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Posted: 11 years ago
Foru
Superb update and It is fantastic loved it all the way
especially Agantuk hiding little facts of his meeting with Meera understandable he does not want his family to pry on his feeling for Meera❤️
Hiten his friend backing him up all the way and changing the subject nice
The promotions of his film Agantuk and Meera going to London unware of each other being there and being given rooms next to each other how romantic😊❤️
Eagerly waiting for the next romantic update please make it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadhanamomo

Foru

Superb update and It is fantastic loved it all the way
especially Agantuk hiding little facts of his meeting with Meera understandable he does not want his family to pry on his feeling for Meera❤️
Hiten his friend backing him up all the way and changing the subject nice
The promotions of his film Agantuk and Meera going to London unware of each other being there and being given rooms next to each other how romantic😊❤️
Eagerly waiting for the next romantic update please make it soon


m happy that you liked the update 😃
will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
for chhotu comment...oh! I just jumped on my bed. Now gonna die with this excitement. Will unres after my revival.
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Posted: 11 years ago
"Next update will be nice & logical," what was that for? Yaar, you're belittling your ability, It wasn't bakwas, every story needs a setup, and this was for that thing. According to me, This was Awesome, because, you've described whole situation and left Agantuk Sir and MeeraG's meeting on hold, that's suspense, and It's ingenious!

Abhi back to the story:

Wow! Kitne dino baad you've mentioned Aditi & Prem Chopra together. Toh, yaha story kaab starts?😎

Next, "hiten thought this not the right time to talk to..." Something serious toh nahi? Okay, maat bataiyo, suspense, suspense.😆

And... Awesomewala Part! Promotion ke liye both there, without Heroine & Prem chopra? Awesssooommm! ...next update's intezaar, kaab they'll know, aur their's Reaction! Thanku, Thanku, Thanku, Thanku!!!

Abhi Mainwala part: Thanku, Thanku, Thanku again for the update. Jayada compliment nahi de raha, kyunki jhoota hie toh samajhte ho mennu.🥺🤣 Thanku(s) se samajhlio, update kinna achha tha.🥳🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

Hiten was waiting for Agantuk near the car parking... as soon as Agantuk's car entered hiten moved towards him and helped him open the door...
Agni: hey thanks buddy ( he was in a good mood )
he came out and hugged hiten and said m just so happy today
before hiten could speak Agantuk moved towards lift
hiten thought this is not the right time to talk to him so he kept quiet and followed him
wen Agantuk entered his house..he saw his family was restless and was waiting for him
as soon as he entered all started shooting questions on him about his where about ??
he just looked at them and said "i was at my frnds house...just went to meet him as i was getting bored sitting at home so decided to catch up with old frnd thats it..."
Agantuk thought he can escape from further questions but his mom again asked that "so who are those old frnds that you have to go alone and that you didnt even informed hiten about this ... now Agni was silent as he didnt know what to answer
but hiten as usual came to his rescue "aunty hmm me and agni are damn hungry and agni need to take his mediicnes on time so can we have dinner after that we can talk "
so all moved to dining area for dinner ... Agni said thanks to hiten and all had their dinner and agni before one could ask further question escaped from their and went to his room
he was lying on his bed and was thinking about his meeting with Meera
he was smiling😳
hiten too left for his house.

Hmm...isse kehte hai Pakki dosti..Bestwala friend..Hiten saved Agni from well a huge bombardment😆😆😆
And Meera ke khayalon mein khoye hai Agantuk.
Main Rang SHarbaton ka...
Tu meetein ghat ka paani.
Mujhe khud mein ghol de tu...
To yaar baat baan jani...

