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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 3 such a painful update. Rey hurts himself, taani leaves to save Rey and then both screaming their names I wanna cry but gonna go read next part I hope I see them happy in next part warna 😡
Sorry cant see them in pain 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
The dream was so cute I wish it was true. N yes I Gaye the ended though update soon dear can't wait anymore
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Posted: 12 years ago
VERY INTERESTING... PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg,how could u stop there, please continue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -TaareynSwaron-

Part 2 was nice loved it Rey was rude n then Sharon scolded him good job dear

Part 3 such a painful update. Rey hurts himself, taani leaves to save Rey and then both screaming their names I wanna cry but gonna go read next part I hope I see them happy in next part warna 😡
Sorry cant see them in pain 😊

The dream was so cute I wish it was true. N yes I Gaye the ended though update soon dear can't wait anymore





Thanks a lot for commenting,Tasha ..😛😛
I am glad that you liked it...😛
Will update soon, dear..😛
Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: - CharMarfan1-

VERY INTERESTING... PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.


Thanks a lot, dear...😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -miss_neha-

Omg,how could u stop there, please continue asap


I am really very sorry...😆😆
Will update soon..😉


Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aishapie

Such an emotional update 😭 taarey seperated...n after 2 yrs again dey came face to face n den u stopped it dats not fare u stopped at such crucial pnt but its ok nxt prt jaldi update karna...n thanx for d pm.


I am really very sorry...😆😆
Yup, will update soon...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Aww I was so excited reading the beginning thinking Taarey reunited, but it was only Rey dream 😕
Taarey are so lost and lonely without each other... Love that Rey decided to go to London hope Taarey give in their feelings especially Taani and tell him why she had to leave everyone behind. This Tauji hope he never come back into their life. Superb update I love it plz continue asap can't wait for Taarey to be together


Thanks a lot, dear...😛😛
Yup, I will update tomorrow..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello! friends...How are you all??? I am really very thankful to you all for liking and commenting on this story,,,
You all are truly my inspiration..So, Thank you one and all...
Now, enjoy reading the next part...

Part 5


He turned and the next moment what he saw froze him then and there itself' He was seeing the beauty, his, love, his Taani after 2 years'Today, yes, today she had left him'And, today they were here again..Face to face'She looked so beautiful'With the breeze caressing her face and her hair coming on her face'He was just staring at her'Not able to believe what he was seeing'

Here, Taani opened her eyes to see Rey standing there infront of him staring at her'2 years'She was seeing him after such a long time'Same structure, same face'Nothing had changed about him'He could make any girl mad behind him'Tears escaped their eyes unknown to them'Unknowingly they started moving towards each other..They so wanted to hug each other tightly'Slowly, slowly, they moved towards each other'

The world had stopped for them..They least cared about the surroundings'They forgot about everything else'What they just remembered was their love and only love..

Each step that they took towards each other increased their heartbeat.. Yes, they still had the same effect on each other even after 2 years'After what seemed like years, they reached nearer to each other'

Tears were continuously flowing out of their beautiful eyes'And they both could not see their love crying..So, in an instant, their hands reached each other's face to wipe out the tears..The moment they touched the other, a chill ran down their body..Rey cupped her face'And wiped her tears'Taani closed her eyes to feel his touch..And the next moment he was hugging her tightly'.Taani too hugged him back..They just wanted to feel each other'They missed each other a lot'This one hug seemed to make them forget all their pains, worries'This one hug healed all their wounds which they had got after the separation'It was just magical'It seemed to make them forget about all of their worries..They were just in their dreamland where they lived happily with each other'

After some time, they broke the hug'They still could not utter anything'They were silent'They were speaking through their eyes'They were sharing all their sorrows through their eyes..A silent conversation'Rey leaned towards Taani and placed her forehead on her forehead'They were so lost in the moment that after sometime without their knowledge, their lips were in contact'That was a magical touch'They have been craving for love for 2 years and this touch made them forget everything about their separation'They were really mesmerized'They remained like that till sometime forgetting all their sorrows..Until Taani regained her senses'She pushed him away from her and ran inside the hall'Rey was shocked with this sudden reaction..He could not understand anything'Just a moment ago, her eyes showed so much love and affection towards him and now' Now, why was she running away from him??'What was wrong??He then brushed away all his thoughts and went inside the hall..

