~First Love With A Bad Guy~SwaRon SS

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reet_26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Nice cocept

Awesome update

thanks for coming back

plz continue your other ff

A Marriage with an eligible bachelor and dil hai tumhara

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Loved it

Had awesome fun reading it

Keep writing like this

Thanx for d pm

Update soon will be waiting for it😃

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TANHA_H

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Awosm Great Start 👏👏

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Misha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Very nice update... do continue and thanx for pm!!!

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prateek

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Hello Anindita,i am glad to see u back here...So,first and most of all..A worm welcome on IF once again.

And i am happy that u are back with new SS of swaron..So i only say..keep going and keep updating..

Now,Its new and amazing concept..i really liked it...And i know,its really interesting ahead..So keep updating...

Now moving on to chapter 1.. I really liked u'r starting here with fresh afternoon of sunday...Sharon was reading a novel...I just loved the introduction part of Swaron...Swayam as bad boy...and sharon as a poor one to deal with bad boy swayam...But i like their first meet..

Its great that swaron are enemies from begining..becoz it makes a super twist ahead...really exciting ahead...Then swayam entry part was Oosum..he is back to his home...Sharon was shoked to seeing him...After that swayam nautanki part was amazing to get back his room again...Sharon was shoked to see him dancing...Now sharon was really worried...

So,at last..its Oosum start..Keep updating and if possible then continued u'r previous FF's..becoz i really loved FF "Dil Hain Tumara"..So,keep trying to update soon...And sorry for late comment..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

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Anushka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Amazing update
Loved swayam's entry
Plz do continue soon 😊 😊

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Anindita Dhar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Yay u r back .. was waiting for u..
Aweaome concept .. waiting for the next chappy

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Maneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

amazing

loved it

please pm me when you update

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Heena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Nice update...please pm me when u update again! 😊

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Anindita Sengupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey my cutie pie...🤗

Such an awesome chapter...the beginning was en-thrilling...wooo...

She looked towards the direction from where the shirt came and was startled to see the sight in front her eyes. She saw a tall boy, shirtless standing in front of her who was unzipping his jeans. She couldn't see his face as he was facing his back towards her.
She didn't know what to do. She started to shout at the top of her voice. The boy turned around and he was also shocked to see a girl shouting at the top of her voice looking at him. He rushed towards her and covered her mouth with his hands.

I was stunned for a moment...i thought may be some kidnapping or something worse will happen...u know very well how to keep the reader waiting for next part

The cute mischievous Swayam...poor sharon...under same roof..its gonna in fun...with ur writing skills..it will be just amazing...

Loved the update baby...

As i said ...so glad to see u back...missed u ..LOVE U

Luv
Ur DI

Thank you so much Di for ur lovely comment and for ur kind words. N i missed u too like hell. Love u a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: zb456789
I m glad that you are back that to with a bang n bang on update
Fadoo wala lovely
Thanks for the pm

Thank you so much dear for ur lovely comment. I am glad u liked the update. 😊

Originally posted by: -shenz-
nice piece of work.. great fun.. loved it..

Thank you so much dear. I am glad u liked it. 😊

Originally posted by: nature2
res til read Done

hurry 1 round n 100 Awosm start ani 👏👏

😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

ot mein kya bolu👏👏👏👏👏👏

update soon

plz like on fb
https://www.facebook.com/pages/I-Dontwanna-hate-u-anymore/430515850377727

Thank you so much Neeraj. I guess i updated pretty soon 😛

Originally posted by: Twinkle_d3
Great start...
Swayam u badmash boy..
Poor sharon ...
Waiting for nxt part

Thank you so much Saloni. Indeed Swayam is a badmaash boy 😆

Originally posted by: yogini64
cool...😊
itni si age me apna after effect.. hain?? 😲
swayam is soo irritating 😡
poor sharon... ye to gyi kaam se...
abhi se itna nautanki hai... 😆
roz ek nayi prank karega fir toh...😳

Hey Yogini! Yes Swayam is and will be really irritating in this SS. Thank you so much for ur lovely comment. 😊

Originally posted by: neeliyer
Swaron's intro can't get any better than this .. kinda liking the cunning nature swayam .. waiting for the next chapter ..

Update soon..

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. N Swayam is lovable in every avatar. 😎

Originally posted by: spongy
SWARON intro was amazing
it couldnt be much better
it was just wow!!!!! 😉😉😉

liking swayam nature... 😛😛😛
it's different 😊😊😊

loved the upate nice start
intro toh aacha tha hi...

thank for the pm
please upate soon
and dont forget to pm me
waiting for the next update 😊😊

Thank you much for ur lovely comment dear. I glad u liked it and Swayam is truly different here from his Majnu boy image but he is awesome in any of his avatar

Originally posted by: sanstina
res

Hey Tina, do unres when u get time 😊

Originally posted by: Neeti96
Di you came back to the forum and started a SS?!😲And I saw it now! Ok first of all, welcome back😆Secondly, I LOVED the concept of your SS. Sharon and Swayam shuru se hi dushman?😆Hahaha. Your first chapter was very well written. Initially I was a little confused but then the confusion got sorted out after his mom came in😊Seems like a fun SS. Can't wait for Chapter 2!

Thanks for the PM😃

Hey Neeti 🤗 Thanks for ur warm welcome 😆 and about the confusion part, SwaRon's meeting has to be different..right?? 😉 I am glad u liked the concept. Thanks for the lovely comment dear 😃

Originally posted by: SwaRon_rocks
Res..unres after a week..dont stop sending pm's..

Sure dear. I will keep sending u pms. 😊 whenever u get time, unres this post. N I guess u have exams. So all the best. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: basket_101
Heyy Ani!! : Hope you don't mind me calling you that... :P
Hinal here (:
I got so happy to see another pm from you in my inbox :D
And once again, super interesting concept!
Loved the first chapter!
I totallly love Swayam's character 😆
Really excited to read more of the SS!
Thanks for the pm!
Eager to read more :)
Take care <3
Hinal

Hey Hinal. Of course u can call me Ani. There is no need to ask! N thanks a lot for ur lovely comment. I am glad u liked it. Thank you 😊 N u too take care 😃

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
anindita---first time i have read one of ur writings...

plzzz---do update fast fast bcoz cant wait.

loved it...and the concept---enthralling.

and hee hee sooo different from our bhala boy swayam in d3

love---medha

Medha i am glad u liked the concept and the update. I will surely try to give update as fast as possible. Thank you so much for ur lovely comment. 😃 N yes Swayam is totally different from his Majnu boy image 😆

Originally posted by: tanhawalaswaron
YAYYY.

it was an awesome update! absolutely! Swayam's character seems like that of Satan's child! :P
He's still adorable though. annddd. Sharon...awww poor baby will have to deal with such a devil!

SO happy that you're back!

Love,
Shagun

Hey Shagun. Thank you so much for ur lovely comment. I am glad u liked it. N is Swayam surely is a shaitan here a big time shaitan 😈