ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread 3*

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tabzz

@tabzz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#761

Ahh serious one. I like the way Khushi let him find himself the solution of this relatonsship.
Fireman you fought with fire and trying to fight with your happiness too, don't act as a coward,
whats wrong with you?
Life doesn't remains normal after such calamities, but who fights for himselves wins the bettle of life.
Thnx dear for giving some thing different.
Loved it. 👏

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MemoriesDieHard

@MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

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Juhi Di! U dont even need me telling you how awesome this was!

Beautiful and Poised...

ANd you brought in Anjali too!!! Thank u so much for that...

And Shyam Jha as a Therapist? Doesnt sound bad either...

I love your way of portraying every character of IPK in a positive manner...

If I may... Please do Write a Payash Romance in your work (Like you did in SINS)

I would love to read it...

Once again, u made my evening. I am glad,

And Arnav and Khushi here were just Adorable.

For once in her life, Khushi wanted him to Open up! She told that to him, unlike the show where she hardly talked to him.

And Arnav in this one was heart-warming to watch.

His confusions were so well portrayed Di...

His fear and guilt for Anjali was totally Beautiful.

Though NK made a Cameo here, I loved his presence in this one.

Carving Perfect Characters is one thing I learn from u and Semanti as a writer myself...

Semanti... Please update soon...

Though I am not very much of Mathematics... I would Love to read your take on Constant and Variables...

Keep Smiling

Keep Writing

Love,

Yashi

Edited by ForeverArhi - 12 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#763

wow updated - lemme read

thx for the pm

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Stunning end to an amazing story!

And yes, all I wanted was for Sheetal to be a figment of Arnav's imagination! Love the way Khushi confronted him twice, first about his fictitious girlfriend and secondly about him pulling away. I'm glad both times Arnav stood up to the challenge and didn't let her down.

I also loved how you showed Anjali's happiness that Arnav was moving forward with his life. I think a lot of people in this situation, who are recovering from very serious injuries and face living with a disability, feel extra pressure and stress knowing their loved ones are putting their own lives on hold to care for them.

Now Anjali seems to be making a recovery and may even have the start of her own romance! 😆

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

loved it...loved that sheetal was just a figment of imagination...thats the best part...

and the bestest part is the confession in the hospital corridor and anjali meeting her shyam...seems like this shyam is good...

love this tough and strong khushi, she did the right thing and he came for her, it was beautiful...loved the update...

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goguma

@goguma

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

am glad arnav finally listens to his heart, and took the first step towards kushi.. 🤗
kushi has been waiting patienly for him...

and love has also find its way for anjali..? great..!

lastly, thank u for making sheetal a non-existence!
that name alone really brings bad memories..

i did not wait for your PM...
as it is.. i was stalking your thread...! 😳

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MemoriesDieHard

@MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Unresd my Comment on Page 120😊

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

that was a clear ramanchi...😡..but i love the fact that sheetal doesnot exist...i really donn want her to exist anyhow...!! loved it juhi di really..passion...insecurities...love...emotions evrything is here and even anjali...and shaym too...payal and akash...!!! u always gave a strong role to anjali in your tales...and i love that...and i really love fireman arnav and his way of accepting his love...!!!

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#769

One thing we all know whoever arnav is be an American or an Indian his heart's key is our khushi from lakhnow ...once again you proved your mettle as a writer...beautiful

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#770

Okay...confession first.

I had to stop reading and calm my heart down and get my thoughts out of wherever they had gone at the image you presented of Arnav with the red roses in the fireman jacket with the helmet in the other hand! Oh my my!