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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
I read 4 chapter together and that was amazing
I love the part where arnav help the poor children. give them gift and telling them the story
And the kitchen sense was amazing how the eat chocolate and best part how khushi feed him rasmali
Now mami ji is showing her real self like that
And the best part was how arnav describes about khushi that was truly amazing

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Posted: 12 years ago
I think The Trampled Butterfly and molten_lava deserve nominations.

Vote here

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3581575.

I'm new to IF and don't know how to make things work here. If someone can make this an active link, please do so.😆
Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

I think The Trampled Butterfly and molten_lava deserve nominations.


Vote here

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3581575.

I'm new to IF and don't know how to make things work here. If someone can make this an active link, please do so.😆


Oh dear! Now, you are embarrassing me.😳
Please! I don't write for any awards. For me your comments are the greatest award I can get. Bas! I want nothing else.😃

And I like to remain out of the spotlight.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yo! I have a teaser for you all as promised.
Now I know, teaser is not at all my style. So this teaser turned out to be a mini chapter in itself.😆
So why this teaser? Because the next chapter is very special to me. Why? Because this was the one scene that was responsible for the entire FF. The whole story evolved just because of this one scene in my head. And this is the crux of the Trampled Butterfly. At first I had wanted to write this scene as an OS. But somewhere down the line, I felt that a mere OS would never justify this scene as perfectly as how this FF will justify. Coz you know the whole background of these two individuals now and it makes the scene even more beautiful IMO.
Enough of my yapping.🤪 You may read it now.

P.S. I might add/remove one or two lines at the final draft incase I ain't happy with the turnout.


THE MEGA TEASER!😉


"Khushi!" he called from the window of his car, sitting inside the warmth of the comforts, gazing at his best friend twirling around under the rain, the big fat drops battering her face.

But turning around, she looked at him with those innocent puppy eyes that only wanted to have fun all day, leaving him with no other choice than to sigh and oblige to her demands.

The happiness was clearly etched on her face and he could see the same five year old 'Kukku' in her, just like the first time he had seen her enjoy these rains and it was as if she had suddenly been resurrected back to life.

And witnessing that pure happiness sent tingles of ecstasy down his spine.

The rain was getting heavier by the minute, the drops battering painfully against her, but she still didn't stop.

Khushi twirled and twirled, spinning around in circles as if lost in a trance, completely away from this world and all of a sudden, he felt a tinge of panic, streaking his warm chest inflated with happiness.

The bright sunny afternoon had turned grey and dark, the black clouds looming over them. They were separated by a distance, the distance between the car and the muddy earth, where the two of them belonged to.

He, surrounded by warmth and comfort of his luxury, while she, left to endure the harsh cold of the outside bitter world.

Her eyes were now closed, as she looked up at the sky, holding out the edges of her saree in both her hands ahead of her, to collect the fresh drops of the first rain. But they simply seeped into the fabric, drenching her all the more.

The skin beneath that fabric revealed against the six yards draping her, accentuating her places where he had never ventured before. He averted his gaze, suddenly feeling embarrassed at the direction of his own scandalous thoughts, but there was something within him, that reverted back that same gaze, instilling him with a confidence, possessiveness, a feeling that he was not wrong.

As if he had a right to look at her that way. The way only a man in love looked at his woman.

As the seconds ticked by, he was drawn towards her like a moth to a flame, like an oasis to a parched traveller, like a bird to the open sky, its freedom and happiness.

And then, he heard his phone ring, snapping away his wild thoughts.

"Dadi?" he asked, surprised to hear her voice on the other end.

"Arnav, where are you both? It's raining heavily here. You should have been home two hours ago. What happened?" he heard the worried voice of his grandmother.

"Dadi, you don't worry. I'm here with her. We might just get delayed a bit."

"Don't worry? Arnav, it's raining cats and dogs outside and do you even realise how dangerous it is to drive in the ghats at this time? And as it is, its Khushi's birthday today. Don't you dare spoil her day today with your stupidity." The elder lady clearly warned him.

But his ears turned deaf as the new piece of information slowly seeped into his skin.

It was Khushi's birthday? And that girl hadn't even informed him for the entire day. What the hell!

"Dadi, I'll take care of her and myself. We will be back soon, okay?" And saying so, he disconnected the call, his eyes suddenly burning with annoyance and fury at his best friend.

He had once again forgotten his best friend's birthday. Hell! He hadn't even wished her for the past fifteen years. But she?

There wasn't even a word uttered by her about it for the entire day that she spent with him and this simply made him mad.

Mad enough to open the door and step out into the rain, the very rain that he abhorred, opening the door to their two worlds and bridging the gap between them.

He strode towards her in quick three steps, the mud soiling the black polish of his shoes, the rain drops creasing his perfectly ironed clothes.

But when the distance between them reduced to mere inches, his anger, his annoyance, his frustration simply washed away with the rain and all he could see were those quivering lips adorned with tiny glistening drops of rain, her eyes closed, unaware of the entire world.

He didn't realise when his hands had reached out to cup her face with their own accord. And her eyes dreamily sprung open at the warmth he provided amidst the bitter frost surrounding the confines of her heart.

His fingers, wrapped around the nape of her neck on their own, tilting her head delicately to meet his and before he knew it, he leaned forward towards her, bridging the gap between them completely for eternity.




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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, it was a teasing teaser. Eagerly waiting for the update now 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ... what a tease you are ... stopping at such a vital point ... 😳 😡
But then they don't call it a teaser for no reason ... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
gosh..what a teaser..plzzz update soon...my dil is fluttering like a butterfly
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god oh my god!!!! that was a brilliant teaser and they kissed in the rain!!! i loved the way you narrated their love in the rain.. man in love, rain washed away his annoyance, and best of all her birthday!!! what more can a girl want!! beautiful yar!! i just loved every bit of it!!😳😛👏
Edited by coolbakes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thursday seems so far away am willing to fast foward a time machine might come n handy this time around my dear dear R what can i say from the saree to arnavs thoughts am totally drenched in the molten lava of ur words they drove me up the wall pulled me down made my heart thud against the ribs like i was running a marathon of a lifetime
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. what a teaser man.. plz update soon.

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