un named os par 3 pg 4 NOV 23 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Hey ..
The os was beautiful ...
Loved it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Amazing
kya parenting di hai
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Super cute and adorable..
Beautifully written..
Loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
hi manali🤗...after such a long time read ur os...it was awe...arjun riya ki ariya n sam n aisha ki sameera badi cute hai...just loved the cuties n parenthood of thier parents...😃😃😃😃😃😃...n one more thing ur 3 ff's are not upadated from a long time when u will updtae them????waiting eagerly...😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
So swttt story
Oh hh Arjun attend the call of Ariya
Arjun and Ariya'conve ver nice
Sameer and Aisha 's convo on phone very nice
Samera ka gussa Wah v Wah puri papa pr hai
" da da da ada iii uuu "
Ohh tht word make smile on my face
Awesome ,superb,mind blowing
Hatts off u dr u express the feeling which is wonderful and valuable 4 everyone
Thanx 4 pm me
Sorry 4 late cmmnt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Awesome OS... Loved it...!!!

Very beautiful...!!!!

Father-Daughter bond was so nice...!!!

Lovely!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2
She wipe her hands neatly & comes from Kitchen after finishing her work. And shock to see her daughter , who change her dress & open the door & look at steps.
" Baby kon aane wala hai?"
" Baba.."
" Oho , to aaj Baba ke saath kahi bahar jane ka programme hai?" She ask her daughter chirpily adjusting her hair.
" Hmmm"
" To andar aake baitho na "
" Nahi, mujhe jaldi jana hai.." she eagerly waiting for her Baba..
Her Mother leaves her there & seats on Sofa , but her gaze fix on her daughter. After sometime she notices her daughter start to to & fro at her place , She understands her little legs must be paining.. but she is like her Baba, Stubborn & angry..
After half an hour she turn & look at her Mother , who look at her & try to judge her reaction.. Her Mother sees her watery eyes & tired tiny form .
She just look at her Mother & goes back her room. Her Mother also follows her . Little girl remove her shoes& climb on bed , she hold her Teddy & hug him tightly .
Tears forming into her eyes , but she wipe them immeadtly , she is crying , but she can't admit it.. she hate to admit things.
" Bilkul apne Baap pe gayi hai.." her Mother thinks to herself & goes from there .
She comes to Hall & call him,
" Hello , whr r u ?"
" Bas ghar ke liye aa hi raha tha , kyu kuch lana tha?"
" Aapne Ariya ko kuch promise kiya tha?"
" Ammm , ha , vo aaj hum dinner bahar karnge , she wants to go out.."
" Great... Mr. Rawte , 2 ghante se meri baby ready hokar Baba ka wait kar rahi hai & Baba kar kya rahe the?" Riya complaints him.
" Vo Case mai itna ... "
" Aur Sameer bhai.. "
" Vo to kab ka ghar chala gaya"
" Va , sach mai vo kitna pyar karte hai Ayesha & apne beti se , aue ek aap ..." Riya yells on him..
" Par jaan ... "
Riya cuts call. & Arjun just look at his cell
" Sameer ke bacche har roj Sameera ka bahana bana ke jaldi chala jata hai , aur mujhr sare kaam complete karne padte hai.. " 😡
Within a hr he reach home & goes staright to his bedroom.
Ariya just look at him & keep her chin on her Teddy's head..
" Sholly" Arjun says sweetly to her.
Ariya just look at Fan.
Arjun just rolled his eyes & Riya who stand near door smile lightly..
Arjun notices Ariya's nose is turn into red due to crying. She constatinly wipe her nose with her hand.
"Naraj ho?" He ask her.
Ariya just play with her frock..
" Vo mai... kaam tha na..." he give her excuses.
Ariya just look at her Mother .
" Sholly na chinu , plz... " and hold his ears.
" Mujhe bhookh lagi hai " Ariya says & stand on bed . Arjun smile at that & pick her in his arms.
" Aaa.. mera Chinu roya?? " he ask her sweetly..
" Hmm " Ariya nodded sheeplessily & rest her head on her Father's brod sholders.
Arjun just caressing her back & kissing her hair.
Ariya look at her Mother..
" Mumma , Blur colour wear karo na.."
" Jo hukum.." Riya says .
Ariya & Arjun comes to hall.
" So , aaj kya kiya ?" he ask her .
" Aaj na maine ABCD learn kiya . Fruits ko bhi recongnize kiya , and Baba aaj na mai Mummy ke saath Market gayi thi to vaha maine Vegetables ke naam bhi bata diye Mumma ko ..." she inform him happily her face fills with happines & proud.
" Are va... to phir is Sunday ko mujhe bhi seekha dogi?" Arjun request her.
" done.." she ans him.
Riya comes out wearing Blue colour dress , Ariya open her arms fully & Riya takes her .
Arjun drive car & Riya listening songs , while their daughter is busy watching outside view from window..
They enter Rest. Arjun is well known personality now thx to ETF.
They take their seats 7 Ariya yells , " Mumma Ice- cream " and looking at another person plate..
" What i warned you before?" Riya ask her in little angry & serious tone.
" Sholly Mumma.."
They orders , food come & they enjy thr food , Its really tough for Riya to feed her , bcoz sometimes Ariya stands on chair , sometimes she ask some stupid questions to Waiter , or sometimes she runs here & there. Riya have to go behind her & catch her. After food Arjun take jiuce while Riya take her fav. Coffee. Arjun notices Ariya looking at one little girl & obeserves her carefully.
