[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 66

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Posted: 12 years ago
hello faria update was awesome finally my confusions are cleared yipee and U know the best part of ur updates are ur comments they make me laugh and think deeply good work 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was nice update
pls cont soon
thnx for d pm
ramadan mubarak!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wah wah wah !!mind blowing updatevirman really need to make their minds up about their real feelings thanx a for such an awesome updatecontinue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderfull updt...long 1...so finally love starts blooming ha...gr8...OMG manvi is so dangerous...thnk god she dont a muscles like bipasha...warna aaj to virat ka raam naam satya he hohi jata...lmao...cont soon...byw today i missed my baby vihaan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eeks long update Faria !!! love u for tat muaah !! :DDD but wanna kill u for stopping here !! cliffhanger !! ;( now continue soon plz !!!!
The best part of the update Virat pov !!! 😛 this is amazing !!! really loved it ❤️😉 the feelings of virat manvi gosh mazaa agayaa !!!
tat jeremy !!! why are u making him good boy !!! i hate him !!! mujhe ek min ke liyee uspe yakeen nahi hai !!! 😡 maybe he is planning something !!! manvi is virgin !! pehle bataanaa tha naa !! accha ullu banayaa hamein !!!
yeh kya horahaa hai ??? i thought manvi was going to gave in virat again par nahi Faria kaa dimaag chalaa aur angry manvi appear !!! u noe wat i could imagine all the scene infront my eyes !!! i was like ab kya hogaa !!! stubbornness of vaderaa can be clearly seen n the example was good:D😛 virman again met in Terrance !!! shayad kismat yahi chati hai😉( kismat nahi Farai lol) this is getting more n more interesting !!! where did u get these ideas from !!! the more we read the more we get hook to this !!! N coming to the confusion part !!! here in this update no confusion but last updates some confusion n superdense are yet to be cleared !!! but rite now u have stop at the wrong place !! so continue soon !!! don't tease alot !!! will be waiting !!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Wonderfull updt...long 1...so finally love starts blooming ha...gr8...OMG manvi is so dangerous...thnk god she dont a muscles like bipasha...warna aaj to virat ka raam naam satya he hohi jata...lmao...cont soon...byw today i missed my baby vihaan



Rofl bipashaaa! Ahem then let my boy be the psyco from Murder 2 :p it will be fun good payback! I missed Vihaan too... Will get him soon, hope he stays alive :p
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..!! like the freshnes in their life...but Hope Virat gets a grip on his monster behavior under the effect of alcohol...Waiting for next n Thnks for the PM..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
aayeee hayeee love is bloominggg :)) ohhooo i m sooo happy that they gonna fall in love, i thought there will be nthing like that!!!! maanvi is dangerous man...and about you asking what virat will do, i think he won't do anything because the way you showed his feeling is plainly love and we don't harm them ,to whom we love <3...and i read ur note about what we wanna see in upcoming updates or any scene we wish for the thing i wish for is see-
virat handleing maanvi , woh maanvi koh kidnap karke kahi band karde lol , without harming her much, and how dangerous he can be, scaring her and then punishing her for being with jeremy, all round a man fallen in love deeply and then you show how the love bloom's and and and i hope u understood what i waanna say...and i hope i m not sounding like mental hospital ki patient lol.
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Posted: 12 years ago
omgg!!! Faria update was as usual fab!! Finally both are moving on in there life it seems really good !! But as I never expected manvi with jermey? I mean she don't know kya what he did to her in his house? Its okay! Coz I guess he paid off that !! Manvi still affect virat n so as he do!! But is this loooveee!! Don't know! But still I feel they both like each other but circumstances are not letting them think about it !!! Disc part was good !! Haha!! Virat called him gay! :-D (Raj) he 😆is sucha sweet boy but Damon n virat both won't loose chance to pull his legs!!! Girls are flat over viru boy!! Lalalallalalalallala! I can imagine him in rage!! Wow!! Loved that drunk virat !!! He followed her unknowingly!!! Please reveal the truth in front of manvi that our virat is innocent..!! As law said !! His intense look in pub was piercing..!!! Who won't feel weak at that time!!! Omgg!! He locked the restroom but kabaab meh haddi !! Lol :P he dragged her to toilet..!! Omgg!! That was sexy!!! but her reactions were unexpected...! Ouchh!! She again broke his toe!!! She should better control her pity lil feets!!! n I'll kill U foe ending it there on terrace scene!! But then also it was way looong update loved it !!😳😳😳😛😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SNTG

aayeee hayeee love is bloominggg :)) ohhooo i m sooo happy that they gonna fall in love, i thought there will be nthing like that!!!! maanvi is dangerous man...and about you asking what virat will do, i think he won't do anything because the way you showed his feeling is plainly love and we don't harm them ,to whom we love <3...and i read ur note about what we wanna see in upcoming updates or any scene we wish for the thing i wish for is see-

virat handleing maanvi , woh maanvi koh kidnap karke kahi band karde lol , without harming her much, and how dangerous he can be, scaring her and then punishing her for being with jeremy, all round a man fallen in love deeply and then you show how the love bloom's and and and i hope u understood what i waanna say...and i hope i m not sounding like mental hospital ki patient lol.



Thank u for the suggestion :) u will get something out of it from next 2 chapters :p

Thanks for the feedback!!! <3 appreciated!
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago

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