~First Love With A Bad Guy~SwaRon SS - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
m sorry for too late reply...

both chappy's r simply amazing sis...
loved it...

and this chappy is really awesome sis...

swayam leaving...😲

eagerly waiting for next chappy...😛
Edited by .....pujan..... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ANOTHER UPDATEEE. :D

Swayam loves Sharon! He was ALWAYS in love with her, kitna pyaara hai! Sharon ko photo mein dekh kar he lost his heart! <3

Shit, yaar. Kitna suna diya bechare ko Sharon ne but she was reasonable afterall. Hayyeee, these guys love each other SO MUCH!

HAW.
Swayam jaa raha hai! :C
hopefully Sharon usse mana legi!

ps: thanks for the pm!

Love,
Shagun
Edited by tanhawalaswaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter-3

Its OOosum and such a enjoyfull update...I like u'r starting..sharon was making lunch for school and then swayam's entry...And he spoiled her lunch..
She is now completely falling for him...

Its so sweet of swayam to make maggi for sharon...And i really enjoyed whole school part..Swayam was coming with maggi...She was litte bit jealous becoz of her friend tina's words...And then "aman"'s entry..All of the scenes was such a beautifull to read...i like it..

Now swayam is also feel something for sharon..as a result..he was jealous of aman..And then kissing part was shoking but amazing...Swayam kissed sharon in front of all students...and Sharon got resticated for a week...Poor sharon...Very well written..

At last, its really interesting ahead...So,keep update..

Thanx for pm..and yes unres my previous comment on pg no 9..

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter-4

Its really amazing update..i just loved to read this one...U beautifully penned down the emotions of sharon as well as swayam...And i really enjoyed this chapter..

In previous updates,i was thinking that swayam was a brat..but no he is also equally in love with her...He is always in love with her...He came to mumbai just to see sharon.."its really great"...But sharon misunderstood him...She was hurting him with painfull words...But sharon was also right on her place...

Anyways Now,i just loved the loverboy image of swayam..Finally he confess his feeling for sharon..its OOosum..So,its really interesting ahead to see how sharon confess her love...

Very well written...emotions and dialouges are completely justified...So at last,keep update soon..and yes sorry for late comment..

Thanx for PM

Prateek
Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME DEAR LOVED IT TRULY
CONTINUE SOON N THANKS 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Baby🤗

That was one explosive update...u portrayed Sharon's fear..her apprehension...her reasons so beautifully...Swayam's reaction to her accusation was equally impactful...

Falling in love is beautiful..but the fear attached to is terrible...is can ruin the moment...Sharon's reaction was not wrong...her fear was right at its place...

Swayam's reaction...his sudden confession was beautifully described...just like Sharon he was also equally affected by her...

Twist in the tale...Swayam has decided to go back...m sure u will make sharon stop him...😳

Loved the update baby👏

Update soon

Luv
Ur DI
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Swayam loved sharon already.?? Sharon's words must must have hurt him soo much.. She misunderstood his emotions.. She needs 2 tel him the truth that she isn't scared f him and his love..I hope their misunderstandings are cleared.. Update the next part soon dear..:).
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...
wow loved it
itna jaldi update...
im very happy
😆

thank u so much for the pm
update soon
dont forget to pm me



P.S. sorry for short update...
busy right now 😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Well that escalated quickly😆Swayam toh turned out to be a full on lover boy only😉He came to Mumbai just to see Sharon, awww. I kind of feel bad for both of them. But I love the way Swayam told her he loved her😳Continue soon. And thanks for PM-ing me😃

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