Here Taani was still thinking about Rey..


Taani(thinking)'What were you doing Taani??? Why couldn't I control myself???How could I??I was seeing him after 2 years'He is still the same.. Same eyes in which I always get lost'Same face'Same..Stop it Taani'Stop thinking like that'How can you forget the reason why you went away from him'You cannot put his life on stake just because you love him.. You cannot be selfish'Just stay away from him'A lone drop of tear escaped her eyes when she thought of staying away from him but she quickly wiped her tears..

While she was thinking all of this, she collided with someone..

Taani(without looking)'I am really very sorry..

Person'Taani..

Taani now looks up on hearing a familiar voice'It was her Bhai'She had missed him so much'Swayam's eyes filled with tears upon seeing her baby sis'He always blamed himself for letting her go'

Swayam hugged her tightly and said..

Swayam'Taani kahan thi tum..Aise kaise chod kar chali gayi mujhe..Ek baar bhi nahi socha na ke mujhe kaisa feel hoga tumhare bina..Mujhe inform bhi karna zaroori nahi samjha..Kabhi meri yaad nahi aayi tumhe'Main tumse bohot naraz hoon,,Samjhi..

Taani'Bhai pehle saans to lo aur mujhe bhi lene do plz'

Swayam then saw that he was hugging her so tightly that she couldn't breath'

Swayam'Oh! Sorry!

Taani'No Bhai.. I am sorry.. main aapko aise hi chod kar chali aayi..Aapko pata hai, I missed you so much..

Plz. Mujhe maaf kardo, Plz..Bhai..Plz..

She made a cute puppy face holding her ears'Swayam melted seeing this and hugged her again'Till then, the other D3 members arrived..They were shocked as well as happy to see her'

Gang'Koi hume bhi thodi importance dedo..

Taani looked towards them and was really happy..

Sharon was the most happiest person..She ran towards Taani and immediately hugged her..Everyone was shocked at her action except Taani..Taani too hugged her back'

Sharon(while hugging)'Kahan thi tum, Taani.. Jaanti bhi ho tum ke main kitni worried thi tumhare liye..Kitna dhoonda maine tumhe.. But tum ho ke koi fikar hi nahi hai tumhe.. Itni careless kaise ho sakti ho tum'Bolo Taani, tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahi ho.. Bolo na..

Taani'Sharon bha.. I mean Sharon'Aap mujhe kuch bolne do to main bolungi na'Waise I am really sorry.. Mujhe maaf kardo na..Plz..

Sharon smiled at her'

Vicky'Waise Taani tum ab Sharon ko Bhabhi bula sakti ho..

And he winks at SwaRon..and they blushed..Taani was at first confused and then she jumped in happiness and hugged them..

Taani'Oh! God! I am so so happy for both of you..

But, then she composed herself realising that she had to behave.. Now, she was a successful and a famous personality'

At the same time, Manager came..

Manager'Mam, aapse kuch clients milna chahte hain.. So, will you plz. Come'

Taani'yeah, let's go..


Then to the gang-- Excuse me guys..

She went from there.. While going, her eyes fell upon Rey who had been staring at her all this while'

Taani decided to ignore him'So she just left..Rey was hurt to see that Taani was ignoring him'

While meeting the clients, one of the guys hugged her'Taani was uncomfortable.. But, when she saw that Rey was staring at her, she thought that this is the right way to show him that she has moved on and has no place for him in her life..So, she also hugged him back..They were smiling and laughing together..

Rey was continuously staring at her..His blood was boiling'He could not tolerate his Taani with any other person.. Only he had the right to make her smile and laugh with her'He was trembling with anger..He just wanted to go and punch that guy on his face and tell him that Taani is his and only his'Just then, he saw the guy bending on his knees and kissing Taani's hand'


That's it..He could not tolerate more'He tightened his fist in anger and moved towards them..He pushed the guy away from her and held her wrist and dragged her away from everyone, away from the whole world where no one could see her or no one could claim their rights on her except him..He was jealous beyond Zenith..

