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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update! Superr hot continuee soon and thanxz for da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow ...!! Superb best ...
Really no words
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Yay...an os... 😃 shiv awesome tha yaar... 👏 👏 lived every bit of it especially virman hot romance 😳 😳 so virat give maanvi suprise fr her birthday...so romantic 😳 luved the cute angry scene between virman...n virman dance... 😳 luved it... ⭐️ ⭐️ n their hot romance... ☺️ it was hot... ☺️ i was blusing like anything while reading it... ☺️ see i m blushing even now... ☺️superb tha shiv...continue soon...thnks fr the pm... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Shivali...Hw r u? Hope gud...m so sorry 4 da late comment,,,I hope u understand...dis OS was AWESOME YAAR...hot n romantic...Really loved da surprise part...Maanvi is sho spl yaar...Mujhe koi Viraat dedo..😛😳Luvd da dance sequence, da song was awesome...Lovely, romantic...Flirt Viraat...blushing Mannu...Haaye...LOL Viren n Jeevika...dey kept on calling dem love birds...😆n finally she gave herself 2 him...completely...Uff...Juz Awesome...really lovely OS Shivi...thnk u so much 4 dis..😳☺️hot n romantic OS...Tum Hi HO dimaag par chadh gaya tha kya tumhara?lol😆thnk u once again...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ahahahahhaha virat cant resist lovely work yar continue it thanku
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Bf ji sorry for being so late
The update is superb!
Loved it..❤️
Loved Virman romance..
You're a great writer..I must say!
Edited by Natasha137 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
hey di it was so hot n romantic😳 n plz update soon n pm me🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
It was so beautiful & yet again so damn hot!!!!!!!😳😉

