Mohini ff 'New Beginning' - Page 10

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

accha hua foru story main eye locking daala, coz it brought
Sati days back😊. i know why u made Meera say these dialogues "before blaming people, try to find out the truth". good foru, very very beautiful update. jaldi jaldi update karti rehna 😃, waiting eagerly fr the next update.

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Foru 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...Meera is still sad about the previous days events 😕...was so happy that Meera and Agantuk were going to meet again 😃...hayeee loved the slip and catch scene ...but unknowingly he made her cry 😭...but so sweet of him he went back and said sorry...hope this is the start of a new beginning for them...plz continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: Vabs

Wow Foru what an update

I imagined Mouni in that red saree and gold blouse and she looked so beautiful and you have included a romantic scene as well Meera falling and he holding her in his eyes and they exchange eyelocks wow excellent.

Agantuk please don't fight with Meera and am glad that he has started to feel her pain.

Update soon please

Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser

To Develope a Love story, Theres a bit of clash is Must. Which went well when There was a Discussion regarding previous night and You've described that nicely between MeeraG and Agantuk sir's Action-Reactions.👍🏼 Now After happening all this, Agantuk sir seem to be A Gentleman and Started to Have a Soft corner for MeeraG.
On the Other hand during Aditi and Meera scene when you Described Her simple yet Beautiful, That was when I've Imagined MiuG from Junoon.. Where her even a Simple smile can melt everyones Heart with her innocence in it.
There also It seems like AditiG and MeeraG known each other well since years that, even from a simple expression AditiG caught that There might be something which may have bothered MeeraG for what she seems upset. Then at Agantuk sir's place, He and His Friend's Dialouges was Brilliant specially 'Mangowala'🤣 and Last dialouge on the Backstage where MeeraG said about 'Blame' was Simply Genius!
Now I'm waiting for your Next update, Do update soon.😎

Originally posted by: chand1234

I want an upd today!!!

Originally posted by: foram.

oye itni jaldi nai yaar. jis din me bahot upset hoti hun na usi din kuch likh paati hun aaj sad hun upset nahi😆

Originally posted by: samana17

Foru!!! I am sowwyy for being late! Its my stupid classes! I never hav holidays! Even on weekends!😭😭 Aise taise karke kal mila hai as the teachers grew tired!

And coming to the SS! Beautifully written yaar! Kya baat kya baat!

Tu kaha thi ab tak?? I loved the story! So excited for the nxt part! Do update soon!

And oye aajkal sirf ss hi likhti hai yaa you make siggies too??😕😡 Huh?? I don't see 'em these days.

Don't forget to pm me the nxt part.