Arhi SS: UNTOUCHED. Part 3, Pg- 25. V. Imp Note Pg-39, New!. - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: mem1

Wow. Another dark and intense story from the Queen of Darkness and Intensity!
You brought out Shyam's despicable character so well in so few words, that I now hate him as much as I hated him in the show.

You are right, such situations are sadly the norm in a lot of communities. But that is just so sad. A 16 yr old going into such a life changing situation without any support or understanding from anyone... not even her own family... and to actually know how despicable your fiance is and still having to go through with it... that is heart wrenching! Now start updating all your stories fast, and don't keep us waiting so much for each one...

but on the other hand, didn't you say you had exams. You need to concentrate on those first...😊



Oh wow, I am blushing now😳 Thanks a lot for such a huge compliment, it really means a lot😊

Things I see around me intrigue me to no limit and so thankfully in IPKKND I have finally found a creative structure for such expression.😳

Btw, you should also know that you are one of the people whose comment I eagerly await, so that increases your pressure darling😉

And yes u r right I should be studying now but somehow as the exams approach I like doing anything and everything except studying... I have been given the title of Nanuni by many you see😆

PS: I would really like to know what your real name is😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Awesome dear
Felt so bad for kushi
Where is arnav?

Do continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: srija.singh04


Oh wow, I am blushing now😳 Thanks a lot for such a huge compliment, it really means a lot😊

Things I see around me intrigue me to no limit and so thankfully in IPKKND I have finally found a creative structure for such expression.😳

Btw, you should also know that you are one of the people whose comment I eagerly await, so that increases your pressure darling😉

And yes u r right I should be studying now but somehow as the exams approach I like doing anything and everything except studying... I have been given the title of Nanuni by many you see😆

PS: I would really like to know what your real name is😊



Too much pressure...Can't handle this... 😲

BTW, each time I read an update, I think i have nothing new to say other than what I might have already said for precious updates, but then I realize my comments always end up pretty big. You guys are all such talented writers!!!

My name is Gita, I have 2 kids and work full time and really shouldn't be spending the kind of time I do on IF. But I am so addicted, and then folks like you keep coming up with more and more stories that I feel compelled to stalk!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
awesome
plz updt soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Its such a painful story..khushi's condition makes me cry
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
pooor girl can imagine and feel what she must be feeling and thats :S


and jhaaa just hate him i hope devi mayia is sending angel arni :D


plz update soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting. Very good.

So glad it wasn't Arnav. Hope to see him enter soon. Before anything else happens.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
i luved ur writing!!!
feel bad fr khushi..hope Arnav gets to her soon!!!
cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Hoping u wil turn this into an FF
Contniue soon dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh!Wow! Amazing!! The dark side of society is explained very well!!
Poor Khushi! Well, poor Women of that time which had no right to live for themselves there in India..😔
Okay. I knew from start that it is going to be Shaym but i think so in this OS we can make a happy ending by makimg an entry of our Arnav yaar..!!..
A filmy style can help us you know! 😛

But anyway this is amzing! A true show of the bad done to womenkind!!

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