Loved it like hell!!!!!😊

Must say, great attempt!😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello hello hello peeps i am back again with this os. ya ya ya i know i am very late for this os. but kya karu it is completely fill with romance so intance romance likhne mein time aur sharam dono chayiye na 🤣 so here we go with the next part of " you complete me" and it will be the last part of this os😳 so have look and tell me how's that😳 chalo let's start the coundown
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next day manvi came to her drama acadamy and met jeevika there. every guy was looking at her with open mouth as she was looking very sexy and hot but she ignored all this b'coz she don't cared about that as she was belonged to only one person and that was virat vadhera. manvi reached to jeevika and hugged her tightly and they both headed toward the rehersal hall. and manvi was smiling continously. jeevika looked at her smiling face and smirked. she nugded her
jeevika: btw manvi where were you and virat had gone in the middle of party leaving us alone (manvi stopped in her track and looked at jeevika who was grinning at her.)
manvi: umm no where jeevika actually i..i..wa..was feeling low so..so virat take me home that's it (she was stammering while talking and jeevika raised her eyebrow at her)
jeevika: home kiske tumhare ya uske (jeevika winked at her and manvi blushed and looked at another side)
manvi: shut up jeevs nothing like that (she protested but jeevika caught her)
jeevika: oh common manvi there is no use to hide anything from me. and you know your face is telling me everything that what would happened on your b'day night..so be a good girl and tell me did you and virat i mean (manvi blushed more and looked down not meeting her gaze with jeevika and jeevika understoode her silence) omg it means you guys did it ( she asked openeing her mouth in o shape)
manvi: yes we become on on that day (she said looking down blushing. jeevika opened her mouth in shock..after that they both didn't speak a word and headed toward the hall)
20 days later
manvi enetered in her house happily. she locked the main door and turned to go toward her room when she felt a sharp pain on her cheek and fell on the floor. blood started coming from the corner of her lip. she placedher hond on her cheek where someone slapped her and looked up. her eyes gotten wide in shock when she saw her maternal uncle and aunt . she stood up on her feet and looked at them scared
manvi: uncle au..aunty (she stammered. her aunty came to her and again slapped her on her left cheek. manvi winced in pain)
aunt: where were you (she asked looking at her angerily)
manvi: aunty i..i was at acadamy (she was shivering in fear b'coz her maternal parents were very cruel people and they can do anything. it had become their hobby now to tortured and hurt her)
aunt: listen to me one thing very carefully. from tomorrow you are not going anywhere b'coz you are getting marry in this weekend got it (her aunt declared evily and manvi was beyond shocked to heard this news..how can she marry any stranger. she only belong to virat)
manvi: but aunty how could you do this to me? i am not going to marry with anyone (she raised her voice infront of the for the first time b'coz it was the mater of her whole life. her uncle got angry and he came to her. he pulled her hairs harshly in a fist)
uncle: how dare you to raised your voice infront of us..didn't you hear that what she just said. you are getting marry in this weekend and that's final..and don't you dare to be clever understood (then he dragged her in her room and pushed her on the floor and locked the door from outside. manvi got up from the floor and pleaded them but they didn't show any mercy on her)
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two days had been passed by and manvi was still locked in her room. here virat called her several time but she wasn't picking up her phone and just crying her heart out..virat also asked about her from jeevika and viren but they also didn't know about her whereabouts..both three were getting worried for her like hell. her manvi was feeling sick and low from morning and she was puking continously..somehow manvi knew that what was happening with her but wasn't sure..first she wanted to be sure but how? she got a chance when maid came to her room to giving her food..manvi asked her for help. first she hesitated but then agree b'coz manvi gave her lot of money..maid bought what manvi said to her. manvi took the pregnancy kit from her and take a test. to her shock test was positive. she wanted to tell this virat but her maternal uncle and aunt snatched her phone.
it was late at night and manvi was still awake laying on her bed and crying snuggling with the pillow. her uncle aunt were sleeping peacefully..but here manvi's sleep was flew away like a bird..she was crying bitterly when she felt a hand on her shoulder. she got scared and turned with a jerk..what she saw next was beyond shocked. she saw the person for whome she was willing for from past two days. yes she saw her love of life her virat.
manvi: virat (she flung herself in his arms and hugged him tightly to never let him go. virat too hugged her back. she was feeling safe and protective in his arms. she was feeling comfortable in his embrace and missing his warmth from last two days. virat who was still silent to saw her in that state rubbed her back to calm her. once she calmed down and only little sobs were coming out he gently broke the hug and looked at her who was still sobbing. he removed the hairs from her face and wiped her tears. he cupped her face in his palm and manvi hissed in pain
manvi: ouch (escaped from her mouth and she hold his hand which were on her cheek. virat moved his hand from her cheeks and saw marks of fingers on her cheek)
virat: manvi who did this tell me who did this? (he was fuming in anger and his eyes were blood shoot red)
manvi: virat wo..woh aunty and uncle (before she could complete virat stood up)
virat: how dared they to raised their hand on you. i will kill the (he spoke loudly but manvi hold his hand asked him to calm down)
manvi: virat plz speak slowly if they listen this they will kill me plz (she pleaded and virat looked at her angerily)
virat: manvi tell me the truth what happened in these two days (he said holding her from shoulder. and manvi tell him the whole truth that they are trying to getting her marry in this weekend forcefully but she didn't told him about her pregnancy)
manvi: virat plz do something i can't live without you..i'll die without you (she again started crying and hugged him tightly. virat too hugged her tightly)
virat: don't worry manvi you are just mine and noone can snatch you from me i promise( he kissed in her hairs and broke the hug. then he placed his hand on her cheek) is it paining (manvi nodded in yes cutely and virat smiled at her. he leaned toward her face and kissed on her cheek. manvi closed her eyes feeling his touch) now (he said looking into her eyes and manvi pointed toward her other cheek. virat again smiled and kissed on her left cheek) now (he again asked her and manvi nodded in no) don't worry i'll fix everything ok
manvi: hmm (she just said this and looked down. virat felt something fishy. he held up her chin and looked into her eyes)
virat: what happened don't you trust me (he said looking into her eyes)
manvi: it's nothing like that virat i trust you more than myself (she said looking here and there but not him)
virat: then what is bothering you tell me
manvi: virat wo..wo actually i want to say that that (she was lacking for words)
virat: speak up baby i am listening come on (he encouraged her. manvi closed her eyes and took a deep breath and open her eyes again)
manvi: virat i am pregnent (she said in one breath and closed her eyes tightly with the fear that he will leave her after hearing this news. after five mins when she got no reply from him she looked at him who was looking expressionless and numb. this made manvi scared..she shruuged him)
manvi: virat what happened don't you want this child (she asked scared and he came to sense after heard her words)
virat: what did you say (he was still in daze)
manvi: i said don't you want this child
virat: no before that
manvi: i am pregnent (after hearing this a big smile came on his lips and he picked her up in his arms and twirled her round)
manvi: virat what are you doing plz put me down i am feeling dizzy (virat stopped and put her down)
virat: oops sorry actually i was so excited that you know (he ran his fingers in his hairs)
manvi: means you have no problem with this child
virat; ofcourse not. arrey i am going to be a father so i am very happy (he pulled manvi into big hug happily and digged his face in her neck deeply inhaling her scent..they both were feeling complete. virat broke the hug and looked at her) thank u so much (and within a second he crashed his lips with her and both kissed each other passionately..
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the last day of the week mean sunday was coming near and manvi was getting restless with each passing second. her maternal uncle hadarranged tight security so tha manvi couldn't get any chance to ran from there. but as we all know that two pepole who are crazily and madly in love no one can stop them. so virat got a chance to enter in manvi's house with the help of virika and virman eloped and got court marriage. virika were witness of their marrige. now her uncle aunt couldn't do any thing b'coz both virman were adult and they married with the permission of court
virman entered their new life, a new world. world of happiness. virman were at the entrance of virat's house. virat extended his hand toward manvi
virat: shall we (virat asked her for her hand and manvi placed her hand in his and they both stepped in the house togather) welcome to our new world wify (he winked at her causing her blush in crimson red colour) hayee if you will blush like that then how will we take next step (he said moving closer to her and manvi blushed more b'coz she very well knew his meaning of next step. she slightly punched on his chest)

