[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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At first u make me feel that evrythn will be alryt nd ur evil mind doesn't let that happen 😔

I thought evrythn will be alright... pshhh there you go evrythn cannot be alryt 😳

you are very bad eh... first u make me smile nd that smile fades away after reading the promo COMPLETELY 😆 😛

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Originally posted by: kushal90
At first u make me feel that evrythn will be alryt nd ur evil mind doesn't let that happen😔
I thought evrythn will be alright... pshhh there you go evrythn cannot be alryt😳
you are very bad eh... first u make me smile nd that smile fades away after reading the promo COMPLETELY😆😛
Update when u can nd do pm me😃

U r cuteee :)

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Hi Faria... Let me start with a sorry.. I m really sorry for late. Was busy with work. For me two updates at one time. And as u know both are long.LOL. i would never stop saying that i guess. Coming to the updates both are awesome. U changed font, size and everything. It was looking good. Thanks for the pms..

Stay Well...

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Originally posted by: helina

Hi Faria... Let me start with a sorry.. I m really sorry for late. Was busy with work. For me two updates at one time. And as u know both are long.LOL. i would never stop saying that i guess. Coming to the updates both are awesome. U changed font, size and everything. It was looking good. Thanks for the pms..

Stay Well...

I will accept the apology when u update the Fake Finaceee !!! U better update soon like for real! N don't worry u r fine n thanks muaaah

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Part 9!

Hi lovely honey bees... How are you all??? Hope u all r fine.
First of all, thank u all for all the feed backs.. appreciated all.
It's really overwhelming to read ur comments about how u feel about the story or Wat u want from the story.. Boosts up my moral so a tight hug for that.

This update is kinda messy ...it goes back to Flashback n present on n off.. So I would recommend you to read it slow and pay attention.. Hope u don't get lost cuz i was :/
There was one section which I HATED the most write.. Lol cried a lot.. But psh it didn't turn out good 😭

Hope i manage to clear all the confusion that u all had for previous update. Tried my best to explain if I failed thn sorry in advance... What to do it gets hard each time I start to write :/ so feel the pain of CVS! Lol ok u all go ahead n read I will see u later...

Muaaah..

Recap:
- Virman face off! Virat got a slap from manvi and in return he kissed her, however it was just to regret for his previous action :p
-Unknown person's entry
- virat has been accused for molesting Manvi and rite now he is in jail.
- manvi is nowhere to be found.

8 a.m L.A police station

V- virat was sitting on the floor... Staring at one direction..

An officer opened his cell n got inside.

"you wanna clean that up?"
A husky voice disturbed his thought and he looked up.

Lisa- this is not your house! You make a mess, u clean it. So buck up n clean it up.

V- didn't say anything and continued his silent treatment.

*he threw the food away*

Lisa- walk toward him n bend down, "get ur ears fixed when we have regular check up session! But rite now if u don't clean up this mess, then I will make sure you get our best service..do u know na how we love to treat criminals? ", she said with a straight -angry- face

V- looked at her eyes with a deadly glare.

L- don't make me pluck out ur eyeballs... Stop staring n do as I say .. Just remember i have no mercy for molesters.

V- his blood boiled hearing the name "molester"
He stood up n said in a angry tone "do whatever you can, I don't give a F to ur warning. And I'm not a molester so don't call me that."

L- she was shock by his out Burst but she chuckled knowing the fact that it was expected from him.

"you got guts.. Hmmm Impressive but don't try that with me " she hold his collar and pinned him on the wall"

V- he had a straight face , hold her fist n removed from his collar.
"I'm really not afraid of you. And you can't touch me unless judge declares me as criminal. What do u think I don't know law?
L- she narrowed her eyebrows

V- He looked at her badge and said "inspector Lisa Gilbert, it was nice meeting you but next time find someone else to scare with ur deadly warnings"

L- she released her grip n grinned at his antics.
You are such a dushbag Vadhera.

V- n u r such an idiot Gilbert..

L- screw you
V- u can't, u r not carrying a screw driver

*Both chuckled*

L- Should deserve a hug after this melodrama? Don't I?
V- rolled his eyes
L- pout " Icome on its been 3 years since I have meet u. Or shall say try to hit on u?

