ArHi FF! The Cult [Completed]

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#921

first of all really sorry for late comments

i was busy with my internals and final exams

but i'm free now...here u have completed this story

really loved the updates

suspense got on to me update after update

i know it was stupid of me to expect a happy ending

cult's always end this way

it must have been difficult for khushi to take this decision

then write that letter to arnav

really wish they would have met in some other circumstances

they could live normally

but this isn't the case

arnav withdrawed from case

must be difficult for him too..

he lost a lot too...his only living family and khushi

but glad he has his team

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Arshidewani

@Arshidewani

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#922

Fantastic work. I am new to IF and am delighted to find work of such high caliber! Your stories are so refreshingly different, so intense & gripping and of course so thought provoking. I applaud not only the research you must have taken to draft the story lines, but also your story telling and how it pulls the readers in. I was drawn to IF due to Arhi characters & have stayed loyal to only Arhi stories, but am seriously tempted to read your other character stories! And am sure I will not be disappointed.

Btw Criminal Minds fascinate me too but have not paid attention to the dialogues. I am now alerted!

Keep writing RB...

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gayathri-murali

@gayathri-murali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#923

Hai... What an awsome piece of work... There's suspense till the end... So many cliffhangers...gr8 prof work yaar...I m sry I cm across this work late... Buts

Glad. I did.. I got to read all parts in one go without having to wait for the nxt update😉.

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ayu_tripathi

@ayu_tripathi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#924

this was indeed a beautiful story!!

I was so dreading reading the last chapter..hoped that khushi would actually be out and safe however that would not be justifiable..she had to put an end to it..

I was crying reading the letter..it was so touching she knew she had no other way out and they could do nothing but accept it..loved it !!

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thephoenixenigm

@thephoenixenigm

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#925

i absolutely love your story!!

the mystery,thrill,exitement the awesome bromances the relationship dynamics ...and i cant believe that i hadn't read this..

simply awesome

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#926

Wow this was a study on cults,

just amazing,

hard hitting ,brutally honest, true to real world,

It was as if the something actually happening out there!!

You know the only sore point for me was the price Khushi and Arnav both had to pay, the sacrifice they had to make, because someone close to them, dear to them made a mistake or maybe more of a sin they committed!!!

Both of them lost a chance they had of a real life with each other!!

She paid with her life, he with her death!!

Its true if your family makes a mess, you have to step in to clean it, maybe this is what they did!!

Shyam and Arav would have 2nd chance, Arjun and other victim's kin would get closure!!

The team would move on, slowly but still move on!!!

Arnav is alone!!

Gosh you are a Thriller Barbie!!

Hats Off!!

Take Care!!

😊

Edited by loves_aishu - 11 years ago

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vanility

@vanility

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#927

I just loved it. This is the first story I as m reading from Arnav perspective.
Thanks so much.

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akai

@akai

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#928

I don't know what to say. My mind is full of pain. Pain for people who are unwillingly pushed to this types of places.

My heart will always beat for happy ending but my mind agree with your decision. Because, I know the end is justified.

Ur really amazing. I don't know Kushi s sacrifice is worth?

I agree with arnav, it's give time for them to do things rite.

I feel for arnav.

Left in this world alone without no one in his side.

Ur awesome writer, I can understand in ur way of writing.

How much u would have worked to pen this thought.

I salute you.

Hates off.

😛

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snehased

@snehased

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#929

Hey,
In past 2 days i hav read 2 of ur stories. Escape velocity and the cult. And let me tell u first of all. I havnt read any thing like this in near past. Amazing story with amazing concept and style of writing. Grt wrk. With escape velocity i was left wndring, if u hav dne sme phd with criminal psychology, the way u hav taken up the experiment set up.
But then with Cult, it seems too much of history involved. And let me tell u, i felt like reading sme indian verson of DAN BROWN'S DA VINCI.
One thing common in both ur story, hw much ever i tried scratching my head with gussing wht wud cme next in the story (i love doing tht with suspense based stories), i cud nt immagine wht actually came next. Gripped to the story till end.

I see a budding writter here. I wud love to read all ur other stories.