read 18+ kids just go away from here or else close your eyes😳

manvi: shut up have some shame chep (virat pretended to hurt and rubbed his chest)
virat: agar sharam hoti toh yeh sab kaise hota (he said pointed toward her belly. manvi opened her mouth in o shape)
manvi: virat (but before she spoke further virat locked her lips with his and started moving his lips)
suno na kahe kya suno na
dil mera sunlo zara
teri bahon mein mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
teri bahon mein hogi subah
first their kiss was very gentle but slowly they started kissing wildly and passionately pulling each other closer..virat's hands were roaming behind her back and her hands were playing with his hairs..virat picked her up without breaking the kiss and take her inside their room which was decorated with flowers and candles..he closed the door with his foot behind him. they broke the kiss breathing heavily but still in each others arms and joined their forhead
Be intehaan be intehaan
yun payar kar be intehaan
dekha karun sari umar
tere nishan be intehaan
koi kasar na rahe meri khabar na rahe
choole mujhe iss kadar be intehaan
he again took her lips in his kissing her hungerly with wild desires..they both were lost deeply in the kiss and their tongues were exploring each other's mouth with full of passion and desires. they were kissing like their is no tomorrow and want to lived that moment like eternity.
jab sanso mein teri sansein ghuli toh
phir sulgne lage
ehsaas mere mujhse kehne lage
Aa bahon mein teri aake jahan do yun simatne lage
sailab jaise koi behne lage
khoya hoon main aagosh mein
tu bhi kahan ab hosh mein
makhmali raat ki ho na subah
be intehaan be intehaan
yun payar kar be intehaan
they broke the kiss after kissing passionately breathing heavily but virat didn't stop yet and started kissing her neck passionately leaving trailed of wet kisses. he kissed in the crook of her neck. manvi was totally lost in his wild love. it didn't mean that they didn't make love before but this was something new for her. a new experience of her life as a wife of her chep with whom she was madly in love and she was enjoying his every touch. virat looked at manvi passionately and desires in his eyes. he whispered in her ears
virat: i love you (in husky voice)
manvi: i love you too ( she replied with same passion)
they lost in each others eyes. virat circled his one hand arround her back and other behind her neck pulling her body closer to him and again kissed her passionately and their passion increased with passing time and she parted her lips to let him explore her mouth with his tongue and they started licking and tated each others mouth wildly. he slide his hand on her lower abck and her hands were on his chest feeling his heartbeats and she pulled him more closer holding his shirt in her little fist. virat smiled in his kiss and manvi felt his smile.. she wanted to feel his love again for her.
while nibbling her lower lip he scooped her in his arms swiftly and laid her on bed which was decorated with rose pattles. he leaned toward her forhead and kissed their then both eyes and cheeks. then again he took her lips in his and they kissed passionately leaving each other breathless..her hands reached to his buttons of shirt and unbottoned his shirt. she moved his hands on his bare chest seductively and she was kissing him leaving damp imprints behind which made virat groaned in pleasure.
he took his hairs in a fist and kissed her throat hungerly. then moved down toward her neck and was giving her love bite with every kiss. she moaned in sweet torture. virat pulled off his shirt and moved his hands all over his body removing all the barriers between them one by oneshe moand as she felt his hand stroking her sensitive parts and a sensation coiled through her. virat looked at her for her permission and she gave him her sweet smile and closed her eyes in anticipation. he slided his hands down parting her theighs and before she could react he gently thrust into her and a lone tear came out from her eyes but virat wiped that tear immediately..they moved in harmony till they reached the heights of love and passion moaning each others name. after making love for hours and fulfilling their desires. he collapesd beside her breathing heavily and their hearts were beating ubnormally..when their breaths calmed down virat looked at manvi and pulled her into his warm embrace kissing her embrace
virat: thanks for completeing me (he said digging his face in her hairs inhaling her sweet smell)
manvi: you also complete me virat without you i am nothing and this baby (placing her hand on her belly) this baby is the symbol of our love (she said proudly)
virat: it means we complete each other (he said passionately and captured her lips in a passionate kiss. and driffted to the deep slumber after making love passionately and it was just starting of their nmarried life for the newly wedded couple there was just love only love
virmans love

hmmm so tell me how's that did you guys liked it or not. if yes then plz plz plz press the like button and obviously your feedback😳
i'll wait for your precious comment as they are meant a lot to me. so your time stars now hurry up guyss😳
love you all🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Res...

sorry for late
bt
update was superb...
Liked it..
Awesome one...
Like virmaan... Hate who hit her..
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago

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