Here Taani was shocked plus angry..How could he do that??How could he behave like that in front of everyone??Has he lost it???Little did she know that it was his jealousy that has done the damage'

Rey took her towards an abandoned corridor and all the while She had been shouting and screaming'

He pinned her towards the wall and held her tightly by her waist'

Taani(shouting)'What do you think you are doing Rey??Leave me..

Rey'You are asking me'What were you doing in the party, haan??Why were you so close to him??

Taani'How does it matter to you?? It's my life.. I will do whatever I want.. You better don't interfere'And, just leave me.. Stay away from me'


This made Rey really very angry'He held her more tightly and pulled her more towards himself'They could feel each other's breath on their faces..

Rey(hurt)'How does it matter to me???Of course, it does matter to me a lot'Yes, it might be your life..But, you are my life, Taani..And, how could you ask me to stay away from you?? You should ask that monkey to stay away from you??Don't you love me, Taani' I know, you do'Then, why are you doing all this??Why Taani..

Taani was crying from inside..She immediately wanted to hug him tight and tell that she loves him so much but she controlled herself and pretended to be unaffected'

Taani(shouting)'No, Rey' I don't love you..Got it.. I don't love you..I..

Taani was continuously saying that she doesn't love him..But, he could read her eyes, which showed only love and affection for him..He could not understand why she was lying..He came out of his thoughts when he heard her saying:

Taani'I hate you Rey.. I hate you..

Rey(hurt)'But, I love you Taani'

Taani'I hate you Rey..

Rey'I love you'


He said it with so much intensity that when Taani looked into his eyes she was lost'Rey pulled her closer and closer..Now only an inch gap was left between them.. A chill ran down their body..

Rey(with so much intensity)'I love you Taani, I really love you..

Taani(lost in his eyes)I hate you Rey, I'Hate..Love you..I love you Rey'

Rey was really happy'Tears of happiness were visible in his eyes..They were lost in the moment'He held her waist even more tightly and pulled her towards himself..He closed the inch gap in the next few seconds and placed his lips on his soft rosy lips..


They had been craving for this love'He brushed his lips against hers..He first kissed her really very gently'It was a sweet kiss'


He wanted Taani to respond'He was dying for it..He bit her lower lip and she moaned in pain'He then sucked her lips'She immediately responded and soon it turned into a passionate kiss..He was continuously running his hands on her back caressing her smooth skin and she was running her hands through his hair pulling him more closer and closer'They were continuously kissing each other for 10 minutes'When all of a sudden Taani's mobile started ringing'.They were so lost in the kiss that they didn't here it ringing..But, when it ran continuously for some more time'They came back to their senses..They were breathing heavily'Taani realised what she had done'Just then, the phone rang again'She quickly received the call..

Taani'Haan Tauji..Boliye..

Tauji---Taani.. Kahan ho tum'Ab tak to tumhe ghar wapas aana chahiye tha na'You knew that I am waiting for you'Come soon..

Taani'Ji Tauji.. main abhi aayi'

Rey'Taani suno, main..

Taani'Dehiye Rey abhi humare beech jo bhi hua wo sirf ek ghalti thi' So plz.. Don't take it wrong'


She said all this with tears in her eyes..And, though Rey was hurt to listen all this'He had noticed her tears..He understood that there is something definitely that Taani is hiding from him'

Rey'Taani, tumhe such main hamare beech jo hua wo ek mistake lagti hai'Taani, I don't understand why are you doing all this'


He cupped her face and said.

Rey'Dekho Taani mujhe batao ke baat kaya hai..Plz..Hum problem solve karenge..Aur agar tumhe ye lagta hai ke main tumhara saath nahi doonga to aisa nahi hai.. Tum meri zindagi ho, Taani.. Meri jaan ho tum.. Main tumhare bina zinda nahi reh sakta'Tum meri life main sab se zyada important ho..So, plz.. Batao mujhe..

Taani was again lost in his eyes seeing so much care, concern and love for her..


So, friends..How was it?? Did you like it?? If yes, then..Plz, do like and comment...


With loads of love

Ayesha😛

Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago

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