki koi ghalti nahi hai..

Swayam'I promise Taani ' Ab se main har waqt tumhaara saath doonga aur tumhe har difficulty se protect karoonga.. Tumhe koi bhi takleef nahi hone doonga..

Taani smiles.. But, her eyes were searching for someone'She was feeling very restless'She did not know why but she felt that he is in some problem'

Swayam saw her looking here and there' He undesrstood whom she was looking for.. But, would it be right to tell her in this condition..He was lost in his thoughts when'

Taani'Umm, Bhai, wo Re.. Rey kahaan hain..

Swayam did not know what to answer.. His eyes filled with tears.. He had to hide it from her' But, it was too late.. She saw his tears.. Now, she was sure something was wrong'

Taani'Bataiye na bhai, Rey kahaan hai.. Bhai, wo theek to hain na.. Aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahe hain'Bhai plz.. Mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai.. Plz, kuch to boliye..

Swayam(not looking in her eyes)'Wo use kuch kaam tha to wo nahi aaya..

Taani'Bhai aap jhoot bol rahe ho' Wo aisa nahi karsakte'Bhai aapko meri Kasam' Plz. Bolo bhai, kahaan hain wo..

Swayam was now forced to tell her everything'He narrates everything to her'

Taani(shocked+crying)'Kaise hain wo ab??? Wo theek to hain na???

Swayam'Nahi Taani.. uski condition bohot critical hai' Doctors ne kaha hai ke he is not responding to their treatments as if he does not want to live anymore..

Taani was crying badly'

Taani(to herself)'Rey ne mujhe bachane ke liye apni jaan tak ki parwaah nahi ki' Itna Pyaar karte hain wo mujhse.. Aur maine ne unhe itni takleef di ke wo ab jeena bhi nahi chahte.. No Rey, you can't do this to me.. Aapko jeena hoga.. Mere liye.. Apne pyaar ke liye.. Aap mujhe chod kar nahi jaa sakte itni aasani se.. main aapko kuch nahi hone doongi..

Taani'Bhai, plz. Mujhe unke paas le chalo.. Plz. Bhai.. Mujhe unse milna hai..

Swayam'But Taani tum..

Taani'Bhai Plz.

Swayam goes and speaks to the doctor' After sometime, they shift Taani in Rey's ward..

Taani felt like someone has stabbed her when she saw Rey in that condition'He was lying on the bed with an oxygen mask and drips on his hand'She felt really numb'She could not see her love in so much pain..She was feeling really hurt..She slowly tried to get up from her bed' With great difficulty, she got up and sat on his bed' She wanted to scream loudly but she could not'Slowly, she took his hands in her and kissed his hands..

Taani(crying)'Rey, ye aap ne kyun kiya' Aap mujhse itna pyaar karte hain ki khud ki bhi parwaah nahi ki' I am sorry, Rey.. I know, I have hurt you so much.. Plz. Mujhe maaf kardo.. Main aap ke bina apni life imagine bhi nahi kar sakti, Rey.. Bohot Bohot zyada pyaar karti hoon main aapse.. Meri jaan ho aap Rey.. Aap ke bina main Zinda nahi reh sakoongi Rey'Aap hi meri dhadkan ho aur agar meri dhadkan ko kuch hua to main Kaise zinda rahoongi'

Rey aapne kaha tha na ke aap mujhse bohot pyaar karte ho, to aapko us pyaar ke liye waapis aana hoga.. Rey, plz.. Don't leave me' I will not be able to live without you.. Itne saal aapse door rehkar maine aapki aur aapke pyaar ki importance jaani'Dil karta tha ke main bhaag kar aapke paas aajaoun.. Rey.. Plz.. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye.. maine aapko itne saal apne aap se door rakha.. But, trust me Rey, Aisa ek pal nahi tha jab maine aapko yaad na kiya ho'Rey aap ko kuch hua to main bhi zinda nahi rahoongi.. I promise ke main aap ko ab kabhi bhi chod kar nahi jaoungi.. Hum ab hamesha saath rahenge..

Saying this, she hugged him tightly' She wanted him to feel her presence around him, to know that she will always be with him and he will have to come back for her'She then placed a sweet peck on his lips which was gentle yet passionate filled with her intense love for him assuring him of her love for him'

Then she laid on her bed just beside him since she was feeling very weak..She was staring at him still holding his hands in her and kissing it madly..Just then she felt some movement in his fingers'She was so happy'Yes, he was responding.. He was coming back to life with the will to live life for her, for his love'

After a few minutes, he slowly opened his eyes regaining his consciousness' And the first person he saw was Her' He was so happy to see her fine.. He did not remember that he himself has just started recovering from the accident.. He was just so relieved to see her'This is selfless love where you don't care about yourself and you always want to see a glimpse of your love to assure youself that he/she is fine.. Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own...

