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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: -Shalu-

Thank you for the pm.. Ah-huh! So Khushi is falling for ASR's devastatingly good looks huh! I knew it would happen sooner or later.. :P

I wonder how she will react when she meets him face to face.. & I also wonder how ASR's personality will be like, whether he will be the usual ASR- like sadu self or will he be friendly and jovial like Barun? Can't wait to find out! :D


Hey...thanks for dropping by! 😊
The way I see it is, ASR is handsome...there is no two way about it. So Khushi, who is young and unattached, naturally feels affected by him. So she has not really fallen for him, but she is attracted to him!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Hey, just found this story and read all the chapters...I think it's really well written and I like the concept of it. Khushi is physically attracted to Arnav just after seeing clips of him, I wonder how she will react when she encounters him in person...I really hope you continue with this story as it has so much potential!

The inspiration for your title, is it the One Fine Day with George Clooney and Michelle Pfiefer? If so, I have to tell you, it's one of my absolute favorite movies, I haven't seen it in so long now, but it's definitely a great film (George Clooney at his best😉).

Hope you will PM when you update next...will send you a buddy request.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: A_BA

Hey, just found this story and read all the chapters...I think it's really well written and I like the concept of it. Khushi is physically attracted to Arnav just after seeing clips of him, I wonder how she will react when she encounters him in person...I really hope you continue with this story as it has so much potential!

The inspiration for your title, is it the One Fine Day with George Clooney and Michelle Pfiefer? If so, I have to tell you, it's one of my absolute favorite movies, I haven't seen it in so long now, but it's definitely a great film (George Clooney at his best😉).

Hope you will PM when you update next...will send you a buddy request.


First of all, thank you for taking time out to read this story. Being appreciated by a fellow authoress has definitely boosted up my confidence level by a few notches. Honestly, I was wondering if I should continue with this story owing to the lukewarm response that I have received. I was really beginning to question the merits of the concept as well as my writing. But as long as readers like you are with me on this journey, I am definitely going to go ahead with it.

The title was taken from the movie "One fine Day". It's one of my all time favorites as well.

Regarding pm's, being a newbie, I am not allowed to send pm's containing a link. but I will definitely let you when I update next.

And, I am definitely going to catch up on your story. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Thanks for the PM and your comment on my last post. If it's too much trouble to send PM's, don't worry about it, I will follow the threads.

I will definitely be following your story going forward. You write so well and hopefully more people will start reading your story.

I personally don't consider myself a writer, I just started my SS as I wanted to re-imagine how the show would be if Arnav hadn't witnessed the terrace scene. When I started, I didn't have that many readers/comments, and it's hard feeling motivated to continue, but I still wrote for the few people who followed the story, and now I have some regulars!

When I post my next update, I'll try to put up a link of your story, as I honestly think it's really nicely done, and I'm really eager to see where you are going to go with this story moving forward. I just hope I remember to do so!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
I loved it
So asr ka entry
Update soon
Please Pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
aww she met Arnav's mommy!
great updt.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Ah, so Khushi is at Arnav's home already & met his mum.. Very excited for their 1st meeting.. :D

Btw just a suggestion, perhaps you can link your story to your signature? That way, whenever you comment in the forum, a reader might be tempted to check out your SS. Thats how i found a couple of good stories.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh wow she met his Mom...i find it really endearing to watch a grown man asking his MOm for food...i have always lived in big families and now that i live alone i miss that early morning cooking of Mom's...sigh...i am jealous...he is going to get hot parathas and i'll have to be content with cornfalkes... Enough of my ramblings...so finally they will meet in the next update...looking forward to it...will the presence of a third person affect their first meet??? Iam very intrigued right now to see how its going to go ...can we have the next update??? Pretty please???😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: A_BA

Thanks for the PM and your comment on my last post. If it's too much trouble to send PM's, don't worry about it, I will follow the threads.

I will definitely be following your story going forward. You write so well and hopefully more people will start reading your story.

I personally don't consider myself a writer, I just started my SS as I wanted to re-imagine how the show would be if Arnav hadn't witnessed the terrace scene. When I started, I didn't have that many readers/comments, and it's hard feeling motivated to continue, but I still wrote for the few people who followed the story, and now I have some regulars!

When I post my next update, I'll try to put up a link of your story, as I honestly think it's really nicely done, and I'm really eager to see where you are going to go with this story moving forward. I just hope I remember to do so!!


Thanks so much dear! I really appreciate it! You are a sweetheart!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Shweta1691

Oh wow she met his Mom...i find it really endearing to watch a grown man asking his MOm for food...i have always lived in big families and now that i live alone i miss that early morning cooking of Mom's...sigh...i am jealous...he is going to get hot parathas and i'll have to be content with cornfalkes... Enough of my ramblings...so finally they will meet in the next update...looking forward to it...will the presence of a third person affect their first meet??? Iam very intrigued right now to see how its going to go ...can we have the next update??? Pretty please???😊


I'm still working on the next chapter! Will update as soon as I am done! 😊

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