Taarey ff - tujhse juda hona - part 3 page 27

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i know many people will think why i'm not updating my other ff well the reason you will know at the end and yeah guys this story came to my mind so socha os write karloon 😊and yeah this os will start with current track
Part 1 - page 1
part 2 - page 14
part 3 - page 27
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after break-up Taani was feeling very low she wanted to cry badly but she thought to tell about rey's truth to tauji
Tauji and Taani were in livingroom
Taani - ( scared ) tauji mujhe aap ko kuch betana hai
Tauji - ( smiling ) haan bolo betha
Taani - ( scared ) wooh ,,... woh main yehhh...
Tauji - ( smiling ) ab bol bhi do itana darr (scared) kyon rahi ho
Taani - ( with tears in her eyes ) tauji woh maine aap se ek sach chupaya hai
Tauji - ( worried ) Taani you are crying , that means something is very serious , bolo betha kya huwa , kya chupaya hai tumne , dekho i know you are not wrong , plzzz mujhe betao ,kya chupaya hai tumne
Taani - ( crying+scared) taujhi woh... r... woh rey ek dancer hai
tauji - ( shocked ) what !!!! but how , i mean kaise mujhe kaise nahi pata
Taani - ( scared ) kyonki maine unse kaha tah ke woh aap se kuch na kahe
Tauji - but kyon taani , tum mujhse uski dancer hone ki baath kyon chupayi
Taani - ( crying ) kyonki mujhe pata hai ke aap dance se hate karte hai , and main nahi chahti ke aap rey se hate karein just because woh ek dancer hai , kyonki main unse pyaar karti hoon ,
Thap a slap came on Taani's face
Tauji - ( angry+shouting ) tumari itani himmat ke tum ek ladke ke liye , mujhse choot ( lie) bologi , can't believe meri Taani ne mujhse se choot bola , i really didn't expect that from you, you know what apne bag pack karo hum 2 days ke ander jodhpur waapas jayenghe, and i'm sure swayam ko bhi sach pata hoga
Taani - ( scared ) nahi plzzz tauji , bhai ki koi galti nahi hai , meri hi fault hai , maine unse promise liya tah , aap se sach chupane ke liye
Tauji - ( angry) just shut-up and go to your room ,
Tauji left from living-room for his important work and Taani run to her room , but swayam who secretly saw everything was shocked.
swayam to himself - yeh sab kya ho gaya , i mean ab kya hoga papa ko toh sab sach pata chall gaya , main rey ko call karta hoon and usse poochta hoon , nahi nahi swayam rey ko call mat kar yeh uski and Taani ke beech ki baath hai , mujhe is mein nahi aana chahiye
Taani was crying in her room badly
Taani - ( crying+shouting) krishnaji maine aisa kya kiya , maine bas rey se pyaar kiya tah and mujhe uski saza mili, main nahi chahti ke woh mujhse dur jaayen , main jaanti thi ke tauji ka aisa hi reaction hoga , or wohi huwa, sab mere against hai , mere paas koi nahi joh mujhse pyaar karta ho , main bas apne zindagi ke akhiri din ( last few days ) rey ke saath guzarna chahti thi , or gang woh bhi mujhse hate karte hai , main bas itana chahti thi ke marne se pehle sab ko yeh prove karoon ke main ek achi GS hoon , but sab mere against hai , jab mujhe pata challe ke mere paas sirf zaida se zaida 8 months hai uss insaan ke saath rehne ke liye jisse main sabse zaida pyaar karti hoon , toh sabse pehle mere saamne rey ka chehra (face) aaya , us din jab unne ne mujhse se pucha ke mera future kiya hai , toh maine sach bol diya , uss waqt mera saamne mera ek hi dream aaya, ke mujhe rey se shaadi karni hai unke saath puri zindagi rehna hai , jab ke mujhe pata hai ke aisa kabhi nahi hoga , aur rey ne hamesha ki tarah mujhe wrong samjah unne lagta hai ke tauji se sach chupane ke liye unse kehna meri galti thi , maine unse dance se dur kiya hai , rey aap ke saath toh dance hamesha rehta but main toh bas kuch din aur hoon is duniya mein aur apne mujhse break-up kar liya , maine aap ko sach is liye nahi betaya so that aap mujhse bina sach jaane pyaar karte , or kaise betati main aap ko ke mujhe CANCER hai , maine socha aap ko taqleef hogi , but aap ko toh koi farak hi nahi mujese , you don't love me ,you don't care about me ,kisi ne nahi mujhse samjah , na aapne , na dance team ne , or nahi BHAI ne , ab tauji bhi mujhse hate karte hai
swayam who was standing behind the door , heard everything ,he was shocked , worried , he wanted to cry badly
swayam to himself - ( crying ) taani ko cancer hai usne kisi ko nahi betaya , meri behan is haalat mein hai , and main apni hi life mein koya hoon , oh god yeh maine kya kar diya , and rey usne taani se break-up kar liya but kyon , mujhe abhi uske paas jaana hoga , usne mere behan ke saath aisa kiya
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guys if you want to continue this story , than you have to click on like , sorry i don't want to be rude but after sending pm to so many people sirf kuch hi reaction milte hai and uski wajah se ab mera write karne ka dil bhi nahi karta and it's hurt, i understand ke aap busy ho, like me and i'm not angry but aisa bohat silint readers bhi hai ,joh read karke leave karte hai , and thats why maine sirf like par click karne ko kaha if you are busy ,hope you all can understand and to other writers i will soon read your story's thats my promise😃
do comment and like if you really like 😃
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chinudolly thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great concept tahira ,
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just awesome , mind blowing fantastic , and emotional as well 😭
i just loved it 2 d core
want 22 give u a tight hug 4 this super awesome story šŸ¤—

plzzz plzzz plzzz update it very soon dear plzzz

love u a lot my sweet dear buddy ā¤ļø

u have 2 update it regularly plzzz 4 your readers and 4 all your friends plzzz
don't want 2 listen any excuse okkk
update now šŸ˜‰
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plz plz plz plz plz plz continue
amazing os
loved it loads
every bit was amazing
plz update nxt part plz
amazing update
loved it loads
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Posted: 12 years ago
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VERY EMOTIONAL... PLS UPDATE SOON.
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Hats off to you, Tahira...
Just loved it so much...
I am so frustrated with the current D3 track that ...Don't even wanna think about it...

But, This story is simply outstanding...

TAANI HAS CANCER!!!!!
Poor Taani! She told everything to Tauji... And he slapped her...

Taani has no one to support her...
She is going through so much pain...
And she just wanted to spend her last days with her love..
And she is not wrong at all...

Rey broke up with her and left her alone in this condition...
If he comes to know the truth, How is he gonna react???
I really want him to realise her importance and not to sympathise...
And Swayam!! He came to know the truth...
Let's see what he does.??

It's an amazing concept.. Do continue it..
Plz. Update the next part as soon as possible...

And also, Plz. Accept my Buddy request...And pm me.. Plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another Awesome Concept!!!
Isse plz continue karna Di!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it! It was really emotional and I really enjoys dreading it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Emotnl n nyc update.cntnu karo jaldi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Taani has cancer?!?!?! 😭 How do you come up with this stuff yaar Tahira?
Anyways, great job and update soon.
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OMG this is so emotional and AMAZING!
Please, please, please jaldi update karo...
And please PM me as well.
šŸ‘ for the great work.

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