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Posted: 12 years ago

Back with next part hop u like...it was bit long..so just hit end part ,plz read caamly bez its showing ariya's point of veiw..
plz slient reader at list hit like button..

PART=24-B
"kabhi socha nahi tha ke khushiya es kader milengiii..."


SCENCE-
Riya silently sits in suv n waiting for arjun..
Today she was very happy,
happy to know,he stil care her n her baby..ups how many times i say my..
its our ..yes our baby..
.
her face showing blush n shyness..yes she is blushing,
bez for the first time ,she did somthing unusal n different act,
she even cant belive herself..
is i realy did that daring act..???
the act of kissing him..

pata nahi vo mare baare main kya sonch rahe honge.?
she tightly closed her eyes..
but not able to hide her blushing face..
---
few minute before:-
.
that was the best beautiful moments of her life today when arjun hug her in his arms ..
just wanna to feel his baby..
One drop fall her beautiful eyes..
Which showing her happiness,
In arjun mind:-
it was just a pure feeling,
the feeling to feel his unborn child,
that was the best way to say sorry, to his baby,n her,
he wanna to send tellypathy to his child,
baba lvs u ,lvs u very much..
n always care u n ur mom,
plz forgive ur baba..
baba se galti ho gaye,jo etane time tak apne baby se baat nahi ke,
baby ka naraj hona banta hai,
but plz one last time,





BG SONG:-( word change)
mujhako ye jindagii,
lagati hai apni se..
main bhi hoon ,
tum bhi ho..
or apna ye jahan,
(For Riya side)
.
(for arjun side)
mujhako ye jindagi..lagti hai apni se..
Dhup main bhi..chhanv main bhi..
her pal tum ho karib..

both still hugging each others..
After some time arjun parted that hug,
N look up to face him,
n found she was stil lost him,
her eyes r stil closed




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Every time whenever he comes near to her..
utani he time she lost in him..
n wanna to lost more n more in him..
Arjun also couldnt hold himself..
arjun looked down n found she was standing on his feet,
she didint even know,
when she climed his feet..
Her inocent act ,n beautiful faced provked him to kiss her,
he tried his best to stoped himself for kissing her but no,
he couldnt controled his feeling..
his heart start pounded inside,he leaned closer to her face,
her eyes r still closed,
But she can feel his breath on her face..
she slightly bits her lower lips as she knew,
what gonna be happened in next instent,
may be in any second his lips find his ways on her lips..
she was waiting for him to kiss her,
On the other arjun tried to controlled himself..
No arjun u cant do this..u hav to stoped urself,just stoped...
His lips almost rubing her lips..but not exjectly kissing her,
she also feel his lips near to her,she stoped breathing for that moment..
Plz kissed me,yes kiss me, i wanna to breath in ur
breath, her heart shouted from inside,

Soon she felt his lips away from her,
Riya opened her eyes n looked in him,
He was ignoring her graze,
that mad riya angry that time,
She make pupy face n looks angrly to him,
In mind-if u dont wanna to kiss me then why u act as ,u wanna to kiss me,
now i wanna to kissed u,
yes i wanna kiss u ,
i wanna kiss u ,
She beving like a kids,
i wanna kiss right now, unkowngly that time she said litle louder,
Which focused arjun attention,
He looks her eyes,her eyes showing angry n fustrated looks him..
He could hold just smiled that time,
U r to stunborn he said,
that made her more angery,
She streached her arms arround his neack n pulled
arjun closer to her,
.
Riyaaa..before he said more or understand her act..
he found her lips on him,




