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Posted: 12 years ago
Haan I LOVED this chapter too!!!! (gotta stop saying that 😆 n think of something new to say before you get board of hearing (reading!!) the same thing!!) 😆

sooo it was mamiji! glad naina was sticking up or her son! you know sometimes i forget that nani is actually in the story!! 😲 😆 I love dadi too much I guess!! (missed her in this chapter)

wedding proposal! we knew that one was coming!! I know when the chapter comes about Khushi meeting the guy n giving him the answer you'll write soo beautifully we'll feel less of the pain! 😃 one request haan, pleeej, don't make the guys name Shyam!! 😆 anything else would do!! 😆


the last part when Arnav throws his phone, I felt a little bit too happy at his action!! poor La! when is she coming to India? n how will she be? the La we knew at the beginning of IPK or the one after? eitehr way am just excited for her to come n see what happens with ArShi's 'relationship'

Yayyy, next update will be lots of ArShi? can't wait!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i holdback myself for long time.. that i will read this ff when it will be completed.but couldn't resist more..read all the chapters in one go.. & now can't wait for the next update.. great story..loved every bit of it
when will u update the next chapter?
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an amazinggg update!!

Again I have to say the best everrr
My gosshhh m lefft speechless n in complete awe of your writing skill
Have to say its unique,different absolutely awesomeee!!!

Such tiny detail that without you writing that arnav hav already fallen real hard for khushi, we the reader are absolutely sure of it
Ahemmm I ve never relli had any idea of this kinda love
N u have clearly stated with your writing that this khushi is an average looking girl n arnav is in love with her nature

Awwwhhh she fed him rasmalai n he called her kukku, cant get any better

Good thing naina has understood n appreciate khushi for the lil changes in arnav n didn't pay heed to mami
On the other hand seems like arnav didnt pay heed to lavanyaz call either, well who cud relli blame, that person is hell busy on effortlessly following khushi

This arnav, I simply love n adore

Uhhh ooo is there a suitor fr khushi to gt married??
Poor girl
I dnt knw how khushi will react seeing lavanya

Loved reading it to bitsss

Amazinggg update!!!
Edited by robinhood008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god arnav is stalking on khusi...👏
he started to fall in love.😆
what was that she is getting married ?😕
to whom?😕
when will arnav come to know about that?😲
oh god this manorama is really typical like "sasuma"😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay you've just described a man madly in love...Arnav has fallen and very hard.


Loved the update...the stage is being set...
Players are coming out of the wood-works...


The drama's about to start and I'm so glad I have a front seat😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
😃

Thanks for an amazing chapter ...
Just loved the kitchen scene ...
just shows us how close he is getting emotionally and physically to her ...
that it was so easy for him to put his arms around her making her get all flustered ...

Somehow it gave such a domestic feeling seeing them both like this ...
True love doesn't notice any odour or sweat on the one you love ...
all that you want is to be near the person ...
whether they are looking nice or not ...
she feeding him hot rasmalai was so cute ...

But a simple comment made by him brought her back to reality ...
made her realise her actual place in his house ... of a domestic help ..
"Why should I learn when you are here?"
it was really heartbreaking ...

Was wondering who could have been watching the two
love birds and it turned out to be the Mami ...
she will definitely try to bring in the class factor when everyone
realises where Arnav's affections lie ...
Just hope that his father stands by him when the time comes as the
women in the house baring Dadi all seem quite weak ...

Thanks ML ... will wait for the next ... am sure Lavanya is far away as yet ...
we have to see these two get closer physically too before she comes in ... 😳
Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Reality bites 😒.

So, Naina does understand that Arnav is changing coz of Khushi and she is not unhappy about the developments. For me, that is phenomenal. Somehow the fact that the class difference doesn't bother naina is phenomenal. But that's a mother who wants her son's happiness beyond anything else. She doesn't care that Khushi works for them. 👏 to Naina Raizada but hey! I never said she is perfect ... Naina's weak stand during her conversation with her family was disappointing but I will put it down to blind siding by Manorama Maami.


One of the things I used to enjoy about IPk used to be that Khushi recovers faster than Arnav in most dhak dhak scenarios. I love that about your story too. I have no doubt Arnav didn't think of Khushi doing his work from the servant perspective but that is the statement that brings her back to earth. She remembers that she is a servant in Arnav's house and reminds him of the same. Once again reality bites 😡. The class divisions in our world are strongly entrenched and it is probably wrong if we think this happens only in Indian society. However, the acceptance of such situations in our society maybe one of the hardest.


Dhak, dhak dhak dhak... the hug and rasamalai feeding was dhak dhak dhak ... rabba vey awesome 😳. I don't mind a messy Khushi as long as she doesn't smell 🤣. It actually lends a very domesticated feel to the whole thing and that is exactly what Arnav missed out all these years ... the unconditional love and a home filled with warmth.

Arnav Singh Raizada is on a holiday and he is pretty jobless I guess ... kidding 🤣. By God, it is incredible how much he had noticed about Khushi. It was cute, adorable, awesome and sexy. But on a more serious note, I have to admit that I'm jealous of Khushi coz any girl would die to have a guy who is sooo into her.


YAY to me Rach ... I guessed right about Manorama maami's eyes 😛. My next prediction ... Lavanya is going to make an entry really soon. Maybe in the next update or the one after 😉. Am going to wait and watch.

BTW, I reserved from my phone ... have never done anything like that before 😲.


Naina is happy with the friendship part. But does she see them as beyond friends??? She isn't a strong charactered person. Why? Because she will play a pivotal role in the future, torn between the people she loves when the truth is revealed. And this was just a teaser to what will come in the future, when she cannot choose a side. The sides are already picked by Dadi, Ranvijay, Mami and Nani. The remaining ones are Arthur and Anjali. Whose side will they pick?

I always love making my characters as realistic as possible even with Arnav and Khushi. So yeah, Khushi is all messy and untidy and smells too.😆 But inspite of that, Arnav is still attracted to her. Isn't that how it is in real life? Accepting someone for all their shortcomings? And if you carefully notice, I've never really described Arnav as a handsome guy either.😛 Ranvijay is the handsome dude.😆

Yup you were right with the prediction and probably one of the only two people who had guessed it to be Mami. Rest all had gone with Naina.😆

Lavanya? Hmm... let's see. I might bring in a Superstorm in Europe to delay her trip for sometime?😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely update.

So there is going to be a new entry as in proposal for Khushi.I feel for her,firstly there is her past ,then there is Arnav and feelings for him,then the huge status gap.

I liked Naina who was defending both.Wonder what her reaction would be when she wil realise Arnav is falling for Khushi.

Loved the Kitchen moment,Arnav enjoying rasmalai fed by Khushi.aww..his thoughts..sometimes he is such a baby..looking out for her to take care of him.

I loved the way you write Arnav's thoughts.Especially the part where you mention things he notices abt her.His eyes constantly in search,following her.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BARUN-myladdu




Barun i love u ...😊😊Eagerly waiting to meet u again

KAB KAISE KAHA????????????


Well as u knw barun wil be shooting in kolkata for his next film 22 Yards so i will be meeting him here in kolkata and if u saw my dp i hve already met him once on 23rd march in d m&g of kolkata wid barun .. Bcz i stay in kolkata
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ... That was sooo romantic and beautiful

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