Par Baat banegi kab??😆

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Days passed
Agantuk got busy with his movie! finishing, dubbing and then promotions.
Meera was busy with her projects and was also helping prem in his work.

after their promotions in India ..prem decided to promote his movie in London and other places

so he decided to call a meeting and plan the strategy
as the actors were new, concept was new so he thought the movie should be promoted in a grand way and also promote it in international market as it will be beneficial for his movie and also for actors.
Prem asked Aditi to plan the things as after Meera she was the one whom he trusted the most
all were invited for the meeting...
and then after thinking and discussing it was decided that
Agantuk and Pakhi will leave for promotions along with Prem and aditi...

Promotionals and Projects...
Meera dn Agantuk...two half of one whole...sigh
btw Di this time I want also a Prem-Aditi update...I mean un donon ka ek date.😛Please dijiye na...UT ne diya nahin aap he de do..*whinning*pouting*demanding*
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but
destiny had some other plans
Prem couldn't go coz of some other reason so he asked Meera to accompany Aditi
and here Pakhi fell sick and her doctor asked her to avoid travelling.
so now Meera, Aditi, Agantuk and team were the ones to go for promotions .
both Agantuk and Meera were unaware about this

Yay... Pakhi can't go...but No Di...'
AFter today's Episode I want a flirting and smirking Agantuk just to make Meera jealous.😛It will be good.

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the Final day came Agantuk and some left day before and Aditi Meera were on their way
the plane landed and all moved towards their respective hotels
Agantuk and Meera had suits booked in the same hotel
and that to next to each other😉

Hmm...tu yahan main wahan...
Okay for this situation...
Kitne dur sur ho.
Un donon ke raastey.
Mil jaatey hai jo baney...
Ek dujey ke wastey.😆😆😆😉😉
-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-

sorry for the bakwaas and boring update
mujhe kuch samaj hi nahi aa raha ha ki story age kaise badhe
but promise next update will be nice and logical
Agar aap har bar aise he achchi MoMolicious update dene ka promise karti hai to I DON'T WANT LOGIC. Let it be in our real life where we need to be practical...at least let ours dreams be romantic and full with fantasies ...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser

"Next update will be nice & logical," what was that for? Yaar, you're belittling your ability, It wasn't bakwas, every story needs a setup, and this was for that thing. According to me, This was Awesome, because, you've described whole situation and left Agantuk Sir and MeeraG's meeting on hold, that's suspense, and It's ingenious!

Abhi back to the story:

Wow! Kitne dino baad you've mentioned Aditi & Prem Chopra together. Toh, yaha story kaab starts?😎

Next, "hiten thought this not the right time to talk to..." Something serious toh nahi? Okay, maat bataiyo, suspense, suspense.😆

And... Awesomewala Part! Promotion ke liye both there, without Heroine & Prem chopra? Awesssooommm! ...next update's intezaar, kaab they'll know, aur their's Reaction! Thanku, Thanku, Thanku, Thanku!!!

Abhi Mainwala part: Thanku, Thanku, Thanku again for the update. Jayada compliment nahi de raha, kyunki jhoota hie toh samajhte ho mennu.🥺🤣 Thanku(s) se samajhlio, update kinna achha tha.🥳🥳



thank you so much Ray for your encouraging comments 😆😆
and jaldhi Prem aditi ki love story bhi start hogi..
pehle Meera-Agni ka no to aane do😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks rimi for your comment beta 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was a night time...
Meera, reached her hotel...took keys from reception and moved towards her room..
wen she reached her room she was shocked that such a big suite was booked for her..
she placed her bag on couch and
she called Aditi..."Adu i need you asap"...and call was cut
Aditi who had just reached her room... left her luggage as it is and rushed to Meera's hotel to see what happened??

Aditi: what happened?? is everything ok??
Meera: haan, first calm down... sit... breathe in.. breathe out...relax... want some water??