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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She pecked his open lips by her soft lips,
Now she was not in her sense,
she was kissing him ..ohh god,
Arjun was also shocked by her daring act,
She is realy kiss me,
.
(🤣 abhi bhi dout hai kya,loll kiss kerne ka permit kable tumhare pass nahi hai samjhe..)
.
She running her one hand his hair..
n other his broad back..
Arjun wanna to pushed her but she tightly hold him,
Wanna to poured her all lv in that one kissed,
.
its burning inside from arjun,
now its imposible for acp arjun,to stay in back..
He slides his hand near to her thin cylinderical waist..
(She was stil in sari)
.
she bits his lower lips when she felt Arjun hand on her bare skin..
AH hh..arjun scremmed
(🤣 kuch jaya he jor se bit ker liya kya)
but she is stil kissing..
Now arjun took the charge n he kissed her ,
sucking her lips..
pulled her closer to him,
not giving permission to air,to interfering between them,
He enters his toung inside her mouth,wanna to test her,
he test each n every corner,
She tightly cleanched his shirt,when she felt his toung inside her mouth,
.
the warmth of his kissed was burning her more n more,
they kissed eachother passionatly,
After some time arjun brock the kiss..as he felt her getting out of breath..
both breathing heavily..
Arjun stil holding her by her waist,
She didnt able to look him,
She went red with embarrassment her cheks turned become hot with shyness,she looking away from him..
Arjun noticed her blushed,
Arjun slowly removed his hold..
n say..Tum gadi main baide main abhi ata hoon,
.
She just nodded her head not even looking him,
She nervously tucked her hair behind her ears n sits inside suv,
she was stil thinking about her kissed,

-
Ye arjun sir abhi tak aye kyun nahi,she was waiting for him,



on the other the sam time-
Arjun goes to meet riyaz




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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SCENCE SHIFT:-
Arjun hold riyaz collor..
How dare u even think about my wife,
Or kya kaha tha tumne..
Har ladki tumhare sath raat bitane ka sapna dekhati hai,
Or riya bhi unmain se ek hai,
.
He give one hard punch on his mouth..
ahhh riyaz yelled with pain,
U wanna to sleep with my wife,Dont even u think in ur dreams to..
Other wise u dont hav any idea..Ke acp arjun kya ker sakta hai,
.
Riyaz-tum ye thik nahi ker rahe ho acp..
Ar-Arjun lift him up by his collor
Ri-Ahh hhh ye kya ker rahe ho..

Ar-tum mujhe samjhayoge kya sahi hai or lya galat,
Arjun suryakant rawte ne aaj tak rule ke pervaha nahi ke,
or koe bhi rule mujhe meri wife ko protect kerne se nahi roke sakta,
again give one tight punch on his face..he fall on the ground

Aaj ke baad kabhi kisi bhi ladki ke baare main etana ghatiya soncha to mujhase bura koe nahi hoga,
Vo haal karonga tumhare face ka,
Hero to kya villan ka role bhi nahi milega..
samjhe ya phir se samjhayon..
After saying this he left there..
--
(Yes that was the reasion,thats why arjun came here,he heared riyaz n his pA convo,
n even he knew very well jo drink riyaz riya ke liye laya tha, usame kuch mila hai,
but he came at the main time,)
.
--
arjun opened door n found her eyes is closed or may be she is sleeping ..Riyaaa he called her name,but she didnt respond,
Arjun sit diving sheat n start Suv..
but in next instant he found litle wait on him..
She rested her head on his side arms..
Her hair r waves in airs,
She looks like small kids,
Arjun muttered under his breath,bina khana khaye soo gaye,
Riyaa riya he again calling her name (also drive his car)
she anwsered like baby..
Plz sone do Arjun sir,
as in sleep she knew very well he is her arjun sir,
arjun just nodded his head in. disbelive.
Kise bachhe se kaam nahi,
maa banane vali hai per abhi






Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Per bachpana(childish nature) nahi gaya,
Sabki care hai per khud ke
or ..looked down n saw her belly,
then again focused his driving,
--
After half n hours..
They reach home..
(home sweet home ariya's home)
Arjun lift her in his arms,She like a sweet baby,she hold his shirt ..
Arjun comes inside her bed room n placed her carefuly on a bed,
Covered her with blankat..
say good night to her n his baby,he goes his room..
--
In arjun:-He again searching
about pregnacy n all details on net..
after two hours..
Sudenly he heared one sound its comes from kichen,he hold his guns n comes out his room..
--
In kichen :-no light in kichen it stil switched off..
but he saw one shadow,
he pointed gun there
Dont he dare to moved a single step,he warned..
n he imedeatly on the light ,
N found she is standing
there ,he stil poing his gun,
.
dont shoot me,Main sirf khane ke liye kuch..
she shows him Magii paket..
mujhe bhuk lag rahi the,
She said inocently,
Ohh god arjun crused himself for scaring her wife,N how she could even think..i will shout her,
he put his gun on the kichen counter..
arjun snnached that magii paket,

n yelled jab main tumhen pehale jaga raha tha,
dinner ke liye tab to tum udi nahi,
she innocently answer ,esame meri kya galti hai,
main kab se aap ka wait ker rahi the,
per pata nahi aap kahan chale gaye,
mujhe pata nahi chala main kab so gaye,
Or ab mujhe thodi se,(pointing her hand on her belly)baby ko jayada bhook lag rahi hai,
.

