[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 27

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Jannat94 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Faria super long update and it was amazing
with twist n turn
poor soul or confused soul... i dnt understand what happen
waiting 4 ur next part... update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww wow wow wow wow amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
FARIA I TRIED MY BST NOT TO CRY ON D HANGING SEC . BUT YOUR DESCRIPTION OF EACH EVENT, EVERYONE'S FEELING N D ATMOSPHERE ABSORBED ME N I CUD C EVERYTHING RITE IN FRONT OF ME.
U KNOW WAT I WAS SWEATING READING DAT SECTION AS IF NOT VIRAT BUT I'M GONNA B HANGED .U WRITE SOOO WELL .
CONTINUE SOON. UNFOLD D MYSTRY I M DYING FOR IT NOW.WHO IS DAT B*****D JEREMY?
WAITING FOR UPDATE.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria12345




More thn u hate me I hate myself ! I cried buckets writing that last section! God so mean of me but of well it has to be there cuz there is longgg way to go b4 it turns out real :)'

U know Wat I was gonna post MOREEE like I have one more section that resolves the confusion but Eeeh u not getting it anytime sooon



turns out to be real????????? 😲 are u seriousss šŸ˜† well we will see what u have more in store...u had more and u didnt posted it 😔 kkk will wait šŸ˜‰ and i knwo im again gona get a long one thanks to my new love
ps: ur phone rofl🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vamps1996




turns out to be real?????????😲are u seriousssšŸ˜†well we will see what u have more in store...u had more and u didnt posted it😔kkk will waitšŸ˜‰ and i knwo im again gona get a long one thanks to my new love
ps: ur phone rofl🤣



Turn out real = at age of 80/90s he is gonna die na :p but I can always change that :p hahaha

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey faria sry fr commenting so late...
jst read da last 2 updates...
haww u sent virat 2 jail😲
hahahaha i loved da way virat was asking her 2 requestšŸ˜†
da garage scene was so intense...
oo an unknown person nw...šŸ¤”
nd lisa knws virat...
oh god im so confused nw.. šŸ˜•
omg u made me cry wid dat scene😭
i really thought u killed virat...
thnk god u didnt...
bt yeh jeremi aur manvi ka kya chakkar hai...
finally viren is cuming fr his bro...
waiting fr da next part eagerly...
plzz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm..
nd im really sry fr commenting so late...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria12345



Turn out real = at age of 80/90s he is gonna die na :p but I can always change that :p hahaha


u better not change that šŸ˜† lol cani say somethig again :-p chado i will say UPDATE SOON *runs away in full speed* šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

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u better not change thatšŸ˜†lol cani say somethig again :-p chado i will say UPDATE SOON *runs away in full speed*šŸ˜†



Won't update soon but will give a promo soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

My god super long updt...n must say it was wonderfull...n remos words This.Is.Super.Hit..*wink*

i dont understand wats wrong with manvi? She is the only 1 who knows very well that virat didnt commite any sin at all...is thats b****** blackmailing her? Is it bloody revenge game? N manvi is just puppet? Ohh man all revenges r not sweet...But again y she is so weak, she is not like this...y she is behaving so weird...she never let anybody to rule her life...n most importantly wat happend that night with her?...i know i m the most confusing person on this earth...lolzzz...my Q bank dont know the end...:p

hwww u know i was abt to stop reading thats heart piercing part...i was chocked...my eyes were wet...n i was cursing u like anything...but then mera tubelight jala...n i laughed...ask y?
Ask...
Ask...
Then i rememberd...are ye to faria ka story he...the girl who madly in love with virat n more with kushal...naaa she wont let this happen, it must b a virats nightmare...(n my tears r nothing but effect of farias talent)...n c u didnt prove me worng...(but pls dont do this frm next time haaa...aisa heart attack khake itni jaldi marne nahi muze...abhi to shadi bhi nahi hue he yar) :p...hashhh then i feel so relieved...phewww...but seriously that part was really very touchy n emotional...

pls clear manvis POV also...want to know her tragedis also...n more over want to c her in her sherni avatar...cont soon...i loved this long updt treat...its so yummyyy...lolzzz...cont soon soon soon




Thank u sooo much for ur feedback!
n sorry for making u cry not my fault tagr bitchy brain of mine does it >.<
Manvi's POV yah working on it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar little bit confusion
i hope it will be clear in next part
ahh it's just a dream
but u made me cry😭
now wat will manvi do😲 poor girl
hope viren comes soon😊

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