V- but u weren't hot enough then n not now either So I let u go.
L- oh shut up... I'm not like those cockroach looking girls who Starve their self for a size zero figure...

V- oh ya? Then y did u join NyFa in ur freshmen year?

L- joining that fantasy world wasn't my choice I was forced to do so. I think you forgot , I joined cuz my mom forced me.. Remember?

V- yah, but you had to be a bitch n crush her dream.

L- hey ..it's good to let it go cuz when someone forces you to something you won't achieve what they want you to achieve cuz it won't be from ur heart. ...

V-he kept silent.

L- Well u should be glad, if I didn't back out that time n be the bitch then u wasn't gonna get a special treatment here.

V- any special advantage u getting for letting me stay here? Trying to hit on me again?

L- ha ha very funny, well I got more handsome boy then you... see.. She showed him engagement ring.

V- aaa congratz and hugged her... But unlucky guy, u r a tough girl to handle.

L- not really he is my boss *wink*

V- easy way to go baby..

L- ahem.. Inspector Lisa Mr Vadhera behave. And they stood apart.

V- behave.. He chuckled. I guess I got my punishment for behaving .. Didn't I?

L- Mr. Vadhera is giving up?

V- that word doesn't exist in my dictionary.

L- that's what I thought. Now tell me what happen exactly .. I mean how the hell u got into this mess...and it's not a drunk case either it's a Rape case! And the victim is missing too

V- Manvi is missing?
L- hmmm..
V- wait then who filed the report???

** IM Surprise no one ask me that question :p lol **
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L- manvi did
V- what the hell? How dare she filed a case against me when I didn't even touch her??
L- virat I don't know the details... Other inspector is handling the case and he had to leave for the night cuz his kid was sick n was being hospitalized. Plus u were knocked out too so we thought of wait till the morning and proceed the case thn..

I know it's unprofessional n we r sorry for it.

V- You r fine. If I can stay here for more thn 12 hrs thn I can manage couple hours too.

Meantime her paige beeped n she left for her duty, abiding him.

V- manvi filed a rape case against me when I didn't even touch her except... But that doesn't make a rape scenario... And what's the proof that I did it?? Where is the evidence n the witness?On top of that she is missing...
This is screwed up..

His head was spinning in a circle thinking about the points... This girl will be the reason for my death...

Meantime... Raj was wondering around, looking for manvi n then finally he saw her sitting on a bench near Mulberry park.

He stopped his car and ran to her.

"Oh manvi... Thank god I found you..", Raj said with a relive

"r you ok??? Where were you?? And what happen between U n virat? I mean everything is so messed up... He is in jail and you disappeared.. Please tell me nothing bad happen"

He was sweating alot.. this boy is actually a good friend. A friend in need when a friend in deed. He didn't rest once since virat was in jail. He was searching for Manvi like crazy...
Can u find a friend like him in this 21st century ? Where people always see their advantage first and then think for others.
Well virat is no less then that he found a twin brother in him so since they became friend they are known as shadow :p

And why am I telling u this? Cuz u need to know in future it will reflect back ;) but u don't have to worry bout that.

Continue reading...

"manvi... Hey speak up", he tapped her shoulder with concern.

She Came out of her deep thought n replied "I'm okey"

Raj- thank god.. Now please come with me my boy is in jail since yesterday n I can't wait to bring him back.

M- was silent

R- khaha kho gayee?? Chalooo.. He literary dragged her n both zoomed away

L.A Police Station

Raj enter the office with a big smile on his face.. While manvi kept silent.

Raj- officer! Get my friend out rite now.

Lisa- do u think this is a toy machine? Reduce your tone or else I will lock you up.

R- poor boy gotover excited ..
he sighed n said "no Ma'am, I know where I stand. But you don't know whom I brought with me. "

Lisa- confused.

R-This is Manvi Chaudhary, the victim. And she wanted to take her complain back.

Lisa- she smiled, R you sure?
Miss Manvi Chaudhary you wanna take your complain back?

M- nodded.

