[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 42

hey u will give me heart attack i will die for sure.

Originally posted by: Faria12345

I told u all not not to hate him... He is sooo cuteee!!!! I wannted to substitute clause with Jer but nah... Don't like clause so psh... Don't hate him he is really gooddd :p *wink*

Thank u for te feedback...appreciated

Yeaah !! Thats Why M patiently waiting fOR his GOODNESS 😛😃

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Raj??? Nooo it's Jeremy who did according to ch 9/10
But no one knows he touched her

Since the beginning virat has been accused for rapinf manvi but no one knows If he did the crime or not :p
Ch 12 will be revealing a big chunk! Prepare urself... U might hate someone :/

u cant make me hate viru boy...coz even i luv bad boy virat... 😉

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Damon Salvatore aka Ian Somerhalder <3 from Vampire diaries *_*

Poor virat I'm feeling bad too :/ rofl ...

Thank u sooo much for feedback!
Banner quote was given by my friend n I so love her for it... Perfect fit for One Mistake <3

Olaaa my confused lost soul minded honey bees!!! How are you all... ??? Good ?? Hmm good... Stay good... Be nice... N stay like that after reading Chapter 12 :p

I have finished drafting part 12 last night.. And just letting u know DON'T KEEP EXPECTATIONs ;) anything n everything will go...I'll be the demon's favorite child n twist the track b4 u know it :p

For all the confused souls... A big chunk of confusion will be resolved n I'm sure it will blow
Off ur head :p lol exagarating lol u know how drama queen I am :p

Honestly speaking idk how it went though.. I wrote that out of frustration n it didn't turn out good :/ was gonna write something but wrote completely different thing.

And I'm not updating untill next week! Y cuz I wanna stay alive... Koi Kyu khud ki supari dega? I don't wanna die now lol...

Haha n yes no promo like I said. Gonna be evil n u gonna loveee me I know u dooo!
U seee u get advantages from me for being impatient... N I get advantage with my evil mind hahaha :p too bad!

Faria,, make ur last wish and tell me how u prefer to die..

WHAT MORE CAN I EXPECT FROM >>>YOU ...You will Do more Bad to Viraat and Maanvi ...I know ...

Originally posted by: virmanhus

so u did it huh?? u destroyed my mannu!!! u are planning something huge.. dere's no need for u to subject manvi to such a state,, if u are doing so den dere must be a damn reason... again its confusing!! judging by all watever happend, jeremy has never made a move before the very incident at manvi (so still the two hours & garage incident is a confusion),, dere's something hidden between virat & manvi, if not she cant be dis mad at him even after virat tactfully cleared his side & her side of mistakes of the fiasco.. & um not ready to believe dat she's d one who complained.. Jeremy's entry in manvi's path is another hidden mystery.. their first encounter vl reveal things.. and if manvi believed on jeremy's words, i'll say dat she's a dumbhead!! she must know looking at her state dat jeremy is not good,, if she trusted him, kill her,, no problem!!

and jeremy is playing his role well.. he's planning something huge & its all based on some huge past in virat's life...

Miss. Faria is never tired of creating confusions,, who's kristina?? she's interested in Virat?? she's done vt Jer?? and Jer was in NYFA, so was Lisa, seems Kristina too.. so something huge is hidden,, why is so much hatred for virat in jeremy?? and most importantly ''one wicket is down, 2 more to go'' who are the two more???

its true its all confusing, but looking back ur story i must say dat u are a PERFECT writer!!! u are damn awesome, tactful, unpredictable & full of adventures!!! the way the story started, no one would expect such a phase in the story.. it was all fun before, now its all action filled, thrilling, confusions filled & full of excitements.. wow!! u are rocking faria..

and i agree u are not killing virat, its jeremy.. so much of hatred??? wait,, kristina said dat Jer's no longer in NYFA so was he terminated,, & the reason behind is virat?? something huge about virat and raj.. yes Jer once said to Raj dat virat is not dere to save raj dis time,, so something is dere to do vt raj, virat, NYFA... something unpredictable... if um totally wrong, stop laughing now,, its all becoz of u,, i cant judge this story but i badly wanted to know where u are taking it..

hopefully viren vl enter,, however u'll save virat.. but manvi??

''she died 2000 deaths at once'' dats beautifully said!!! poor girl.. for now it seems nothings wrong in her, she has nothing to vt jeremy but it seems she has unknowingly helped jeremy in his moves or jer cleverly used her to get to virat.. (change the precap or tell me its nothing to do vt manvi)

Lisa is helping virat!!!! wat are u doing faria??? brother is virat's enemy & sister is virat's savior??? confusion at its peak!!!!!

really looking forward for next chap as it according to u vl be revealing about Jeremy..

according to ur plot, cant blame u for subjecting virat & manvi to such states, as this is wat is driving the story,, but yet thanks u are away from ur readers,, we dont have to end up in jail..

''Is that even a Rape case or just a trap?'' i'll say its a trap,, reveal everything soon

and yeah amidst all the problem, one thing dat makes me happy is the banner.. its the one thing dat's giving me the hope dat virat & manvi of 'one mistake' vl be virman at the end

i have given lot of stupid guesses here,, all can be wrong,,, but u are STRICTLY prohibited from laughing!!!!!!!!

anyways hats off to the evil writer in u!!! dat evilness is really a recipe dats adding immense beauty to 'one mistake'..

- I destroyed mannu lol I did u see believe in "GO extreme Without mERCY"

-Ssshhh secret : u will know Wat happen behind the garage :p

-Nothing is hidden btwn virman..Everything is clear which is pure hatred


-Y DON'T U ALL BELIVE ME?? BELIVE ur writer man... *dont hurt my feelings* ROFL

-she is not a pinhead just u know... Heyyy don't make my Jer a bad boy.. He is awesomeee LOVE him!
U said kill her? U sure cuz I can do that u know :p think b4 u ask :p

- Jer is sweetheart so he will play his role right n u gonnaaa loveee himmm

- who is kristina... A sexy beautiful lady :p rest info will be on part 13

- Incase u didn't notice! Read ch 10 Jer bar scene comments n thn read ch 11's Lisa entry at hospital :) u will find ur answer.

- y do u think Jer hates virat? He didn't say he hate him :p nor did anything that shows he do... Stop blaming my good boy >.< pagal sab lmafo *runs*

-wicket ummm u will know in ch
13

- eeekkksss thank u for the complements muaaah hugs


- killing virat or not... Of course I love my boy... Killing him tauba tauba pagal hai kya :p

- lol he is on NYFA baby :)


- virennn haiii!!! Ps: today is his IV n I'm flying today' but I won't repeat my mistake n post ch 12

-''she died 2000 deaths at once.. Ehehe I like that line too. Abhi upar uski supari de thinnaaa thn y soft corner? >.< kill her :p

-what am I doing? I'm making my story interesting :p

- rape or trap! I won't answer it u will figure out. Just will say BELIVE what u read :p

- I'm laughing at myself for making that mess :/ clean up time

N yesss I alwys look forward to ur big wala comment u know why cuz u make me do extra work n I do more twists in the tale :p
Muaaah tight hug

Originally posted by: virmanhus

Faria,, make ur last wish and tell me how u prefer to die..

ur warning doesnt sound good

if u make me to hate manvi,,, den u are dead!!!

i became a new bie vt my 100th post for u

and now um a senior member vt my 200th post is again for u!!!

THANK U!!!

Wat a kamini double century mere post pe hua n threatening me to murder me!
My last wish will be LET ME MEET KARAN TACKER n KUSHAL TANDON even it's for 5 seconds I won't mind hahah :p