Vishakha OS: A Take On KriYansh

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys, it's me again with a new OS, as challenged by Aishu(aishu3003). Hope I'm able to stand by you expectations.


A Take On KriYansh


It had been a week since KriYansh entered into a relationship. Since it was a secret one and not even their friends had the slightest idea about it; they met privately and carefully. They used to get only a little time to soend with the other because of the danger of friends in college and the most important danger Smriti Ghai, kriya's mom. Friends could be tacled easily but dealing with jhansi ki rani equals to creating a problem for your ownself. Though they get less time to spend with the other, they never complained about it.


It was a usual day like daily. KriYansh were in the fire exit spending some quality moments. On hearing the bell ring both got up to leave. Kriya was the first one to leave the fire exit followed by rey. Vishakha, who was passing throught the same corridor observed it. She wondered what these two were doing in the fire exit 'together'. Even if they had some work concerning the GS and AGS, they could've chosen some other place rather than doing it in fire exit secretly.


Ignoring her thoughts she left for the class. Except a few geeks, none of the other students were paying heed to the lecture. Nilesh was busy irritating simmi. Vicky and Neha were lost in their kagu-babu world. Bharat was frying up the brain of Amar. Rinni was busy in telling sharon about her latest shopping trip. Sharon was trying not to get bored due to Rinni and was stealing glances at swayam who was busy admiring her.


Vishakha was busy scanning the class room, what exactly everyone was doing. Her eyes fell on Kriya and Rey. They were busy passing each other chits. Vishakha carefully observed kriya's expression and could easily make out that she was blushing on reading the chit passed by Rey. Her jaws dropped to the floor when she saw Rey winking at Kriya.


Her detective mind was into action then. She was highly suspicious about them. She was sure something was surely cooking between them. She's determined to find out what exactly is going on between them.


The bell rang, indicating the students that they were finally freed from this boredom. Every one dispersed to canteen, leaving behind the gang who too were about to leave for canteen.


"Uh guys Kriya and I will meet you guys in some time...we have an important work to be completed" Said rey.


Except Vishakha none of them bothered about it. KriYansh were about to leave but Vishakha stopped them.


"What work is that??" Vishakha asked doubtfully.


"Err, college related work vish, you know maintaining the student records and all" kriya replied making sure she's convinced.


Vishakha nodded implying a yes. Thought she agreed but still she wasn't contented from Kriya's answer and thus decided to follow them.


She quitely followed them making sure no one suspects on her. As she guessed they entered into the fure exit. On seeing their hands clutched together she was even more shocked. Before she could continue further with her investigation her phone rang, disrupting her thoughts.


*****


The next day repeated the same events like the previous one with some differences. Today Vishakha found KriYansh in rehearsal hall dancing together. They were dancing on the song Mere Bina from the movie crook.


They were dancing so flawlessly syncing perfectly with each other. They were dancing like a flow of river, so calm and serene. A sweet smile was playing on their lips and they were lost in the eyes of the other; drowned in the passion of their love. It seemed so dazzling that for a moment Vishakha stood their completely stunned. She knew they had the chemistry between them but didn't have the idea that it could be an intense one. Theor dance had the ability to capture anyone's eyes. For a moment Vishalha forgot that she was here to collect her bag thar she left in the rehearsal hall.


The song ended and so did Vishakha's thoughts but KriYansh's eye lock didn't break. Vishakha was back into her dubious mode.


She entered the RH faking a cough to get them back into the reality. On hearing a cough KriYansh yanked apart and looked at Vishakha utterly shocked.


Vishakha silently walked towards a corner and picked up her bag. She came and stood in front them and raised a brow and questioned them "what was going on here??"


"Uh actually we were uh just rehearsing" kriya replied nervously.


"Rehearsing for what??" Vishakha questioned back.


"Emm for footloose" rey blurted out.


"As far as I know in footloose its teams who have to participate like dazzlers and weaklings!" Vishakha replied back for which rey bit his tounge.


Before they could explain anything Vishakha spoke "Ah! Chuck it...anyways I'm getting late..see you guys later". Saying this Vishakha left.


Both Kriya and Rey sighed in relief. But little did they know that Vishakha had got to know about their relation. After watching them dance so passionately, Vishkha understood that they were in love. She was also determined this truth to the gang.


That day evening, everyone was in the parking lot when rey quietly pulled kriya aside and requested her to say a reason in front of the gang so that they can go together. Vishakha was observing all this decided to have some fun.