Lisa - with a smile she said "well then sign this paper which says I Agree that Virat Vadhera was not guilty.

And if you change your mind incase thn sing this which states "by all means Virat Singh Vadhera is guilty"

Till then I bring back your friend.

Raj- hugged her tight almost crushing her bones.
Thank you manvi... God bless you.

Virat's Cell

Lisa- ahem.. She cleared her throat n said "vadhera I guess this place doesn't suit you well"

V- looked at her in confusion.. "what you mean"

L- show me your smile. The Victim is here to take her complain back.

V- what? He looked down n a wide smile flashed on her face. He said Thank you.

L- don't thank me .. Thank that girl.
V- I will... This made him so happy that he forgot all the hatred for manvi... He wanted to give her a bone breaking hug even a Sweet kiss if she allowed :p
Finally he don't have to spend the vicious nightmare.. His career is not in line any more... Now he can make his family proud and live a peaceful life...

L- you wanna stay here?

V- what.. No way.. I'm so done with this shitty place.

L- then come on.. Or else this cell won't live you forever.

V- he chuckled and walked with her..

Desk area.

raj- he ran n jumped on virat giving him a tight hug..."viraaat..."

V- wow...Gay maat ban... Control

Raj- oh shut up... Do u even know what I have been thru? U gotta pay for all my hard work.. Has been roaming around like a lost soul.. Pheww now finally can relax. I want a party a big one..

V- u r crazy.. Will give one for sure...

Raj- u better... N yesss now I can crump this paper n shove it on princy's mouth..

V- what? What's that?

Raj- your termination letter ... Aur kya...

V- his heart skipped a bit..

Raj- oyeee chill maar, abb iski koi jarurat nehi...

V- he smiled n said "yeh"

R- let's go I'm so hungry..
V- let's go n they move forward and stood in front of Manvi.

Lisa- hey wait... You can't go...

Both virat and raj looked at her with a confuse look..

L- Miss manvi you didn't sign the paper.

Raj- phewww officer u scared me.. Manvi go sing the paper.

M- she looked at him n walk toward the desk and signed the paper.

R- now we can go? Let's go virat..

L- miss manvi???

M- walk toward Virat n said "officer I don't want any mercy for this bas***d. Do everything possible to make him suffer n Rot in the cell. In fact I want him to hang till death.."
She said each n every word in pain.. Her eyes was red... If she can she was gonna murder him rite away...

V- didn't blink once while she was talking.

M- she walked by him.
V- he hold her wrist n brought her back to the same spot where she was standing a second ago.
"Thank you" and he smiled.

M- have a good life inside.

V- I will.. You have a great life too... And he gave his last sweetest smile and walked back to his Cell.

M- that left her amazed.. There was a lot hidden in that smile...
But she couldn't figure out...
She felt like he was a lifeless body with no heart. Someone torn his soul n burn into ashes.. Could see a lifeless ,hopeless, dead person...

But why she is thinking that after whatever he did that last night.. This kind of human should not allowed to live... They should be punished until their last Breath.

Her thoughts were broken by a voice..

V- "Raj... Your party is being postponed... May be in next life will give one. Take care buddy and thank you" saying That he disappeared from the venue.

R- cursed himself for bringing manvi here... He couldnt take the fact that he just lost his friend ... Forever maybe... So he just walked away...

Manvi ran outside and started to weep... She couldn't take it anymore.. Whatever respect she had for him is gone now... She don't wanna see his face... She hated each n every moment whatever they had spend together... Good or bad she hated all... Last night he crossed his boundary... Now it doesn't matter who the the hell he was... He tried to ruined her dignity.. Ripped her soul apart n pierced her heart out... Is there anything more she need to hate him more ? Guess NO...that's it.. She had enough now... From now on No more Virat Vadhera will be existing in her life.. she wanted to start fresh and move on. But after she punish him for his deeds. And now she is determined to make him suffer for life.. By hook or crook.

Parking lot.

Raj- what did I just do?? Urghhh manvi u r so dead.
He turned around and search for her...

She was leaning against a car n was thinking...

