[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 67

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vibhu3


omgg!!! Faria update was as usual fab!! Finally both are moving on in there life it seems really good !! But as I never expected manvi with jermey? I mean she don't know kya what he did to her in his house? Its okay! Coz I guess he paid off that !! Manvi still affect virat n so as he do!! But is this loooveee!! Don't know! But still I feel they both like each other but circumstances are not letting them think about it !!! Disc part was good !! Haha!! Virat called him gay! :-D (Raj) he 😆is sucha sweet boy but Damon n virat both won't loose chance to pull his legs!!! Girls are flat over viru boy!! Lalalallalalalallala! I can imagine him in rage!! Wow!! Loved that drunk virat !!! He followed her unknowingly!!! Please reveal the truth in front of manvi that our virat is innocent..!! As law said !! His intense look in pub was piercing..!!! Who won't feel weak at that time!!! Omgg!! He locked the restroom but kabaab meh haddi !! Lol :P he dragged her to toilet..!! Omgg!! That was sexy!!!but her reactions were unexpected...! Ouchh!! She again broke his toe!!! She should better control her pity lil feets!!!n I'll kill U foe ending it there on terrace scene!! But then also it was way looong update loved it !!😊



She was unconscious when Jeremy used her body rememeber? So she don't remember anything except when she woke up she body was aching :p
Always expect the unexpected :p today is a good day finally I m relived to solve the mystery of future <3 now it's all set to take off!!! If u have patience thn bare with me cuz there is lot to come n more mystery to unreleval :p this is a story of hidden mystery of ONE mistake... N what that one mistake is u will know soon :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooowww amazing update faryyy awww the terrace part wah wah ramdan mubark sorry for not commenting on ur previous updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for late
nd thanks for pm...
Super awesome update
liked it
fab update...
Great work dear...
Faria12345 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
TEASER

Ok very early for a teaser but oh well here it is

M- "aaa... Omg...don't come near me... Take that away from my sight please" running away from her bad boy by the sea shore...

Virat- "it's just a caterpillar..look at it... It's so cuteee" running after her...

M- "no... Ewww ewww ewww... It's eee...VIRAT please throw it alway please... Don't come near me..." running farther..

V- "ok... Stop... See I threw it away.. Don't run.. We can do the morning jogging later..." huffing, catching breath.. Bending down holding his stomach.

M-" u threw it away right?? Let me see ur hand!!" stopped running, breathing heavily

V- "seee.. I did.." showing empty hand
Now wud u come here??? I'm here to enjoy the moments with u n u r running away... Shall I go back too?

M- I hate u... Coming.. She ran toward him.. U make me run all the way .. Cudnt u just threw that away wen I asked u first??

V- "who said I threw it away?" Smirked
M- huh?
V- see... He showed the caterpillar in front of her eyes which was moving on his palm...
M- aaa... She was about to run away but virat picked her up on top of his shoulder

V- and now u gonna say hi to the whole family of caterpillars!!! They r waiting for u baby...

M- wat... Nooo... Let me gooo... Punching his back with her small fist...shaking her leg to get off...

He didn't stop but kept on moving, carrying her on his shoulder.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i wondr wat dis faria is made of! bloody unpredictabl soul! comes out either vt surprises or heart attacks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanhus

i wondr wat dis faria is made of! bloody unpredictabl soul! comes out either vt surprises or heart attacks



I'll give u both surprise n heart attack at the same time ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG This is complete different and unexpected teaser...!!! Waiting for the Update..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
evil puttar see who is here. Yay i knw that virat is nt a culprit i just love damon he is so hilarious nd funny charater bt serious too. Oh so its clear that vihan is viren's child nd he was reading virat's diary. Where is virat nd what did viren do with virat hope u reveal this soon. Virat is out of bars nd it proved that manvi is still virgin. If that is the case then why she was so much scared from virat nd damon could also saw that her tears are nt fake nd if nothing happened with her then why she tried to attempted suicide. Something is really fishy. There is still some bitter truth which are hidden to confuse our poor souls lolz. Virat is mad at manvi nd he had a soft corner for her hmm bt he hates her too na. Coming to the teaser it was sweet nd cute. Bt behind this sweet teaser something is really fishy. Evil putter nw what is cooking into ur evil mind haan. One more thing i want to say that i still hate ur good boy germy *runs* 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

evil puttar see who is here. Yay i knw that virat is nt a culprit i just love damon he is so hilarious nd funny charater bt serious too. Oh so its clear that vihan is viren's child nd he was reading virat's diary. Where is virat nd what did viren do with virat hope u reveal this soon. Virat is out of bars nd it proved that manvi is still virgin. If that is the case then why she was so much scared from virat nd damon could also saw that her tears are nt fake nd if nothing happened with her then why she tried to attempted suicide. Something is really fishy. There is still some bitter truth which are hidden to confuse our poor souls lolz. Virat is mad at manvi nd he had a soft corner for her hmm bt he hates her too na. Coming to the teaser it was sweet nd cute. Bt behind this sweet teaser something is really fishy. Evil putter nw what is cooking into ur evil mind haan. One more thing i want to say that i still hate ur good boy germy *runs* 🤣



Hahah don't hate Jer he is SO SEXYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 u gonnaaa love him!!! N nothing is Cooking inside this evil brain what u read is wat it's done :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
from wer did this kinda cute scene come in yur FF ...am i reading some other FF or is it faria's ff having this scene ???😕

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