" Chinu.." Arjun call her..
Ariya just look at him..
" Hmm"
" Juice?" he ask her.
" Konsa hai ?"
" Pinaple.. "
Ariya nodded & seats on Arjun's lap , Arjun help her to drink , he notices her gaze is still fix on that little girl , he nudges Riya & singnals her to ask their daughter.
" Sonu , kya hua? do u know her ?" Riya ask her.
" Nahi..."
Riya about to ask next question , but Ariya ask first,
" Papa , mujhe Sam Mama ke ghar jana hai.." chale? "
( Riya call Sam bhai , so Ariya call him Mama)
" No Baby , see we are late.. its 11 .." Riya says while looking at her watch..
" Ammm , nahi... " Ariya pouts her face & stand up on Arjun's lap . she turn her face opposite side of Riya & rest herself in her father's hold. Ariya just raise her last finger towards her Mother's direction.
( means im not talking to u)
" Do whatever u want , but i said no.." Riya replied after that.
" Ri.." Arjun call her & request her to accept it.
Arjun calls Sam..
Sam receives cell ,
" Ha bol Arjun.. "
Arjun hears Sameera yelling loudly..
" Soye nahi abhi tak?' Arjun ask him.
" Nahi abhi to khana kahne ka programme chal raha hai " & sees his wife , who pull Sameera ( thr daughter to her )
" Da da... da... da... da... " Sameera yells loudly & put her little fist in her mouth..
Ayesha just made faces , " Aeee Samee , pura haath gandha kar diya.." and about to remove her fist , but Sameera remove her fist from mouth ( that filles with dal & chawal ) & hold her mother's hair.
Ayesha just closes her eyes , within a second she open her eyes & smile at her daughter , who fiddling with her hair locks.
Sameer Rathod smile at that & turns to call.
" Ha , bol.. "
" Busy hai?" Arjun ask him.
" Na, bol tu.."
" Arjun narrets him , Same immeadtly grants his wish.
So finally Rawte family heades to Rathod home. Ariya seats on backside alone & watching cars from back window.. Suddenely she yells ,
" Baba .. Ice-cream.." Arjun look at his wife for her permission , Riya sighed & look at him.
Arjun get down from Car ,
" Baba mai bhi.." and start to dance on her place.
" Ariya stop , and stand properly , And Arjun take her with you.. & give her what she want.." Riya orders them & Arjun opens back door & Ariya throws herself on him..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Waoo manu its lvly part lvd ariya so much ohhj she is cryinggg..bez baba is not coming..
N finaly they go out for dinner..
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now her demand going to sam house..
nice update waiting for more..
or namkaran kab karogiii ..
update soon..
Ps:-n what about ur other story..???
n hum tum or dhoka ya sachha pyaar...manuuu me wanna ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arjun help her to see Ice-cream that keeps in fridge.
" Ariya starts to recongnize colours .
" Green . Mango , Chocolaty , White.."
" Chinu , kya chayie?"
Ariya put her finger on Mango colur & look at her father.
Arjun purchase small cup for her.
" Aur Mama ke liye?" Ariya ask him.
" Ha vo bhi le raha hue.." Arjun says & purchase family pack.
They comes out of Parlour.
" Baba Baba..."
"Ha.. beta.."
Ariya holds his jaw & try to pull his face towards her. Arjun turn to look at her .
" Ha bolo.."
" Donald Duck" she says & shows him one poster that stick outside Ice-cream Parlour. Arjun goes there with her & Ariya wiggle in his arms , Arjun leaves her , Ariya goes near sticker , and touch it.. & let out giggle..
Arjun also smile at her , " she have Riya's smile" Arjun thinks.
Finalyy they reach at Rathod home..
All seat on Sofa & Samee , Ariya play with Samee's toys .
Arjun hands over Ice-cream to Ayesha, after some-time Ayesha comes & give all Ice-cream . Riya call Ariya & feed her .
" Mumma , Samee?"
Sameera just look at all , she only understands all eat someting without giving her , she starts crawling & reach near her Father's leg. She lift her head & look at him.
" Kya chayie?" Sameer ask her.
She just look at him , Sameer pick her & give her little taste by his finger.
Sameera just give him different expression..
" Thanda thanda hai na.. " Ayesha ask her after seeing her expression..
Sameera smiles sheeplessily & hide herself in Rathod's neck..
Ariya sees this & smile & her gaze fall on Arjun's plate ,
" Chocolate"
Riya lokk at her & ask her , " U want it..?"
" Ha.. "
Riya feeds her..
After sometime Ariya starts to rub her eyes & Riya understand they have to leave.
Sameera is already go to sleep in Rathod's arm cluchting his t-shirt tightly by her little fingers.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
that was such a lovely update :) loved it
awww love the way ariya was waiting for arjun :)
she was crying but doesn't want to admit it :) she is just like her arjun
awww because of sam poor arjun got scolded by riya
awww sholly :)
loved arjun and airya's bonding :)
awwwie ariya learnt so many things in one day :)
the whole family went on dinner :) nice
love the way riya was running after ariya so she can eat the food
arjun calls ariya chinu :) how adorable
sameera is such a cutie pie :)
ice cream part was so cute :)
last part was so adorable :)
can't wait to read more
continue soon

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