Raj- Manvi Chaudhary... What the hell do u think of urself huh??? This is all your f n plan! What's your problem with Virat huh? Y u r after his life??? Do u have any idea what have you done??? Answer me damn it.

"lower your tone Raj" someone said from behind.

Manvi looked up and raj turned his head toward the sound.

UNKNOWN person spoke " first know the facts before jumping into a conclusion. Your friend deserve to be In jail. After all, everything has a expire date n ur play boy's game is over! So don't be a retard n get into this mess. Let him suffer for his deeds."

Raj- shut the F up.. He hold his collar.

UNKnown person- hold Raj's fist and said "don't u dare to do that Raj, ur crappy friend is not here to save you."
"Don't forget, Jeremy Gilbert can smash u like an ash without a flick..." he said in a angry tone.

Raj- controlled his anger and he let him go.

Jeremy- he smirked..
"Come on sweet heart lets get out of here. Don't need to see this dork's face" He offered his hand to manvi. She hold it n they left.

Raj- jack ass.. He tighten his fist to suppress his anger.
Wat the hell is manvi doing with Jeremy?? She just came 2 days ago.. How come she know that ass? Something is fishy gotta figure that out. So he decided to follow them.

Wait what??? Faria you are confusing us more.. What's wrong with you?? That's what you thinking rite? I know that.. Hehe don't worry read ahead. U GONNA LOVE this Jeremy Gilbert! Specially his talent :p

You won't know who he is until later on. So bare with me this chapter will be boring as always :/

CONTINUE READING...

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continuing from previous page...

*Virat returned back to his Cell from the desk counter*

"That's wonderful... Good job Virat, you did a great job ... How does it feel to be praised for ur good deeds??? I'm sure you had fun with her... Did u go harsh on her??? Of course u didn't... Is she happy now ? I'm sure she is,after all u weren't that jack ass who hurt her.. So pat urback n celebrate."
HE WAS TALKING TO HIMSELF!

Psycho much? Thought so... He is going crazy so am I. Do u know why? Cuz I am struggling here to move forward. It's damn hard to write how the hell u all story writers write in first place?? Mummy. So if it turns out bullshit don't blame me u asked for it.

And of course what else do u expect him to do? He just lost everything. All hope, dream , desire just crushed in to zillion Pieces. No longer he'll be able to be a superstar and rule the world. No more luxurious life.. No scope to meet his family n enjoy his life with them.. Their care, love , scoldings, lessons... All just finished. There is no difference between a dead body and him rite now. His heart is beating but there is no life in it. Someone burned his heart n turned into ashes.

"Y god y?? Y did u do this to me?? Is my fault was that big that I deserve this??? Caring for some one is sin?? Being innocent is a crime? n being punished for Not doing anything is justice?"

Law is blind, world is unfair, innocent people gets hurt, whoever has power gets to rule the world, don't have expectation cuz you never know when it crushes. When you are in trouble, everyone back stabs you even god too.. All this phrases became a fact for him... This day has become a deadly curse...Is there point to live anymore?

Don't worry he won't commit a suicide... he is not that weak. But how long can anyone control n bare a tragedy?

His heart started to ache and in no time his body was sweating... He kneeled down and sat on the floor, tighten his fist, breathing hard... And closed his eyes...

He dashed his head against the wall...his breathings became shallow...
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No comment...You really don't wanna know what happened next... if you have a strong heart then read further...
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7:30 A.M, Mumbai

A white BMW came forward the vadhera mansion in full speed. Pressing the accelerator harder, blowing up watchman's cap.. Literary breaking thru the main door it stopped at the front porch of Vadhera palace.
A boy about 24 year wearing a white Tee with black jacket and RayBand glares open the front door
Stood up, stretched his body n with a smirk he said "Home Sweet Home"

He ran toward the front door about to press the bell but "aaa.. Not yet"

He took out the keysBeneath the carpet and opened the door really carefully...tip toed n rush through the stairs..

"jeevika... Mere blue shirt taiyaar rakhna" - viren said from bathroom.

"Je viren Ji" jeevika said with a sweet smile...
Ring ring...
"hello... Ha ma... Kaise ho? Ha that dish... Ruko maa se pooch ke bata ti hu"
She placed the blue shirt on the bed n went down to the kitchen.

