Mohini ff 'New Beginning'

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@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: foram.
oye abhi secong update baaki hai

Jaanti hun!

I'm waiting for u to upd the second part ma'am! =)

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Ria

@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Dusra part jaldi upd kar na...can't wait to read :

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Ria

@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: foram.
done riu now check

Will read it nw...but why's your mood off? :\

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: chand1234
res fr cmnt

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Awww...Meera...kya hua tha raat ko?😕
Meera in saree...awww...she'll look super cool☺️ RED sareee!!! OMG!!! Meera'll be looking so good!
Oye Agantuk...Meera ke baare mein aisa mat socho
OMG!!! Agantuk attending the awrds!!! Yaaay!!! M sho happy 😳 M sure there'll be a Meera-Agantuk moment!

"tu aam kha na gutliyan kyu ginta hai

^^lolzzz🤣

Ahhh...now comes the second part!! Had been waiting for it!!!😳
Dances choreographed by Meera!! Waaah waah kya baat hai!!! <3
Ahaaa!!! Mohit...oops...I mean Agantuk!😆 So Agantuk also goes back stage...hmmm😳
Eeeksss!!! The first Meera-Agantuk love scene!!! Yaaay!!! How romantic!!!
Grrr Uss award ne unke eye lock ko interupt kar diya bt m so happy fr meera...she won!!!
Ohooo...dont fight Miu n Agan
Meeraaa!! Ro mat yaar😭
awww...m happy seeing tht agan turned back n apologized to miu <3 he tooo felt her pain <3
M eagerly waiting for the next upd!!!!
Upd soon!!!: D

aww thanks for your lamba chauda comment
and i want to built feeling and love in them properly but m weak at writing any thing romantic
but will try properly as my ss is based on complete a love theme😭

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Ria

@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Foru just try n describe the romantic scene even more😳

Just imagine that scene going on in ur mind n write ech n ever moment 😳

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: chand1234
Foru just try n describe the romantic scene even more😳
Just imagine that scene going on in ur mind n write ech n ever moment 😳

romantic and me 😆😆😆😆😆
mein to aisa socht bhi nahi but wil seriously try to write
thanku😃

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

accha hua foru story main eye locking daala, coz it brought
Sati days back😊. i know why u made Meera say these dialogues "before blaming people, try to find out the truth". good foru, very very beautiful update. jaldi jaldi update karti rehna 😃, waiting eagerly fr the next update.

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Foru 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...Meera is still sad about the previous days events 😕...was so happy that Meera and Agantuk were going to meet again 😃...hayeee loved the slip and catch scene ...but unknowingly he made her cry 😭...but so sweet of him he went back and said sorry...hope this is the start of a new beginning for them...plz continue soon 😊

Edited by --Ratna-- - 12 years ago

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Sadhana

@SadhanaV

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Wow Foru what an update

I imagined Mouni in that red saree and gold blouse and she looked so beautiful and you have included a romantic scene as well Meera falling and he holding her in his eyes and they exchange eyelocks wow excellent.

Agantuk please don't fight with Meera and am glad that he has started to feel her pain.

Update soon please

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Rayan

@MrToolConfuser

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

To Develope a Love story, Theres a bit of clash is Must. Which went well when There was a Discussion regarding previous night and You've described that nicely between MeeraG and Agantuk sir's Action-Reactions.👍🏼 Now After happening all this, Agantuk sir seem to be A Gentleman and Started to Have a Soft corner for MeeraG.
On the Other hand during Aditi and Meera scene when you Described Her simple yet Beautiful, That was when I've Imagined MiuG from Junoon.. Where her even a Simple smile can melt everyones Heart with her innocence in it.
There also It seems like AditiG and MeeraG known each other well since years that, even from a simple expression AditiG caught that There might be something which may have bothered MeeraG for what she seems upset. Then at Agantuk sir's place, He and His Friend's Dialouges was Brilliant specially 'Mangowala'🤣 and Last dialouge on the Backstage where MeeraG said about 'Blame' was Simply Genius!
Now I'm waiting for your Next update, Do update soon.😎

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