Arshi SS ~~ 'A Promise' Part -2 Updtd [Pg 16]

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

This is one story I can't guess anything about...I am so intrigued...bit of tangled relations...why would a father marry a daughter this way and why would she take a 15 year old with her when he has got his own father, uncle and aunt alive and they are very well off as well...there is much more going on here than meet the eye.

It was hilarious when Arnav said we need to sleep together...he seems to be more flustered with Khushi's presence in his bedroom...Khushi seems very cool and practical. Arnav is now willing to get to know his wife better lets see how he goes about it.

Very interesting story...I am so curious to know the answers to all this questions but only when you reveal in the story a it progresses.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by gifttag - 12 years ago

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Simran

@Simran.22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

amazing update!

loved it !
and that line "we need to sleep together" made me laugh!

baby steps are better than nothing!
thanks for the pm and continue soon!

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sizzlingstar93

@sizzlingstar93

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Wow nice update..thnx 4 d update..i loved d relationship bw shashi nd khushi..bcoz i've d same relation with ma aunt & i cal her by her name:-) And regarding d note- don't feel disheartened..may be some of dem r busy wit their exams as it is exam time..ur updates were, are nd will be always awesome:-)

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Monasha

@monasha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Amazing Update...
So Khushi's father ruined Raizada's business so that he can make his daughter marry to Arnav... How sick...
he could have just done the alliance in normal way...
thank God!! Arnav started the conversation with Khushi and allowed her to stay in his room...
So khushi gonna join Office great..
Manorama was unreasonable... she cant say anything about Adi...
update soon

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Paridhi

@Paridhi7250

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Hey... Just came across this SS...

It's nearly half past 3 so i didn't read the whole thing except the dialogues... basically glanced through it...

and have to say it's an intriguing concept you've come up with...

and reading the whole thing is what i'm gonna do first thing tomorrow morning...

hope you continue soon...

nice work!!!

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

awesome

hw is she realated to Adi

y did she agree to this mariiage

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Interesting story! Buddy-ing you! Please PM me !!! :D

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IPK..Jenny

@IPK.Jenny

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Wow amazing ss...i love it...poor Khushi why would her own dad make her 'to be husband' almost bankrupt to marry her...wow poor aditya i wonder what they were talking about the night of Khushi's wedding...and Arnav is confusing Khushi hehe with they only a couple when others are there attitude cos he started a conversation...hehe he didnt want to share a bed haha...Manorama is being unfair...she has no right to say anything against adi...cant wait for the next update...i did email regarding PM's
Jenny x

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Glad to see they are taking baby steps in their relationship, love the flustered Arnav in the end. The way you wrote Shashi-Khushi relationship was amazing, it was like they are friends rather than being Uncle - Niece. So Khushi's father do love her but doesnt show openly and they dont share a comfortable relationship (I am so eager to know the reason behind it but will patiently for upcoming updates 😊) Brilliant story and super duper awesome updates, looking forward to read more.

Thanks for the PM 😊