[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 13

Haaalllooo Honey bees how are you all? hope you are doing alright

omggg d update...
it was tooo longgg i mean how did u write soo much girl...
m really surprised it was terificcc... i totallyyy luved it!!!! aww manvi's concern for virat.
.. nd den dat song lolzzz dat was sooo awkward for manvi nd she was actuly checking him out lolzzz...

hayeee as virat was asking her in husky voice " u were checking me out yes..."
omggg i was fainting nd instead of manvi i was lyk Yes yes yar ab shirtless aaoge to nai dekhe kya???? ROFL...
then dat moment wen dey were ummm ya making out nope it was not that intimate...scene yar
nd faria ur comments in btw they were hilarious...
i was laughing lyk hell here ur sooo shy yar it was not dat 18+ content so chill!!!

but ya dat scene wen manvi was biting him on his shoulder nd after dat wat virat did omggg i was shocked!!! nd shyyy..hahaahah... dat scene was 18+ lolzz over all d update was awwwsum...
update asap..

- aenna

Where is d banner nd teaser??

Originally posted by: Aenna

Where is d banner nd teaser??

Originally posted by: Aenna

omggg d update...
it was tooo longgg i mean how did u write soo much girl...
m really surprised it was terificcc... i totallyyy luved it!!!! aww manvi's concern for virat.
.. nd den dat song lolzzz dat was sooo awkward for manvi nd she was actuly checking him out lolzzz...

hayeee as virat was asking her in husky voice " u were checking me out yes..."
omggg i was fainting nd instead of manvi i was lyk Yes yes yar ab shirtless aaoge to nai dekhe kya???? ROFL...
then dat moment wen dey were ummm ya making out nope it was not that intimate...scene yar
nd faria ur comments in btw they were hilarious...
i was laughing lyk hell here ur sooo shy yar it was not dat 18+ content so chill!!!

but ya dat scene wen manvi was biting him on his shoulder nd after dat wat virat did omggg i was shocked!!! nd shyyy..hahaahah... dat scene was 18+ lolzz over all d update was awwwsum...
update asap..

- aenna

Originally posted by: Faria12345

its updated now vcchack page 16 all way down :p

Yap got it..as expected m not gona understand lolzzz only u can reveal dat mysery not us..
Update asap...

Originally posted by: virmanhus

banner!!!

seems virat & manvi are going thru some hard times...

viren is chasing or scolding virat???

viren & jeevika are upset too..

virat is reaching his mom for care

y is elena boeva here????

conclusion:: there's some thing big & bad ahead!!!

So many questions do I have to answer? Nah :p

faria!!!!

amazing story!!!!

haha virat is awesome...

he tld jenna dat her bf was flirting

nd he's flirty... mam ke saath bhi

loved da dewar bhabhi convo

finally manvi's entry...

finally manvi met virat's frnds...

oh shit mis match... virat ko koi aur samjh liya...

ab kya hoga...

nd she said all dat infront of virat

loved da lil nok jhoks...

virat ne yeh acha nahi kiya.. poor manvi...(no offence 2 ur boy )

aww da virman scene was nice😳

finally virat noticed her...

hahahaha poor da other guy.. uski toh band baj gayi😆

ohhh virman first kiss😉😳

bt manvi ko truth pata chal gaya...poor virat pair ka kabada kar diya😛

loved da vv bros convo.. haha viren also tang khiching😆

hahahaah virat nd jenny part🤣

finally manvi ko pata chal gaya he is her di's dewar...

drunken virat in manvi's room😉

another kiss😲😳 waiting fr manvi's reaction...

oh manvi is leaving nd virat piche piche jaying.. hope he gets her bck...

finally thoda tension khatam hua...

omg hw did u even write such a long update😲😲

bt neverthless i luv reading long updates😆

haha luv der nok jhok... da update was fab!!!

umm so virat doesnt beleive in luv...😛

all da songs in da update r ma fav too😃 so i jst loved all da sngs...

da virman romance😳 it was not too ott also.. it was jst romantic da way it shud be👍🏼

amazing amazing story!!!!

i lyk ur lines in da middle😆

da banner is very confusing.. so i wnt use ma brain nd read further...😃

plzz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm...

FARIAAA WHATTT THIS IS YOUUU😲 YOU YOU YOU WRITE STORIES!! Oh Lord! AM IN SHOCK!! 😲

Originally posted by: Faria12345

So many questions do I have to answer? Nah :p