Aditi: pls m worried tell me what happened??
Meera: nothing... its just this place is too big for me alone... and i thought what will i do here... and needed company so thought to call you... and so now you shifting here...
Aditi: what??? for this you called me here asap??? you know i was so worried that i left my luggage as it is and rushed to see you...
and btw we crew members have been allotted rooms in other hotel.. and here its only imp ppl you c...
Meera: haan so what.. you too are imp and m req you Aditi maam to shift to my room...and if you not gonna listen to my req then m ordering you like a boss and this time you have to listen to me...thats it!!!!
Aditi: prem sir has rightly given you the name ziddi miu...
Meera: what ?? wen??? how dare he call me ziddi... ill kill him...😡
Aditi started laughing... and said ok ill stay here let me get my luggage...
Meera: aah, dont bother i had already told someone from the crew to bring your belongings here... till he reach here do one thing...order dinner for two... m damn hungry... and arrange our bags and clothes..till then ill take a shower...
Aditi placed the things...and ordered some Indian cuisines for both...
after some time they both had dinner and they were so tired that they decided to go to bed early...
before sleeping..Aditi made some calls and asked event manager to arrange a meeting...
to discuss promotion strategies...
lastly she called Prem to inform him that all had reached safely and informed him about tomorrow's plan... Prem was happy... and thanked Aditi... Aditi blushed listening to this...
this didnt went unnoticed by Meera...
as aditi disconnected the call...meera started teasing her... and wanted to talk to her regarding this... but aditi said she is tired and wanna sleep...
Meera didnt forced her as she herself was tired..
Adu went to sleep... but meera wasnt sleepy so she went to her room's balcony...
her room was on top floor... full city view can be seen from her balcony... she was admiring the beauty of the city and she looked up at sky...closed her eyes...and thanked her bhagwanji... as she turned to go inside..she saw a familiar face in adjacent balcony...
it took her no time to recognize Agantuk... he was sitting on a couch and was doing something in his lappy...she stood their wondering wat is he doing here...😕
'oh yeah. he is the main lead... he has to be here... whats wrong with me... how can i forget... ' she moved to go in.. but Agantuk saw her and stopped her...
Hey Meera... she turned and smiled... Hi Agantuk...
A- what a pleasant surprise.. u here??
M- yeah, i came on behalf of prem... as he was busy with some other work... he will join us later...😃
A- oh, ok... btw wen u saw me why didnt u called me?? we are frnds right??
M- yeah we are... i thought you were busy so thought not to disturb you..
A- busy and me.. no way... infact i was bored so was playing game in my lappy...
m alone here.. crew is in other hotel... no one is here to talk.. but thankgod that now u are here.. atleast i ahve a company now...
u too must be alone right??
M- yeah i was but i insisted Aditi to stay with me...she was tired so she went to bed early...
A- even u must be tired??? go and rest.. we will talk tomorrow...
M- yeah i am... but i dont get sleep at new place...
A- same here... only i know how i had spend my last night... twisting and turning in bed
M- hehe meera was smiling looking at his expressions...
A- aah dont laugh...😛
M- m not laughing...
A- yes u are...
M- m not...
A- huh!!! girls will always be girls... will never admit anything...
M- hawww what do you mean...(imagine sati's face wen chotu call her nakchadi")😆😆😆

after arguing... talking... both said gdnyt to each other and fell fast asleep...
(this was the first time they were sleeping peacefully... at new place)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aditi woke up early in the morning...she was feeling much better... she saw meera sleeping peacefully... she got up and went to take shower... she was ready in half an hour... she decided not to disturb meera... and allowed her to sleep for some more time...
she looked in her tab for the meeting line up for today..
she called the head of the crew to enquire about others...
she felt relived wen he told that everything is fine...
then she thought that she should order breakfast and then wake her up... wen she was about to call..she heard a knock on her door... she was surprised as to who much have come so early... wen she opened the door she saw Agantuk and waiter with breakfast...
she called them inside...
Aditi: sir you?? and this breakfast...
Agantuk: yeah, i was alone so decided to join u guys for breakfast... i hope its ok with you guys...
and was looking around to see Meera...
Aditi: yes sir no prob... i was about to order breakfast for us too...u can join us...
Waiter placed the breakfast and went from their...
Agantuk: wherez Meera??
Aditi: she is still sleeping... after ordering i was about to wake her up...hmm just give me 5 mins...
and she turned towards meera's room... but she got a call... she stormed out of the room.. while going she said... its urgent i need to go...