"eeh blue shirt? Wrong choice.." he walk toward the cupboard and took out a Black sexy Ralph n Lauren shirt n replaced it with the blue shirt. Now that's better. And then he left the room.

Viren came out.. Der hogayi hai... Client k saath meeting bhi hai... Arre black shirt? Maine toh jeevika ko blue kaha tha..lagta hai thik se suna nehi... Wait this shirt? He think for a while and No way...

"arre Rajiv full moon saal mei ek baar ata hai... You got that question wrong you see blah blah blah" slok was describing his friend about full moon.

He sneaked inside and did something to slok's laptop. N sneaked out before he cud notice.

Slok hung up the phone n turn on the laptop. Arre yeh open Kyu nehi horaha? Who changed the pass word? He click on the hint and it said "oyee encyclopedia kitna parhai karega? Take a break"

Oh nooo .. Slok did a face palm.

He tip toe to Sb's room..

Sb- aaj mausam bohot suhana hai tih kyu na ghazal sunni jaye?
She turn on the Cd player but her phone ranged...
7 mins later... She press the on button and "dil mei mere hai dard e disco.. Dard e disco..." played in loud speaker..
Omg yeh kisne kiya???

He giggled from behind n walk toward kadambari chachi's room.

Aaj Inder Ji bari jaldi chale Gaye.. Koi gal nehi Anne do dekhlungi...

Hai neee DDLG ka movie ticket!! She looked at te table .. Yeh inderji? Nehi unhe toh yeh movie achi nehi lagti.. Toh phir ? Eee she jumped with happiness.

He Flashed a sweet smile n run toward dadaji's room

Sundar was serving the tea n he call him .. And said exchange that with orange juice

Sundar was happy seeing him but kept silent n chuckled.
He exchanged it n left for his chores

Dadaji was reading paper so he didn't notice..
He hold the cup ... Arre juice ?? Sundar... He came .. Maine chai mangi thi.. Yeh juice? Ji vo... He hesitated.. N he blurred out "juice is good for health"

Kyaa?

Meantime he walked toward the kitchen.

Vanshika- jeevika aaj ka lunch menu likh Niya na?
Jeevika- ha ma...
Shahi paneer, matur pulao, mix veg and
Pasta... He blurred out.
Va- kya? She n jeevika turned..

Both were shock...
Hi ladies... Virat said with a wide smile...

Va- viraaat... He came forward n hugged her..
"Mera ladla.. Kaisa hai.. Kab aya?? Bataya Kyu nehi?? Tu thik toh hai na?? Kitna slim hogaya hai.. Kuch khaha bhi nehi??" she spoke breathlessly

Virat- maaa... Breathe .,chill.. I'm
Good as always... N I missed u he gave a bone breaking hug.

A lone tear feel from her eye.. I missed u too beta... Acha hua tu agaya...

V- hmm.. Now will have blast..

Jeevika- humme toh koi yaad hi nehi...she crossed her hands against her chest.

V- how can I forget my girl friend? How r u sexy lady? N he hugged her...
Waise thori moti hogaye ho.. Kya baat hai koi good news hai??
J- viraaat..
V- Haha joking u look sexy :p n ha chachu toh mujhe jaldi banna hai after all he will have the best chachu who will teach him every single thing about how to be a cool hot boy :p
J- jarur.. Vadhera house mei wild boys ke kami kaha,..
All of themChuckled thn they shift to the drawing room..

Everyone got down.. Virat took blessings from the elders and greeted them thenhe move toward Viren..

Viren punched him on his stomach.. Not hard..

V- ouch bhai...maar Kyu rahi ho?
Vv- aata hi badmashi suru?
V- kya kare uske bina I can't digest my food..
Vv- pagal n both hugged... N everyone joined them for a group hug.
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Some police came to vadhera house n arrested Virat...

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Still warning u DON'T read... Incase u do thn Listen to this

:http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=y9U2CSHkoJ4

Few days later.

