Arhi FF:A Page From The Diary 2 Summary pg 103, Jul 20, 2016

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

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Waiting impatiently for the update

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Just came accross this FF...really loved it.
Written beautifully...pace is too good ...nothing is hurried...love the detail...past and present going together - a novel idea...lovely charcterisation...and the list can go on.

Please would you consider adding me to your PM list ? I will send the request... I don't want to miss any chapter.
Thank you.

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sadia

@sadianabil

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I've read all the parts of this FF in one go. Unique plot. I loved it.

You have expressed arnav's turmoil very nicely.Arnav is totally confused with his feelings. He also feel s attraction toward Khushi. What about Khushi's feelings for Arnav ?

Waiting for your next update. BTW congrats on your new thread.

Edited by sadianabil - 12 years ago

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sadia

@sadianabil

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awe this update reminds me "pharak Padta hai" track

Eagerly waiting to know their conversation ( I think it happened in their wedding night) .

Fantastic update.waiting for next update😛

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Congrats on the new thread
It was a cryptic update..
But I liked...

It had an air mystery to it...
Loved the way u took the convo...

Cant wait for the next updTe to read more...
Thanks for this interesting update

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

What hell is going on? I dont understand anything anymore! What the hell happend that night?

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wonderful update.
I have tried to guess... Imagine... What is wrong in their relationship... something is very wrong... can't work it out...does Khushi feels guilty marrying Arnav because of Lavanya. Why she is so indifferent to Arnav... does not even want to talk... avoids him all the time... hardly ever communicates... Arnav is feeling guilty... for what... what has he done ?

There non conversation...one sided communication where Arnav is trying and Khushi is avoiding...I couldn't make head or tail of that conversation... very confusing... I know I have to be a bit patient ...all will be reveled in good time... I will try.

Really enjoying this story... very well written.
Thanks for the update.

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

I really like how you write about the past and present simultaneously...

I hope Khushi stops ignoring him, it's only going to make it worse.

I'm also curious about Arnav and Lavanya's relationship in the past...and since there was no mention of Shyam in the past in this update, I'm also curious to know what happened with him.

Edited by A_BA - 12 years ago