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Posted: 12 years ago
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Taani vs Sharon☺️ is like Munni meet Sheila...
Only if Palki madame has some GUTS like Sajid K...!!!!🤣
T4Pm...🤗


Edited by Desichiqneez - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A vry unique conceot...continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept...
please do update soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chap 1


Sorry guys for nt updating I jus had an operation so am in hospital ive wriitn this update vis phone so am sorry for mistakes I will update as soon I gt home for know I hope u like this


Flashback
Just stop it Rey what do you think I am you have no right to talk about me like this and Sharon please stay away from our relationship. Am am not an item you can go and describe to your friends. If you have problem please talk to me.
Sharon: taani please you should stop forcing Rey to stay away from dance.your jus being selfish
Tanni: this has nothing to do with you sharon please why don't you focus on you relationship rather than interfering in mine
Tanni: how can you talk to Sharon like this?
Sharon:its okay rey let her talk. Listen tanni I don'tknow what your problem is but let me make one thing clear to you am the manager of this dance team and I want rey to dance we have made routine and we can't cancel on the last moment.You woundnt know because you're a non dancer.
Taani went quite for sometime.
Taani: wait when since when did you speakon behalf in rey. Sharon I admit I don't know how to dance I admit am not like you. Bye the way its rey decision not yours. You know whatam done with you people hold on sec.
She got her phone out " Hello tauji am going to be late actually I have to watch the gangrehearsals so ill just come with bhai and Rey wount comingfor the dinner hes in the dance team tooo so hes busy. Okay tauji ill talk to you when I get home.
There you go ive sorted your problem. Good luck with yourrehearsalsI forgot to tell you fromtoday
aishi will be taking care of you and your dance issues no point me doing as I don't know dance and Sharon for your information inindia there are over 1 billion people and trust not everyone can dance. You think you can dance so you know everything don't forget Sharon its just a matter of time when some will beat you.
Ifyou think you are soo great because you can dance. If you r this brilliant why are you having difficulty accepting or rejecting bahi.If you love interfering in people lives thenplease just look at you messed up life.
Rey:TAANI SHUT UP.
Taani :" stop it rey I was stupid that I was think youpeople are my friends I was wrong I just want to apologise I should have realisedyou people value friendship on the basis of dance skills. Well am sorry for think am you friend and the fact I can't dance. On this basis am sorry for following you people like an idiot"
Flashback ends….
taani thoughts weredisturbed by the loud cheeringof the crowd as Sharon just finished her dance.
"Sharon …. Sharon …… Sharon…." Screamed the crowd.
Taani watched as the crowed as they cheered for Sharon she wasn't surprised a after all it was Sharon the dive of st Louis. But tanni wasn't scared she knew this was going to happen but this was her one chance to that she was someone to.
The music stopped all eyes were tanni
"this is it"she said to herself and walked to where Sharon was standing.
" your turn tanni" Sharon said in a confident voice
" I accept my defeatagainst you" taani spoke loud enough so everybody could hear it
The silence filled the buildings of st Louis. There was no sound it was just silence. Student started at taani confused n shocked one1 new what was happening.
"What" was all Sharon spoke she was speechless she couldn't figure out what was happening she didn't know how to react she like all the other students were confused about what taani had justsaid.
" I accept my defeatagainst you Sharon Rai parkash"taani spoke confidently
Her voice echoed through the walls of the st Louis. The silence continued glances were exchanged between the student but no one spoke a word.
Sharon stood across taani unable to fully understand what was going on she looked over the stairs where reyam where standing but reyam stood expressionless.
"You win Sharon Rai parkash" taani spoke again breaking the silence.
Silent whispers began to exchange throughout the student before this situation could get any awkward Sharon decided to leave. She turned around and started to walk away
"The competition is not over Sharon Rai Parkash" taani called out Sharon from the back.
Sharon stoppedwalking turned around again shocked. Tanni walked up to Sharon in full confidence.
"I only accepted my defeat I never said that the competition is over"
Once again silence filled the room. Everyone including the gang exchanged look.
"you challenged me for dance I accepted it but Sharon you picked the song you picked thedance style that's not fair." Taani spoke while walking right upto sharons face.
"what are you saying" asked Sharon who was still in shock of what was happening
"You challenged me for a dance competition I accepted it and you won know am challenging you in dance to beat me" dance spoke while staring at Sharon eyes
"I don't understand what you're saying" she spoke again confused
"I challenge you for dance a competition in khattak dance" she spoke confidently.
She stood there for a while waiting for answer. But Sharon didn't answer
"What's wrong Sharon are you scared"
"You challenged me to dance form that was your strength and you knew I cant do these dance forms so its only fair that I can challenge you in a dance that is my strength"
She walked upto the stairs and "am asking the student of St Louis to decide Sharon challenged me in hip hop that I have no clue in and I have challenged Sharon in khattak that I am good at what do you guys think should Sharon accept my challenge"
There was a long silence slowly the silentwhispers overtook the silence.
Edited by ajaved - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
👏👏👏👏super awesome beginning...
wow taani...
amazing update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Fab update aimen..n get wel soon take care :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Wow!!! Just Wow!!
What a fabulous beginning Aimz...
Loved it..
taani's confidence was what I liked the most..
I wish this could happen in real...
And the way she challenged Sharon with full confidence...
Excellent...Outstanding..
And what she is doing is fully justified..
Now, i am just waiting for the next one..
But dear.. Do take care of yourself first..OK..
Only then you think about updating...
You should take rest..Instead you are getting bored..
Very nice..Now take rest...
Once again..Great job...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aimz feel better soon,
I love this Taani not afraid to speak her mind, I love her challenge to Sharon...
Superb update I love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
mind blowing one..
hey.. get well soon..
its so sweet of u 2 updt via cell.
get well soon..
all well wishes..

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