Agantuk was left alone..didnt knew what to do...
he was thinking...'should i go in her room to wake her up... no no its bad manners... i should wait... but wait for how much time... ' he was then doing left right left and was looking at his watch... oh damn...😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 time is passing so slow...
an idea striked his mind... he took out his phone and dailed her no in order to wake her up... and his plan was successful... she picked up the call and said hello... she was still in sleep and didnt saw the no.
Agantuk: Good morning miss ziddi...
Meera opened her eyes with shock... her sleep was gone.. and got up and sat in bed clutching pillow as if she was clutching someone's neck😡😡😡
Agantuk: hello????
Meera: how dare u call me ziddi, Prem... i'll not talk to you...
Agantuk: Prem??? xcuse me... m agantuk... your padosi...
Meera: padosi??? why will my padosi call me??? u are you???
Agantuk: Meera, Agantuk here... wake up baba... m hungry and waiting for you for breakfast... come down soon...
Meera: oops sorry😆😆 i thought it was Prem... oh wait... did you just called me ziddi... how dare u Mr.Bose...😡 (she said showing fake anger)
Agantuk: look m waiting for you in your suite so better get up and come down m hungry...
m giving you five mins... if you wont come..i'll eat up everything...and wont keep anything for you to eat...
Meera : what u here... ok ok wait Mr. bhukkad...
Agantuk: what did you just called me??
Meera disconnected the call... rushed to bathroom...took bath... wore a beautiful and simple... red kurta... black salwar... brushed her hairs...and tied in beautiful fish plait...
applied simple make up, kajal and went down...
she took 45 mins for all this... wen she reached down.. she saw agantuk had finished all the breakfast...
she stood in front of him... folding her hands...and looking at him with questioning eyes...
Agantuk looked at her with cute apologetic expressions...
meera smiled looking at him... she couldn'd hold anger for long...
she went to dinning table... and sat oppo him...
Meera: so you finished everything...??? now what should i eat...😡😡😡
Agantuk: its not my fault... i warned you.. but still you came late...
Meera: so wat u wanted me to do... come down in night dress and eat breakfast before taking bath...????
Agantuk: precisely no...
Meera: huh!! and where is Aditi??? and now what will we eat Mr.Bhukkad..
Agantuk: first, stop calling me that.. second i dont know where she is? she just said its urgent need to go.. and third... i have ordered fresh breakfast for you... so chill...
Meera: urgent?? hope everything is fine... and thanks... 😊
Agantuk: its ok (showing attitude)
Meera then tried calling Aditi.. but she didnt picked the call... after lots of trying she finally received the call and said she will reach in 5 mins...
Agantuk and Meera were quiet.. didnt know what to talk...
after 5 mins.. breakfast and aditi both arrived together...
Aditi: sorry, i didnt informed you...their was some prob with crew and i went to sort it out... everything is fine now... she said before meera can ask this question...

so m damn hungry and you two too must be hungry.. lets eat..
Meera: oh its just you and me... Agantuk already did his breakfast...
Aditi: looked at him and asked is it??
Agantuk: no, i returned that break fast as you were not here and meera too took time to get ready so ordered fresh one...
Meera was shocked...and looked at him... surprise, shock, admiration for him all can be seen in her eyes... and she smiled slightly... and apologized to him...
Agantuk: its ok...
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hangover tere FF ka...hangover tere FF ka...😆😆😆

Pakaofication starts!
1...2...3...4...5...

BANG!
Keyaaa FF tha yaar! Mazaa aa gaya!

