[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 39

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shona_virman

Hello!! 😃 well i'm still not being good at commenting bt oh well i'm reading 😛 you hav too much going on dude dont you urself get confused? This happens when EHMMBH meets TVD or let me guess you'll maintained sum diary to note the events right? 🤣 ok bad joke bt sachi itna sab kuch happening all together... Appreciate ur 'story mein twist' skills Faria [(Y)] *claps* i certainly dont think virat did anythng... It was that bad guy jeremy who molested Manvi twice now >.< ok may be that night he closed the shutter of that garage and Manvi thought virat is back and he lets her think that and molested her... I'm guessing he and Kristina hav sum old issue wid virat which jeremy wants to take revenge of... Seriously bad guy >:( poor virat :( hey btw i've been reading abt you being fond of bad boy virat bt the virat in ur story is a sweet bechara dont ya think so? 😛 anyways hope this thing gets settled soon... Damon is a smart lawyer pehle hi guess kar liya k trap hai lol... Hmmm i'm looking forward for viren's arrival.. He cmng will lead to virat Manvi knowing they are relatives... Then may be the vadhera's decide to get virman married coz of their khandaan ki Izzat? 🤣 ok ok i'm guessing too much... You are gona giv us the old rivalry of jeremy and virat for now... Chalo jaldi suspense open karo yaar... I doubt that though coz of ur evil mind and yeah you've got ur TVD characters too so... Anyways.. Keep writing... Thanks for updating :D




Hahah yes I do keep a diary or else it's damn confusing >.< sometimes hit my head for making a mess out of blue :p but thn figure out a way to solve the mystery...

Virat did or not... I wud say don't keep expectations cuz my mind is reality evil.. Anything can happen :p or shall say happened :p

For My bad boy fever :p u will get one.. After all it's my forte ;)

TVD ya... Lol needed something to connect... :)

Viren entry... N Wat he do will keep that as suspense.. When bhai is here y fear :p

Mystery revealing slowly steadily ... This chapter was just a little dose of it.

N thank u sooo much for the big comment reallyyy appreciated ^___^


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shona_virman

Let me tell you after AGES!! Literally aftr AGES i've typed that big a comment and i'm surprised 🤣



Thank u thank u thank u! Makes me extra happy when u guys give big comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
HaIII Faria,

Jeremy's character makes me sick. But I get it, I just wrote a part like this for my update and everyone hates me 🤢. They don't even know the whole story?!!? I don't even know what to do! I keep thinking I should just stop writing 😭

I can't throw chappals cuz I feel your pain and the message you sent out about prayer etc being the solution to unsolvable circumstances is amazing.

Thanks so much, as usual awesome update! Hope Manvi finds out about Jeremy soon and everything's ok with Virat 😃

Oye, what do you mean do you think Virats still innocent???!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vibhubebo3


faria Kushal tacker!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡What U exactly want?????? How can U be so evil??? I mean!!!!!!!!! How can U do this to virat..!!! N what about manvi????? I really don't know what is In ur mind !!!!! Kaminiii what was the story n where ur evil mind took that !! ROFLMAO😛U R such a kaminiii...!!! Evil mind !!! Ahhaha!!! But I still loved the the update !!!! 😲I don't know what else I should say but jaha panatussi great
ho!!!!! 😆



What I exactly want? A lot of things...
How can I do this to virat? So can make him evil like meee ^___^
How about manvi? Psh I care less ... She put a hand on my boy I will not let her rest in peace :p just saying

Thanks for liking the update appreciated :))

Jahapana tusi great ho... Lol I'll be polite n give u heart attack on next chapter :p hehehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh teri ..I forgot to say GET WELL SOON VIRU!

🤗❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumana123

Ohkkk Plain ...My Mannu...is ...In Deep Deep Deep Trouble ...cause of you😡😡😡...And I dont even know what to react ...My Viraat is in ...Hospital and some inject over dose of Anesthesia ...And You still Feel I wont Kill You ...😡...Screw that Jeremy...


I m still not done with my anger ...Save Viraat and Maanvi ...For God Sake



Keep up the anger u need some practice b4 u finally blast at me :p muaaah
No don't screw Jeremy he is so handsome looking .. Tch tch...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mamaian-Afshan

Firstly i wanna kill that jerky jeremy
then second is u for so much twists n turns nw clear them very soon! Wanna knw who is jer why is he doing tis all to virat! N did really rape happened or nt? Urgh so much plotting
btw i just loved that u brought damon salvatore here eeeks my two hotties in same ff!
Kushal n ian <3



Tch tch don't kill Jer >.< I like him lol :)
U can't kill me I'm too far n I can't die eheh

Plotting plotting plotting my head is spinning actually poor me how will I fix this.. Too many mess >.< screw me..

Ian somerhalder haiii once chance to make him closer haha:p
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .aliyah.

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">HaIII Faria,</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">Jeremy's character makes me sick. But I get it, I just wrote a part like this for my update and everyone hates me🤢. They don't even know the whole story?!!? I don't even know what to do! I keep thinking I should just stop writing😭</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">I can't throw chappals cuz I feel your pain and the message you sent out about prayer etc being the solution to unsolvable circumstances is amazing.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">Thanks so much, as usual awesome update! Hope Manvi finds out about Jeremy soon and everything's ok with Virat😃</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">Oye, what do you mean do you think Virats still innocent???!</font>




Ha IKR everyone hates me ... Feeling isolated rofl..

Don't hate Jer he is handsome ^___^ lol

N y do u all think Jer did it? Y not virat? Y he is sane? He can be the bad boy :p hahaha

N for the philosophy part I was Being kushal only :p

Thank u sooo much for ur feedback appreciated
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .aliyah.

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Oh teri ..I forgot to say </font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="6">GET WELL SOON VIRU!</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">🤗❤️
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Will pass ur regards to him lol :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice😊😊
i am confused😕😕😕

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