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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

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di plss aisa mat karo
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ashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Piya , don't forget me,
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Study and job maintaing equally its very difficult, my only entertainment and hobby is only arjun show and this forum only, pls send pm to me,

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Posted: 12 years ago

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sholi sholi piya didu itne din cell se comment type karna samjh nahi aa raha tha ab seekh gayi hu pls pls pm me 2 na ...

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Di achana chemistry padh rahi thi
love chemistry kab milega dii??
Update
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856040

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

I love ur work and honestly respond to it

don't ban me

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rocking_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

hey sorry for late comment...!!

mujhe nahi pata ki maine kabse yeh story ke updates padna bandh kar diya lakin for that im sorry!!!!

was busy and held up in many things...!!!

so again from the scratch i will read ur story and comment on each part for u,because ur story desrves that!!!!

for part 1:-

super duper wala update!!!!!!!

Arjun i think you should keep on losing your control...hahaha!!!!!

Arjun kya kare tumraha!!!!!!

loved the way he missed her in one week:)chweet...

Riya here enjoy his kisses but darr rehta hia ki phir se kahin woh usse dur na jaye...aww Riya!!!

Riyaz!!!!!!!!!!!!

can i kill him ya Arjun will do the honours????

Arjun why are u waitning beat him blue and black...!!!!!

Shree!!!your are really funny!kya toh bhi dailogue mara!!!haha!!!

was it Arjun true feelings...OMG!!!!!!!

chiii Riya didnt know that!!!!!!!!hmppphhh!!!!!

Riyazzz again!!!!!!!!!arghh!!!!!

great work dear loved it!!!!!

part 2:-

again a beautiful and heart touching update!!!!!

loved it to bits...!!!!!

Riyazz u deserved it!!!now will you leave on your own ya should show you the door and kick you out!!!!

Shree and chotu toh in shock mode i guess after they heard Riya confession...!!!!

car wala scenes were chweet...!!!!!

Arjun daffar,she loves you thats why she thinks about you always first...!!!

thats why she wants you to be there for you baby!!!!

when will you realize hmmm!!!!!

yipeee!!!!!!!!!they hugged!!!!me dancing!!!!!!

lovely Piya di!!!!!

part 3:-

wow!!!!!!!!that wa cutie and swwet wala update!!!!

WAs that our Riya?????some pinch me please...!!!

i thought in my stories itself i made her bold one...yahan pe bhi wahi haal hai haha!!!

she was blushing after kissing him hahaa!!!!

loved the way she had initiated the kiss aww...!!!!

and when Arjun took over it rose to a new level!!!hayeee!!!!!

Arjun ne theek tarike se samjaya Riyaz ko goooddd!!!!!

I love the line..."mujhe thodi aur baby ko bajut bhuk lagi hai"that was sweet and killer line!!!!

Arjun made something for her aww!!!!!

teh next best part was he made her sit on the kitchen counter...awww!!!!

The entry of her feelings were beautiful!!!!!

the way u have penned it down awesome!!!!

cant wait to read more!!!!!

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: kgmu
piya
res kab karongi

🤣.🤣.🤣
Kitane res chahiye dr...
apna nik name bataooo...

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kgmu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: ll_piya_ll

🤣.🤣.🤣
Kitane res chahiye dr...
apna nik name bataooo...

at india forum every body use call me pari

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kgmu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

piya

pls majak mat karo

jaldi se update karo nahi toh raat mein need bhi nahi ayigi

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Back with next part..Or may be last in this thread..its depend upon ur responce..
Any way warmth hug..for my frs n reader
For liking n commenting

PART=25B
"Sab perfect hai per phir bhi...kuch"

SCENCE-Every think will be perfect for her today,but is it realy perfect?
after checking that riya is sleeping peasefully arjun left there,
.
n she remembering the day when she knows first time that she is expecting of arjun's child,
Her mind driffted in flash memory,
.
(I just wanna to show riya reaction,)
.
The second day after bank case-
Riya goes hospital for dressing her wound,(case ke dorana she got hurt,
remember,N she felt dizzy to)
.
the same hospital, where her massi's fr is doctor,
After dressing she comes out doctor cabine.
.
but again she felt dezzy n fall on the ground,
--
few minute later-
U r pregnent miss riya mukharjee,doctor said after examine her,
Ri-What.??
(she was hell shocked,
but may be she felt already its gonna be happened with her
,bez she missed her period,
she hav a dout but not confermed ,but now its confermed)
.
(She comes out hospital,)
.
She moving on a road, her one hand on her belly as wanna to feel her unborn baby,but her mind is somwhere esle,
.
riya pov-
I Dont hv idea ...whats our future,
I know ek na ek din ye baat sab ko pata chalegi,
ke main maa banane vali hoon,
or shayad unhen bhi..
.
how could i face him..
Kaise bataongi ke,
i m Pregnent of his child,
unhen to kuch yaad bhi nahi hai,kw hamare bich kya huya.?
.
she wiped her tears with her one hand,thats comes out her eyes,
.
main kya kahongi arjun sir ko ke hamare bich ye sab kaise Or kab
or kin halat main huya,ke main chah ker bhi unhen rok nahi paye,
.
nahi rok paye..
pata nahi kyun ? ??
per arjun sir ko dard main dekhker,
(Again tears comes out her eyes)

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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