Some officers were walking with him toward a hallow passage.. That place Looked like Demon's favorite place... The passage was so gloomy that he cud smell fresh scent of blood.. The walls of that passage was old n crooked.. The atmosphere was scary enough to have goosebumps.

He was walking in wearing handcuffs. When they entered the room, his heart became weak and he died inside. He looked around and was digesting his future... Soon he will be hestanding there next.

The inspector opened his handcuff's and told him to move forward.

V- he closed his eyes and calmed himself he started to vision his family members... Their smily faces..All those time he had spent with them... The time where a cute little naughty boy was chasing his bhai for his McQueen car, playing Chess with dadaji, wipping off that extra cadbury cream from his mouth with his mom's dupatta , memecring bua's dialogs and being a spiderman by sitting on chachu's shoulder.
All those crazy moments brought a smile on his face and opened his eyes...
Officers were taking him toward his last destination. when he reached there, his heart sunk and shattered into pieces.

Officer- any last wish you wanna fulfill?

V- he stared at him with his sparkling eyes , paused for a moment n replied with a sweet smile "I wanna see my family"

Officer- thought for a second and retort back "your wish has been granted... " then He ordered one of his officers to bring his family.

Vanshika and Viren walked in... Both had moist eyes.. Vanshika was completely broken... Her eyes was red and puffy... She was shivering... Viren was hugging her n moving forward... Both of Their heart stopped seeing virat near that area... A place where no one wanna see their love ones. Indeed it was Demon's favorite place. Both of them stop walking.. they didn't have the courage to go further

Officer - Virat Singh Vadhera you have 5 mins.. Live the moment...

V- he nodded in agreement and said thank you.. He looked at their faces n his heart was satisfy seeing them.. At least now he can leave this world peacefully. He wiped off his tears and move forward with fortitude.

Vanshika +viren n virat was facing each other.

Vanshika's eyes was constantly flowing tears...She had no words to say.. Her most favorite son will be gone in few moments... And she can't do anything..Can any mother be more helpless then her?

V-" maa.." he said in a baby tone just like when he learn to say that word

Vanshika - that word brought a life on her weak soul... She hugged him tightly, closed her eyes..she recalled the time when she hold him for the first time.. He was so little n cute.. Had a innocent smile just looked like his papa... His papa took him on his arms n said "virat", like his name he will rule the universe... And both husband and wife passed satisfactory smile seeing his baby boy smiling like an angel...

Vanshika- her dream broke when she felt virat's hand was caressing her hair...
"I will die virat... I can't stay without you... "

V- couldn't control his tears and his eyes got wet too...
Vanshika- she started to weep loudly...
V- that broke his heart.. He never wanted his mom to suffer like this...to calm his mom, he said in a sporty manner "maa... I'm fine..please don't cry.."

Viren- couldn't bare any of this so he turned his back n weeped silently clutching his fist... He have never been so helpless before.. If anyone tried to harm virat, he always stood in front him n tackled it but today there is nothing he cud do... He failed to keep the promise from his father that he will be a father figure of virat and will always keep him happy, will help him to reach his dream n support him no matter what.

Virat-he gathered all his strengths so he can stay strong and calm his mom

" maaa don't worry I am always with you na...and will be In your heart... I will watch u guys from up there (pointing his index finger toward the sky)
Vanshika- nodded in disagreement still clutching his shirt n crying miserably

V- ok ok I know u will miss me ...but hey I'm coming back na..

Vanshika- looked at him

Virat- "I will come back in form of ur grandson or daughter... Kyu bhai..." he said with proud.

Viren- turned...

Virat - he passed a weak smile to him and said " bhai agar boy hua toh uska naam virat Rakhna..aur vo Jo banna chache use banne dena... he will rule the world n make u all proud He will live my dream... Kyu rakho ge na?"

Viren- nodded in agreement... Still unable to say anything...

V- he took a deep breath n said "thank you"

V- "aur ha agar girl hua toh unmm let her wear short skirts.. Girl friend ko bolna typical mom na bane .. Be a cool mom.. Just like ours.. " he said cupping his mom's face.

Viren- couldn't take it anymore n just hugged him tightly...