"Kriya, aaj hum saath mein chalte hai" she spoke.


On hearing this kriya immediately looked at rey whose expression had also changed like kriya. Their facial assertions were worth watching. Vishakha tried to surpress her laughter. Having no option left, kriya bid bye to others and a sad bye to rey and left with Vishakha.


*****


They gang had been reitering from the past three hours vigorously taking turns team wise. Finally their pratice ended and rey indicated something to kriya.


"Rey, mujhe aapse kuch kaam hai toh chale??" Kriya spoke on getting a signal from him.


"Yeah let's go" he spoke.


"Kahan jaana hai??" Vishakha interrupted.


"Co..College work" kriya replied trying to sound confidant.


"College work in Fire Exit??" Vishakha replied shocking the gang as well as KriYansh.


"Huh! What do you mean Vishakha...clearly bolo" said swayam.


"Okay, I'll tell it in simple...Kriya and Rey are in a relationship" Vishakha broke the news.


"What??" The gang replied in disbelief while KriYansh were having an aghast expression.


"How do you know??" Vicky asked.


"Well I've been observing these two from past two days...agar chaho toh you can ask them?"


"Guys Vishakha jo keh rahi hai, kya vo sach hai??" Swayam asked. KriYansh nodded a yes.


"What the hell rey? Tum mujhe best friend namesake ke liye hi samjhte ho...itni badi baat batana zaroori samjha" Sharon spoke in an angry tone.


"The same goes for you too Kriya" swayam said.


"Guys sorry...we were actually not sure how you people would react to it...Rey and me..you know" kriya tried to convince them.


"Bataa kar toh dekhte...kya pata we would've been happy then" Nilesh said.


"Sorry guys...Shar, sorry yaar...I know I've done a big mistale hiding this from you..." rey said while catching his ears for which Sharon melted and hugged him.


"Swayu...sowiieee" Kriya spoke in the cutest tone ever while making a puppy face and holding her ears.


"Itni sweet face na bana...tujh par gussa bhi nahi kar pata" saying this Swayam pulled kriya into a hug.


Everyone started congratulating and hugging them. Sharon stepped forward and hugged Kriya astonishing everyone.


"Sharon, aapko koi problem toh nahi mere aur Rey ke relation se...I mean hum dono ke beech...uh you know" kriya said.


"Mujhe pata hai ki humari banti nahi hai lekin iska yeh matlab nahi ki mein tumhe aur rey ko alag karne ka try karu" sharon replied.


"Thanks" saying this kriya forwarded her hand for friendship which sharon galdly accepted.


"Wow Kriya and Sharon friends, unbelievable...well iss sabka credit mujhe jaata hai" said Vishakha patting her ownself.


Everyone agreed to it and were cheering for KriYansh. Simmi purposely pushed kriya and she fell on rey, who balenced them straight and got lost in his baatcutter's eyes and same goes with Kriya. On seeing KriYansh ij each others arms, the gabg started their teasings. The rest of the day also passed by in a jolly way.



I hope it was nice.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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le teri rkd aa gai ! :P

*i no m evil*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww that was such a cute os ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

loved how u used vishaka ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
a big thank u to the challenger
ki hume itna amazing os mila

amazingly written ๐Ÿ‘
great work ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
loveing this READERS VS WRITERS... ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
Edited by spongy - 12 years ago
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Res. . . .
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Awsome OS. . . .
Realy a cute 1 . .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a cute update on Kriyaansh after so long.. Me all Happy Happy ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Vishakha.. Ufff.. Ur suspicious mind :p but here it dint spoil anything.. Thank Lord no no Maneet ๐Ÿ˜›

I cud visualise KR expressions whn vish caught dem redhanded n whn she broke d news up.. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Fire Exit,Mere Bina,Dil se re.. Dese belongs to KR n KR only ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Kya mannu.. Centi kr diya.. Those wer d days.. !!

Lovd Krisha part d most.. Wonder wud it hav happend d same in d3.. I dun think so ๐Ÿ˜›

But I loved it.. Simple,Fresh,Cute n perfect :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow amazing OS
loved it
Kriyaansh were adorable
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Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os...
it was dam cute ...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!! very nyc n cute update!!! luvd it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gud one ๐Ÿ˜Š
worth reading ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Wow truly amazing os ๐Ÿ‘
Loved the way u used Vishakha to reveal Kriyaansh's relationship
Wish something like this had happened in D3

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