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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#371

lovd d update. It was cute. Dadi is d best

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sree_dey

@sree_dey

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

It was a beautiful,cute and a sweet update...arnav and khushi are sooo adorable...😳 unke frndshp ko kisiki nazar na lage..nd dadi (Y) she z awesome...

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Slowly Arnav is making progress. Such a good friend Khushi is allowing Arnav to sleep and refusing to wake him. I like how Dadi and Ranvijay are conspiring, let's hope our two leads figure it out; but I like your pacing on this story. We know this won't be an overnight thing, both Arnav and Khushi have to really work through their feelings and trust issues (at least on Khushi's side).

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Oh I loved it!!

God bless you Dadi, we seriously do not give them enough credit

Khushi let him sleep on her lap for 3 hours, you can't even question Khushi's love for Arnav, I wouldn't even dare to question it. Khushi wanted that attention from Arnav and she got it but now she's just super awkward. Maybe she had a different scenario in mind and realized she was in over her head

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

Lovely update!

Dadi is so naughty ,but very smart.Like her. The changes dnt go unnotice by her.

Arnav sleeping like a baby after head massage,adorable!

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Congrats on thread two Rachel, this story truly deserves to be here.

And coming to the past three updates, they told us a lot about the relationship between Arnav and Khushi.

These two, try as hard as they can, can't hide the fact that they care for each other more than that is strictly necessary.

But the progress in the new story they are going to make after fifteen whole years is impressive.

Dadi and Ranvijay, I love them dammit.

I could visualize Rk removing the fake arrows from his heart.

I am so glad that they are going to play Cupid for Arnav and Khsuhi.

Dadi you are a goddess and RK you are a god.

Amazing updates.

Waitng for the next chap.

Edited by wonderblake - 12 years ago

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

This was really nice,I just came across your story today loving it...had me in tears at many places...

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thesis

@thesis

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#378

molten ji is there a update today surprise us ji pls ji

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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#379

wow wow wow... chapter 12 was juat a wow update...

I thoroughly enjoyed it... there was not a single thing i didn't like... well who don't like romance 😆 and this story is finally moving towards some steamy updates... right 😉 i know i sound some kind of shallow reader who is waiting for romance rather than the past 😆 but what can i do??? that's the only thing which don't require some kind of critical analysis 😆 so for me this chapter is the best so far... partially because i read it without any hurry and mostly because it was written so beautifully...👏

two things remind me of your other FF the massage and their night walk...⭐️

and dadi ji... what an adorable lady she is... i too want such a dadi for playing cupid 😆

arnav finally got a peaceful sleep and what a better place to sleep other than your lover's lap...

and i so loved these words of yours

"How do you describe that feeling when you let everything within you release in that one moment and you feel nothing but light and relaxed"

and khushi's reply to dadi... wow what a double meaning words

"I guess he was just too tired of carrying his burdens."

but i was lil worried when i read

"He tried to entwine his fingers with hers, as they walked side by side. But somehow, they always ended up slipping from his grip, by an inch."

now i really hope their sufferings end without any further problems... sometimes we do need a happy ending without detailed drama... but i guess it's just my wishful thinking...😳😳

i hate that " chotey saab" thingy... so plz for God's sake do something for it... apart from this i have no complaints 😆

Edited by mysterious_maze - 12 years ago

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CrazyAbtTV18

@CrazyAbtTV18

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#380

OMG... just came across this wonderful ff loved it to bits. U are an amazing
writer. Truly gifted.. waiting for lavanyas entrance. Cant wait tosee who kushi will react.

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