Virat- he hugged him back too...I love you bhai... N forgive me if I ever miss behaved with you...

Viren - he hit virat's shoulder softly n said "I hate u virat ... U never listen to me...always makes me worried"

Virat- still hugging.. He chuckled softly n said "tabhi toh jaraha hu... Abb maje se rehna..."

Viren- hugged him tight..."don't live us virat..." (his tears were flowing)

Officer- Virat Vadhera your time is up...let's go..

Vanshika- no... No... She shaked her head in disagreement.

VV boys broke the hug.

V- hugged his mom n placed a soft kiss on her forehead. "I have to go ma... Don't be sad n try not to miss me...and I'm really sorry for troubling you all this years... Bad boy na.. What to do when I have such an awesome mom little fun is ok rite??

Vanshika- clutched his uniform.. N hugged him tight...unable to say anything..

V- saw the officer was coming closer..
He broke the hug... Wiped off her tears n said "I love you.. Take care... Now u go..."

Vanshika- no u can't can't go... They can't let u take away from me... I can't handle that... Plz don't go...

Officer- Virat vadhera.. Ur time is up.. Don't waste our time..
He ordered other officers to escort Viren n Vanshika...

V- he looked at the officer n thn turn his face toward viren "bhai Maa ko leke jao... I can't go leaving her like that..."

Vanshika- Mai kahi nehi jarahi...tu mere saath jayega.

V-" ma please don't make this harder for me...please goo... Bhai jaooo yaha se... Just gooo" he pushed her mom toward viren

Officers were coming toward them...

Viren- hold her mom...
Vanshika- viren kuch karo... He can't go like that...
Viren- ma...

Virat- he started to step back but still watching them... N whispered with a smile "go..."

Viren- ma chalo...
Vanshika - virat... She looked at him for the last time...
Viren- was stepping back carrying his mom ... Vanshika was crying placing her head on his chest ..

Virat walk toward the hanging area..

He glared at them for the last time n whispered "I love you".. Turned and said to the officer"I'm ready"

Officer nodded in agreement n the hanging man Covered his head with a black silk cloth.

Viren- although he was stepping back but his eyes didn't blink n glued up front where virat was...

Officer- Virat Singh Vadhera, criminal #786 shall be hanged till death...

He looked at the watch

Officer: counted 1...

Viren -Suddenly a faded imaged flashed in front of him...

He was about 3 years old when Vanshika first placed virat on his lap... Both were smiling... And viren tired to feed him a cookie...but virat was a new born baby so he couldn't n pouted.

Officer: 2...

It was during 10th grade when Viren found out about Virat is having a girl friend and he smoked with bad boys bunking class ... He was very mad at that day with virat about smoking n keeping that secret from him...However, virat being virat he convinced him n tey were back to talking terms again...

Officer: 3...
It was his wedding night when virat was teasing him n giving him suggestion for his first night.. Viren got embarass n punched him on his shoulder.. Virat reacted and both chuckled ...

Present.

Viren smiled lively remembering those moments but thn his smile disappeared when he saw te officer

Nodding his head and orderingthe hanging man to pull the machine ...

And within a seconds the trigger was pulled... That rope choked virat until it suffocated his throat and thn numbed down him like a lifeless body...

Viren- he blinked once and all the strength he had while holding his mom disappeared... His body got numb n he set free from his mom from his grip...

Vanshika- looked at his numb face and then turn her head toward the hanging place.. There lies a lifeless virat... Cold body ... Dead...

Vanshika- screamed out loud "viraaat" n fell down unconscious ...
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"Maaa..." virat opened his eyes...breathing hard...His heart was racing faster.. Forehead was sweating... His face got red.
His nerve got numb for a second... He ruffled his hair n spoke-->

Ma will have heart attack if she get to know about me.. Dadaji's pride will crush n he will never able to stand his head up high... Everyone will mock bhai that his brother is a criminal n no one will offer him a case... Nooo... He stood up instantly... This can't happen... It's all my fault... Damn it... Everyone will suffer ... All cuz of me... All cuz of me... And he destroyed every single property that was present in the cell...
He broke down completely... He have never been that helpless... Everything started to seem like a sweet dream.. Whatever he spend in his life will be just a memory ...

