Arshi os:Is it paining jaan?(pt 4 :pg 39) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
fabulous part
well written
really loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Ohhh Awsome update
Khucsooo much in pain
Update next soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
She was badly hurt n still making coffee for him...
This was really daily sopish n unreal but chalta hai...

I liked the concept...
Really nice update...

Continue soon...
Thanx for the pm...^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Yes want to know what happens next please
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#85
amazing OS...
loved it...
do continue it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS Rami ka. 😉
Adding salt to sabzi and feeding Laxmiji are very important jobs you know. 😆
Ouch. Hot oil. That must be painful
I never knew you accept requests. 😛
You must continue it!! Or not i'll haunt you till you update.
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: allegro

Awesome OS Rami ka. 😉
Adding salt to sabzi and feeding Laxmiji are very important jobs you know. 😆
Ouch. Hot oil. That must be painful
I never knew you accept requests. 😛
You must continue it!! Or not i'll haunt you till you update.
Waiting for the next part.

am always available fr my kutty..place an request n ill write it..Anything fr u baby...N thank u😃 😃😃 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As the requestor Asked it to be three or four parts am writin elaborately..Do leave back ur reviews and comments..I was trying to reply back everone but due to SPAMMING ERROR i wasnt able to and this is one of my quickest update because u all made me warm and happy with ur replies😃 😃😃 😃ignore spell mistakes😃Thanks fr ur replies and comments😉


IS IT PAINING JAAN??


Part 2

Khushi never heard anything which arnav said..She felt so light ,her head was spinning,her ears had blocked and the last thing she knew was falling in Arnav arms..

"Khushi khushi just look at me damnit..Open ur eyes baby..see am not angry on you I was I was just upset that ..leav it now open ur eyes am saying na..khushi ….baby….jaan" he dono what he was blabberin after seeing khushi limp in his arms.. All he could utter was her name..He was feeling helpless..

He was holding her waist securely and her haed was fallen back and her legs were not helping to make her stand..Due to the voices and shakes by Arnav she was trying to open her eyes but everythin going futile..Arnav composed himself and was about to lift her in arms so he took her righthand when khushi flinched and ouched even in her subconscious state.It was when he saw her hand which turned blue due to burning..His eyes were welled up seeing that..he could not understand what had happened to her..But all he understood was that he was the reason for her to be in this situation..

He took her in his arms and made her lie on the bed that's when his eyes noted her dress where oil has spilled and also the burnt leg..His eyes become more moist..She has spilled the oil and bought him coffee without even attending to it..Indeed he was the first priority in his life..he felt lick kicking himself for acting such way to her..He dono what he must do now…He brushed his hair with his rigt hand and rushed out of his room and shouted

"NANI,DI, ,PAYAL,MAMI,"

His eyes were blood shot by now he took out his mobile and made few calls.He rushed to his room where khushi was lying..Her face looked pale ,eyes seemed puffy,tears were dried her hair was spread over the pillow..TO say in a single word she looked devasted..He could nt see his pari this way..His tears were uncontrollable..He sat near her head and made her lie on his lap..His tears made their way to her cheeks..She tried opening her eyes.."Arrrnnnvvv ji am srry"

She said in a feeble tone..Arnav felt like his heart has been pulled out from hischest.>She is lying unconsicious yet asking sry for no mistake of hers..He felt so small under her..He instantly started kissing her face.."No baby no its all my fate..Am really really sry ill never avoid you..Forgivbe me jaan"

She kept her right hand near her lips and said "Shhh"

Arnav hold her hands without realizing she is hurt and she let out a shriek..

"Baby am sry am keeping on hurting u again and again..How did this happen?"

Khushi kept mum without answering.Arnav found something is fishy..Before he could say something..everyone enterd the room..

"Chotey y did u call all of us.." nani asked him..

Anjali saw Khushi lying in unconsicious state and rushed towards her.."Chottey what happened to khushi?'

"Dono di..She is nt responding..All because of me.." he started to whimper like a child..By now everyone surrounded khushi's bed..