maggii banani aati bhi hai ya bas ehse hi khane ka man tha,
she nodded her head in negative with teary eyes,
(he scolding me she think)
(Arjun lift her up n carefuly sit her on kichen counter)
bus chup chap yahan baide,
bhuk lagi the to mujhe bata nahi sakti the,
Arjun prepairing some healthy food for her..
n she constantly stairing him,






Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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She feel happy she coudnt belive her destiny,
kabhi use koe etana pyaar karega..
(She always pray to god now god accept her pray )
.
arjun felt her graze,
(she is smiling on him)
he looked anquirly to her,
he rised his one eye brow n asked,ehse kyun has rahi hoon,
she nodded her head in negative,kuch nahi bas ehse he,
kuch to hai he again asked,
Riya hegitaly answer vo kabhi aap ko es taraha khana banate nahi dekha,
both share a cute eye look,.
--
After eating food she goes her room,
her happiness has no limit today,
--
One week is passed..
--
In riya room:
-time :-night


Riya felf her feeling deep for him,she wanna to share her feeling with somone but unfortunately no one was there..
or arjun se to es baare main vo keha nahi sakti..
so she took one recorded alarm n start recording her feeling..




arjun sir main jaanti hoon ke hamara rista kin haalat main jhooda tha---------
-------------(i was already write what she record)-
-----
main aapko es tarah ghut ghut ker nahi dekh sakti kyunki shayad main -----
(no recording after that dialog)
sudenly she heared one knock on her door,
she stoped recording n put recorder on table,
n closered her eyes imedeatly..
arjun comes inside wanna to saw she is sleeping properly or not..
he comes inside n sits near to her..
Riya in mind-aapne pyaar kerne lagi hoon sir,yes i fell in lv with u,
my life is nothing without u..
She touched her belly,
baba yahin hain aap ke pass,
aap so jayo,
she said good to her baby n him,
maine kabhi nahi soncha tha ke tumhare baba meri life main ayegen,
jab mujhe first time pata chala ke main maa banane vali hoon..
her mind goes in flash back..
What ye aap kya keh rahi hai,???
main maa banane vali hoon,
TBC:-
MAST YA BORE..??
plz dont forget to leav ur comment ..vernna..??









Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow piya
gr8 yaar kitna ronatic scene tha
hope ki yeh kabhi khatm na ho par kya kare story ko age bhi badhana hai
so story was awesome love each n every line of update
n loving n caring side of arjun amazing
waiting for more
lovely superb update
update soon
Edited by kgmu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such a lovely and cutie pie update :) loved it
awww riya was really so happy that arjun cares for her and baby :)
and she was blushing :)
arjun's mind thoughts were beautiful
she was lost in him and awww was standing on his foot :)
poor riya didn't realize that she said about kiss a bit louder 😆
their kiss was so romantic and hot ❤️😳
love the way arjun samjhaofied riyaz
and the punch was awesome :)
awww riya fell asleep in car
love the way riya said " don't shoot me mein toh sirf khane ke liye kuch" :)
awww arjun made her sit on the kitchen counter and prepared food for her :)
arjun is really so caring :)
oh so that's how she recorded everything
everything she was saying in recording was beautiful :)
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
please continue very soon

P.S. : this is my favorite ariya story on arjun forum
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

kya yr update de na.. jaldi se.. cant wait.. for ur update "riya is in arjun's arm".. oh gosh! damn excited

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow di
bt teaser..
Aap na bade he.. Bade hi.. Bade hi..jada tease karte hain hume
ab arjun itna hot mood mai aur aap teaser de rahi ho..
Nt fair di.
And 25 chap..ho.. Shocked. Ye kya hai. Arjun sleeping beside riya..
Ab toh update chahiye...
Di update
update
update
update...

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