In Pieces - A Taani OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Thank you so much for liking it. And about the other part.. Will think about it depending upon the response I get for this OS. I do have something in mind but will only write it if I am satisfied with it, which, right now, I am not! 😛 But still, thanks a ton for liking it and commenting!

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

Reserved..

-Edited-

First things first.. Tujhe mujhe itna credit dene ki koi zaroorat nahi thi!! Its entirely YOUR work!!

SHUT UPPP!!! 😡 😆

Ek secret batau? I am so happy that you gave this title!! Love you!! Muuuaaahh!! <3 :*

Mujhe pata tha tu bahut khush hogi with this! Faltu mein hi subah nakhre kar rahi thi!

Shreyu?! This was like WOW!!!! I mean.. WOW!! *speechless*

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TaaRey convo tak I had read before but jab aaj maine padha na.. I was in tears.. Literally!! I mean.. I loved the way Taani stood strong in front of him and answered him back!! Loved the fact ki Rey ke saamne she didn't become weak and usne ek aansu tak nahi bahaya!! I want to see THIS Taani in D3!!! Dunno when they'll listen to us!! Well, negativity nahi laana chahti mai itne beautiful OS me..

Ignoring the negative part I am! 😛 Now that is a part I can take credit of, I guess. Hai na? Tujhe pata hai woh part likhne mein mujhe 1 ghanta laga tha. Bas woh part likhne mein. I really loved writing it!

Then, The dance!! Its was breathtaking!! The scenes sooo well suited with the lyrics!! Gosh!! This song is one of my faves now!! For sure!! This song was like perfect!! I never thought mere bhusa bhare dimaag me yeh gaana iss situation ke liye aa sakta hai!!😆

This song is one of my favs now too, Shivvi! Thanks to you. Even I wonder tere dimag mein itna accha gaana kaise aa gaya? 😕 😆 Just kidding re! Tera dimaag toh kaam ka nikla! 🤣 😛
And about the way I've written it. I don't know kaisa hai. I still find it *yuck*.. Tujhe pata hai main kitna darr rahi thi and, I don't believe it, ro bhi rahi thi 'coz I wasn't able to write it! But I somehow ended up with this in the end! Gotta admit, midnight mein brain bahut acche se kaam karta hai! 😛 😆

The way you described every move.. Her remembering the past.. Her emotions.. Her feelings after remembering the flashback.. everything just touched my heart!! Loved it re!! U literally nailed it!! Dhanyawad! 😳

Thankgod ki yeh OS tune likha.. Mai likhti toh na kisiko pasand aata and na mai Taani ke feelings ko itna beautifully portray kar pati!! Love you for this re!! Muahh!!

Chal chal! Jyada mat bol haan! 🥱

These are my personal fave lines!!

Who said that he loved her but she always was the last choice for him. After his friends, after dance. She would no longer be with him. She knew she would always love him. She couldn't just forget him, could she? But right now, this was it! Her trust was always broken. First, those people who said to be her friends insulted her. Then, her bhai shouted at her just 'cause she spoke the truth. And now, Rey. How much could she face? She decided to live for herself, independent. Without depending upon others. Without Rey. In just those 2 minutes, she made the most crucial decision of her life

And please don't worry. Aaj ke baad I won't come in between you and your passion. I promise you that.

She never realized that she had faced so much! Everytime something bad happened with her she would just go on doing things which would only help others. She never thought for herself, and that was a big mistake..

But now she wished that it shouldn't have ever happened. If at all she knew that she'll have to see this day then she would have done everything to go away from him.. The pain she felt now, was way more than the pain she had felt then.. This was becoming unbearable for her.

She danced to show how each atom of hers was in pain

She danced to show the pain she was feeling as if she walking bare foot on lighted coal.

"Bhai. Please promise me ki kal sab kuch pata chalne ke baad hi aap react karenge. Aur meri wajah se aapke aur Sharon ya aapke friends ke bich koi problems nahi hongi. Please?"

Some new challenges, some new problems or the end to all these problems?

Woah! That's quite a lot! 😲 But I am so glad you liked it re! And honestly, even I loved the ending of the line. The last line you mentioned! 😛

Okay now!! A bit too long comment right?! Sorry for that!! But couldn't help myself!!

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Honestly, even I wasn't expecting itna lamba comment. But nevermind. I love lamba comments! Lambe comments deti reh! 😛

And now, iska sequel fatafat complete kar!! I bet that'll be awesome like this too!! <3<3

Originally posted by: patie

unres

shreya it was awsm dea🤗 smthng different ...it wasnt over emotional, kuch bhi over nai tha 🤢😆

it was just perfect , perfect end ...i could feel her pain 😭...n d song was cherry on d cake my fav song great job girl 😳

Originally posted by: samiha_taarey

awsome...plz yar koi ye palki mam ko vejo...I just so want ki aisa kuch d3 mai v ho... luvd the kathak part...great job