"Khushi khushi open ur eyes?" payal worriedly patted her cheeks

"Kya hua khushi bitiya ko?" Mami asked worriedly seeing khushi's state..

"Bhaiya doctors has come" HP came and knocked the bedroom..

"Let them in HP" arnav said after composing himself..

Nani mami anjali payal moved away from bed to leave way for Doctor oops doctors.

They were counting 1,2 ,3 ufff there were a group of 7 doctors oops again its lady doctors...

Anjali was smiling seeing Arav's concern at the same time she was worried for her..The doctors asked everyone to move outside but Arnav was adamant not to move even a step..

Without any other way the doctors started analyzing Khushi one was checking her pulses the next one was cleaning her wounds..Other doctors were waiting once they complete each one came and checked Khushi giving reports to Arnav..

Khushi was still in unconscious state..General physician said Arnav that she didn't eat from morning that made her weak and the gave ointments for her wound..The pain and weakness was the result of fainting.Arnav was not able to forgive himself..His tears were non stop….The doctor who takes care of Fire accdents prescribed him the ointments which would heal it soon..The best plastic surgeon said that thre wont be any need of surgery since this was a small wound..

They all advised him that it was a small wound and it would be cured in a week time..All that khushi needed was proper care and rest..Arnav just nodded his head..

As soon he went out after closing the door of their room everyone pounced on him..He just yelled "HP come here"

He was scared but came running towards Arnav "Ji bhaiya?"

"What happened say me?'

"Wo bhaiya..Bhabhi said that she need to make jalebi's I said her that I'll make but she was admant doing herself and asked me to go to market to get plant fetlisers for your plants..So I went out..When I returned back I saw bhabhi limping and having coffe in her hands and gong towards your room..When I ran to kitchen the oil from frying pan has spilled everywhere I think it must have spilled o n bhabhi only at that time if not she would have cleaned it all" he said in a go and looked down fearing to face the worst from Arnav..

Arnav just held his face in his palms and said "All because of me..Its all because of me..I should have taken care of her..Its all because of me..Di did she had her BF and lunch.."

Anjali was looking at others afraid to answer when payal butted in saying "No arnav ji..i was asking her to have she said she didn't feel like"

"So you didn't pressurize her to eat???" He asked sarcastically loking at everyone..They just bowed their heads down…

"U know all what??? She didn't see to my needs all she was blabbering in the morning was i have to add salt to sabji,put varmala to DM statue,give fruits to laxmi ji,PPreapre the face pack for mami ji,Di was asking me to help with her sare for the party,Nani was caling me to make pickle he imitated her..That's why we fought and u all took best car of her..Am so happy ..you ppl just get into your rooms I can take care of my wife..I thought if am not here you ppl would look after her..But it doesn't.."

His sentecnce was left hanging when he felt her hand on his shoulders..He turned around to see his angel's face..She was shaking her head in a no and said "No arnva ji they all compelled me to eat but I only didn't eat.Am sorry but don't shout at them..They are taking good care of me.."

"Ya I know khushi it all because of me that u end up pouring oil and fainting.you know am a bad husband.. cant keep you happy at all..am so bad.."

Arnav was going nonstop that Khushi really dono what to do..His family members were looking at the way Arnav was talking non stop although they were worried for kHushi they could stop themselves from laughing at his frantic state..They all were begging Khushi to have a morsel of food bu she was so adamant saying that its her punishment for hurting her husband..They were helpless because she was was actually becoming MRS.ASR stubborn in her decision...Khushi now eyed everyone to go to their room..

"No khushi don't forgive me for my mistake please..am bad ..'

As she confirmed that everyone left the place she shushed him with her lips and arnav was shocked at her action..

PRECAP: Arnav taking care of Khushi..


PM's later😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

excellent update baby Kushi suffer a lot i just want say arnav

for the wonderful concern update
Edited by vijiasr08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
i was waiting eagerly for the next part..
it was awesome..
continue soon. .

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