Again his head was spinning.. He tried to balance himself but he his body was weak.. He was shivering he stood up holding the wall but couldn't take his body weight, therefore, he fell on the ground... Unconscious.

Shift in scene

Raj was following Jeremy's car... But then the signal made him lost track.. However he found the house where they were in.

He sneaked in n the view in front of him shock him to max..

He saw Manvi and Jeremy was kissing each other.. Making out like BF-GF.

His mouth was wide open...
Raj- wat a bitch.. Now i get it .. It's all ur plan... Jeremy n manvi... Omg y didn't it click me before??? Of course it's a plan. When Jeremy Gilbert is involved There is always something fishy...

Don't worry virat.. now no one can stop you from coming out of that jail... He sneaked back and got in to the car..
Meantime his phone ranged.

Hello..

"Raj what the hell is going on??? I have been calling u n virat since ur night ... What happen to virat ?? N y didnt u pick up ur phone !?! Speak up..." viren shouted at raj

Raj- bhai app thora relax karo everything is fine...

Viren- I don't think so.. I'm at the airport my flight is in 1 hr I'm coming... Give the phone to virat... NOW

Raj- f**k.. Ummm virat is not near I will call u in 1/2 hr thn u can talk to him ok? Bye...
He hung up before viren cud ask him anything further...

He drove back to the jail...

Wohooo done!!! Phewww ... I don't know how this update was but this section above I HATED the most.. I didn't wanted to write it but my evil mind tch tch... God bless kushal...

I don't expect u all to comment cuz I know it sucked badly... However if u like it by chance thn let me know...

I know u gonna write UPDATE SOON! Well I already started part 10
lol I was gonna paste alll that but didn't u see evil mind will be evil ... So see ya soon n thank u sooo much for baring this..

If u r not in my buddy list then sen me a req! Till thn adios :))

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

i hate u i hate u i hate!!!! grrr u seriously wrote that about ur own boy hawww and u say u love him...rofl 🤣 kidding i love u i love ur phone and i love ur evil brain hehehehe i will keep saying it i loveddd the update but u made me cry na 😵 waise fater reading it crying was obvious the hanging part but seriosuly i doubt u wrote it lol but it was really well written ur expert in confusing us and then the next moment u end up making me praising ur wrtinggg grr i hate it 😆 but it was seriously amazinggg but at the end i feel like starangling my own self tune phise confuse kar diya what should i do with ur hun!!!! manvi was making out with whteva his name was lol and im again saying update soon hahaha *hides before u get mad*

Edited by vamps1996 - 12 years ago

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

My god super long updt...n must say it was wonderfull...n remos words This.Is.Super.Hit..*wink*

i dont understand wats wrong with manvi? She is the only 1 who knows very well that virat didnt commite any sin at all...is thats b****** blackmailing her? Is it bloody revenge game? N manvi is just puppet? Ohh man all revenges r not sweet...But again y she is so weak, she is not like this...y she is behaving so weird...she never let anybody to rule her life...n most importantly wat happend that night with her?...i know i m the most confusing person on this earth...lolzzz...my Q bank dont know the end...:p

hwww u know i was abt to stop reading thats heart piercing part...i was chocked...my eyes were wet...n i was cursing u like anything...but then mera tubelight jala...n i laughed...ask y?
Ask...
Ask...
Then i rememberd...are ye to faria ka story he...the girl who madly in love with virat n more with kushal...naaa she wont let this happen, it must b a virats nightmare...(n my tears r nothing but effect of farias talent)...n c u didnt prove me worng...(but pls dont do this frm next time haaa...aisa heart attack khake itni jaldi marne nahi muze...abhi to shadi bhi nahi hue he yar) :p...hashhh then i feel so relieved...phewww...but seriously that part was really very touchy n emotional...

pls clear manvis POV also...want to know her tragedis also...n more over want to c her in her sherni avatar...cont soon...i loved this long updt treat...its so yummyyy...lolzzz...cont soon soon soon

Edited by rasp_berry - 12 years ago