They were holding each other's hands and adoring

each other through their teary eyes..They could not

believe that they were together again'They had

crossed many hurdles in their life just to spend their time together..Rey was looking at her innocent face with teary eyes'Her tears were hurting him'On the other hand, Rey's tears were hurting Taani' Both of them forwarded their hands towards each other's faces to wipe off the tears not wanting to see them in their beloved's eyes'They were caressing each other's faces with so much love..Taani was still holding one of his hands.. Rey looked at their hands and smiled.. he gently placed a kiss on her hands' They closed their eyes feeling each other's love.. Even their silence spoke a lot..They opened their eyes and were lost in each other' They were speaking their hearts out through their eyes telling how much they had missed each other' There immense love for each other made them forget all about their pain the wounds were causing..

Taani wanted to speak to him, to hug him tightly' She again tried to get up from her bed but she let out a scream in pain.. Her wounds were hurting a lot..Rey could not bear to see this'

Rey(angry)'Kya kar rahi ho, Taani' Kya tum theek se bina move kiye bed par nahi reh sakti.. Dekho tumhe kitna hurt ho raha hai'

Taani(smiling)'Ye dard us dard ke saamne kuch nahi hai Rey jo mujhe aapko is haalath main dekh kar hua..

Now, she had tears in her eyes..

Taani(Angry+crying)'Rey, Kya zaroorath thi aapko haan.. Kya zaroorath thi apni jaan ko khatre main dalne ki.. Agar aaj aapko kuch ho jaata to main kaise zinda rehti.. Main aapse bohot naraaz hoon' Itni badi stupidity kaise kar sakte hain aap..maine aapko itna dard diya aur phir bhi aapne mujhe bachaane ke liye itna bada risk liya'Maine jo aap ke saath kiya uske baad to main mar hi jaana..

Taani could not complete her sentence as she felt his strong lips on her soft lips' She was shocked' He was very angry at her.. How could she say that'He was letting out all his frustration in that kiss .. He then kissed her passionately' Taani was too shocked to respond'He quickly broke the kiss'

Rey'taani agli baar apne bare main baat karne se pehle ek baar soch liya karo.. Aur agar phir se kabhi aisi baat ki to abhi jo hua uske baare main soch lena..

Taani was blushing badly'

Taani'Rey. Plz. Mujhe maaf kardijiye.. Maine aapko bohot takleef dee hai na' Main bohot buri hoon..

Rey'Taani tum meri jaan ho.. Main tumhaare bina nahi jee sakta' Main ab tumhe apne se door kabhi nahi jaane doonga.. Aur khabardaar jo tumne meri Taani ko Bura kaha to.. Yaad hai na maine kya kaha tha' Ya yaad dilana padega'

Taani(blushing)'Nahi, Rey.. Mujhe yaad hai.. Yaad dilane ki koi zarurath nahi hai.. Aapki health abhi theek nahi hai aur aap itna naughty ban rahe ho.. Pata nahi baad main kya karoge'

Rey(smirking)'Tumhe sach main jan na hai main kya karoonga'

Taani'REY!!! Stop it..

Just then, the doctor comes inside and he was shocked to see the scene in front of him'He just stood there open-mouthed staring at them blankly..

The gang enters and they were really very happy.. Swayam ran to Rey and hugged him..

Swayam'Rey tu theek to hai na..Tujhe takleef to nahi ho rahi hai na..Mera matlab..

Rey'Haan Swayam, Main theek hoon..Tu aise kyun baat kar raha hai jaise ke tere andar Taani ki aatma aagayi ho..

Eveyone started laughing while Swayam and Taani gave him an angry glare'

Then they all saw towards the entrance where the doctor was still standing open-mouthed with a blank expression'

The gang bursts out laughing bringing back the doctor to senses'

Doctor(surprised)'Wow, That is unbelievable..I can't believe my eyes' You both are recovering so soon.. This is really a miracle..

Rey(Staring at taani)'Miracle of love' Agar main aaj zinda hoon to sirf mere pyaar ki wajaah se'

Saying this he held her hand in his..

Taani(lost in him)'Aur main zinda hoon to sirf aap ke liye'

Everyone cheered them and TaaRey were still lost in each other' Tauji was watching all this from outside' Then, he enters the ward.. Everyone kept quiet but TaaRey were still lost in their own world'

Then'...

So, Guys.. How was it.. I hope you all liked it..If you

did, plz. Do like and comment.. Plz. Forgive me for my

mistakes..

With loads of love

Ayesha.. 😊

Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow dear very nice update loved taani concern for rey awesome update

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