Ye meera bhi na! Ye nahi ki agantuk ko bula le apne paas! Bechari aditi ko kurbaani deni padti hai! 🤣
And whatte cute name Ji! Miss ziddi! Meri tarah!! 😛😆😆
Bechara agantuk toh gaya! Poori salary ek din mein hi khatam ho jayegi! [If you know what I mean] 🤣

Aditi...oho! Chup chup ke! 😆😆

Meera poori ki poori mere pe gayi hai! Mujhe bhi nayi jagah pe neend nahi aati! 😛
So Mr.hotty bahar aaram farma rahe hai!

Meera is so sweet...😳 phir meri tarah! 🤣

Ok coming back to the topic...so ya as I was saying...(scrolling up)
So ya as I was saying ki meera ko bahar to Aana hi tha...unke pati parmeshwar Jo bahar Bethe hai! 🤣
Jab agantuk lappy khole Betha tha tab mujhe laga tha ki meera ko dekh raha hoga...tune na saari imagination ka kabadha kar diya! 🤣

So ya as I was saying ki haan agantuk aap busy kaise ho sakte haimeera ke bina...haan meera saath ho wo baat alag hai! 🤣

So he was playing game...hmm..khamakha meera ne disturb kar diya bechare ko! 😆😆

My agantuk is sooo sweetuu! 😳😳😳
Calling her ziddi...han bhai gharwaali ko toh kuch bhi bula sakte hai! 🤣

"Dil ke armaan aasuo mein beh gaye..."
Bechara agantuk kitna dukhi hua hoga jab pata chala hoga ki aditi meera ke saath hai...🤣

Khair...koi baat nahi agantuk...better luck next time! 😆😆

Agantuk serials mein itne twists n turns nahi honge jitne tumne le lay honge! Arey meera ke baare mein sochte...automatically neend aa jaati! 😳😳

Ek baat tune sahi kahi foru...girls never admit anything when they know they're wrong! 🤣
Agantuk beta aadat daal lo abhi se!! 😆😆

Shot 2 Take 1...
1...2...3...4...5...

BANG!

Meera is such a sleep lover...meri Tarah! 😆😆

How darw you mera! Mere agantuk ko akela chodh diyaaa!!! 😡😡

But my sweetuu agantuk..always stands on his motto.."meera first" 🤣

Thank you aditi! Thodi der ke liye hi sahi akela toh choda unn dono ko!
Hayeee...my sweetuu agantuk! You're so cute to let go! Meera ke bina no breakfast! 😳😳😳

Hahahahahahahahaha...ohhh meera..what a cute name bhukkad!!! Hahahahahahahahaha...!!!! Maine toh pehle kaha tha agantuk aadat daal lo! 🤣

What a sweet conversation...
Bechari acha hua neend khul gayi...warna bezzati ho jaati! 😆😆

Huh! Agantuk kya yaar! Seriously...I mean 5 min?
Meera ko kya samajh rakha hai? 😆😆

But I'm proud of you meera...45 min...hatts off! 😆😆

I know she was dressed in a simple manner...but then also she must be looking like an angel! 😳

Kya meera! Bechare ko faltu mein daan diya aur ek ghante se bhuka bhi rakha! 😡😭

But hayeee...my sweetuu agantuk...looking with cute apologetic eyes...hayeee mein mar jawan gudh khake! 😆😆

So sweet of him..look meera he'd ppordered breakfast for you! Seekho kuch! 🤣

Welcome aditi! Hamesha galat time pe entry! 😡😡

Ufff...hayeee...mera sweetuuu agantuk! Such a gentleman he's! No breakfast without meera...again meera seekho kuch!

Hayeee...my agantuk! Tight panda huggie to you!😳😳😳

Performer of he FF goes to-Agantuk! 🤣

All in all very sweet...cute..nok-jhok bahra FF!
Eagelry waiting for the next one!
Thanks foru!

And sorry for my such a big bakwaas! 😛


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