Loved it ...absolutely brilliant!
Thank you for the dedication ...it really came as a pleasant surprise...am so touched!
Anne~ great banner!
Sami...what do I say? You are becoming better and better and Mr Raizada naughtier and naughtier...and I am getting happier and happier...
Thank you for the dedication ...you have no idea how thrilled and touched I am. Thank you for appreciating my feedback...makes it so worth the effort of writing one!
I loved how the chapter started setting the tone for the rest of the update...it was hot...and what a good morning indeed!
Loved him still at it...not forgetting his need for revenge and in the bargain fulfilling his desires not that she is complaining infact she is getting addicted ...as am I!
I love the way he so matter of factly keeps coming up with innovative ideas...a ,massage that need the hot water to make it effective...or of course..the alternate is always available a visit to the doctor ... .sly Raizada!
She is so aroused but him that she is for the most time unable to actually speak and is willingly and happily following his lead...
I love how he picks her up and takes in to the bathroom excited with the prospect of their shower together...and then what follows ...was written so well...you make is all so aesthetically beautiful...at the same time so erotic, sensuous...and so so steamy!
I loved the breakfast scene ...everyone trying to figure out her mood, the reason for the jalebis and why she looks tired.. Linking everything to "good news " to their constant state of honeymooning...I could feel the hustle bustle so well written was that scene...
I loved Mr R coming up with one more ingenious plan...to take her along with him to office...all for her sake of course! Citing reasons to that effect...well done Mr Ra!
Then loved him giving her secy the day off, turning the heat up and using his husky voice and choice of words to tease her further...poor Khushi...made to feel those symptoms again...her mind wavering with the selections of words...satin...curves...pleasure .taking her back to some sensual moments spent very pleasurably in those satin sheets...till she could take it no longer and reaches out to kiss him and touch him...Arnav thrilled by the success of his plan once again...and excited by her being the initiator...matching her needs with his and so lost and entwined in each other they are ...oblivious to their surrounding and knock on the door...that they are caught by Aman...who is shell shocked at seeing his boss and wife making out in the office...
Not sure who is more embarrassed ! I for one prefer him walking in on them in the middle ...rather than his interruptions preventing them from even starting...
Cannot wait to see what happens next...but am so pleased ...bathroom and office - check.
Thanks Sam for an awesome update...you totally sizzled!
Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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