TaaRey SS:Do Ajnaabi:Pg34last part

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Arbitrator.

@Arbitrator.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

Chap 3...
Wow... Very cute and sweet...
Rey calling taani her wife... Haaye...
Next update me end?? Haww... Rushing to read next part...
Sorry exam time h... So late ho gai debu di... :(

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Shweta

@2111_shweta

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

Debu m really SORRY for comenting this late...

End was really emotional...never thought ki end aisa hoga...

Taani angry on Rey...n Rey crying😭😭

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Diya

@foreverlazy

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+ 16

Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Debu, read it all in one go!

Seriously, great job!

Can't for season 2.

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Pankhuri

@pan02

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

a very beautiful os written by you.. 😊

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928725

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

👏 👏 👏 👏
WAO DEBU DI ...
LUVED IT 😆 😆 😆 😆
SUCH A SUPERB SS SUPERAWESUM
LUVED TAANI N REY... 😃

BUT SAD ENDING NOT DONE 😡

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Omg Reyansh Rey so talkative hahaha can't believe... Hmm Taani gud listener..
I lubd Rey's gving answer o i cn say his dialouge fab
spcially

"So, I can also call you Taani nah, Ms Taani cz it has not proved yet ke I can love you or not..wo aap bole nah, log payar se aapko Taani hi bulate..
Nd
when you will get married nah, I will perform there a special dance step, now we have become pakka wala dost nah...
Hahaha..

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Again awesum... Cn't stop laughing...lolzz while eating he doesn't want any disturbance so He didn't not noticed when Taani has come and sit besides him. Again Reys dialoge Three Hundred and Thirty Three of bus fare and here Forty Five rupees adding to it, so it comes that figure, now clear toh?? I never cheat with anyone, in terms of money or in terms of anything and I never allow anyone to cheat with me too Three Hundred and Ninety Eight including the price of that broken Lass glass which was so lively few minutes back, so unfortunately it went to your hand "Oyye..you think me as a waiter..I will not bring it, Maharani Ji... M thinking abt his expression wen he said ol dis

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Chap 3
u r amazing writer

Rey adding ech amount...hahaha...

Chap 4..
He impressed cop nt bad...
Last ws bit sad..

Taani soo cute in whole story
Rey totally different...lubd dis Rey...so innocent.adorable...

Keep updting..