taarey os...HUM MAR JAAYENGE

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Yet another work by me...its an os on d currnt track !! after d f8..!! hope u lyk it..haters apna kaam karoo 😔😔 nd tamatars allowed hai...bt no taarey bashing 😔😔 jo bhi kiya uska te maine murder kar dena hai 🤢🤢...chaloo enjoy karoo
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She cried along wid her heart..she cud not live widout him..she just culdnt..he was her love , her life , d only thing she evr yearnd for...but maybe destiny was against dat..it did nt want dat dey shud be togedr..
Why god ?? Why soo many prblems...bt i thnk its my fault..i shuldnt hv askd rey fr dat wen i know wat dance means to him..
Bt wat cud i do...tauji hume kabhi sath nai rehne denge agar unhe pata chala ki rey..rey ek dancer hai..mai sirf unhe chahti hu aur kuch naii..unhe bhi to mujhe samajhna chahiye thaa..
Par vo itne sad ho gaye ! Mai hamesha unhe upset kar deti hu..mujhe pata hai dance unke liye kitna mayne rakhta hai...
Aur mjhe pata hai vo mujhse bohooot pyaar karte hai..bohoot..!!
Par agar unhone dance ko choose kiya aur tauji ko pata chal gaya...to hum alag ho jayengee !!
Naii...hone do !! Mujhe farak nai padta jab tak rey khush hai..agar unki khushi dance me hai to mai unhe kabhi nai rokungii..
Par me kyu cmpromise kare ?? Aur vaise bhi agar rey aur me ek sath naihue to kya hum reh payenge ??
Cmpromise ?? Rey ne bhi to mere liyee itna kuch kiya haii..aur true luv ka matlb ye to nai na ki do log ek happy married lyf spend kare..true love to vo hota hai jisme do log bhale hi alag ho jaaye par unka pyar hamesha salamat rahe !! Aur mujhe pata hai rey srf mere hai..sirf mere..
Ooo !! Par abhi to wo bohoot sad hai..aur agar me unse alag ho gai to vo aur sad ho jaayege !! Vo toot jayenge !! To kya tu unhe vaise dekh payegi ??
Hmm..vo bohot upset hai abhii..kuch to karna padegaa !! Mujhe unhe khush dekhna hai..vahi pyaari si..dil ko khush karne wali smile dekhni hai aur ek aakhri baar unse sunna hai ki vo mujhsee kitna pyaar karte haii..
She was continuously hving a war between her mind nd her hrt..finally her hrt gained victory she decided to make him happy..to see him smile !! Lettng destiny do its job..
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Rey reachd at d point wer swayam told him to cm..he was cnfused..
*FLASHBACK*
rey sat on d floor..clutching his head in despair..his eyes deep red bcoz of d cntinuous sheddng of tears..his heart bleedng..he was in dilemma..in an unbearable state..he was brokn..shattrd wen suddnly his fon rang..he did nt want to pick it up coz he knew he wud break down..r8 now he wantd to stay alone as well as was not in his r8 state of mind..his wrld had shaken..bt finally he recievd d call wen it rang d 50th time..
It was swayam..
"Hello " rey said vulnerably..he didnt hv strength left..he was lost..
"Hello!!" swayam said carng least about reys sad tone in xcitemnt..."Rey abhi issi vakt mujhe juhu beach par mil..NO QUESTIONS and meet me RIGHT NOW..!"
Before rey cud say smthng or deny swayam cut d call..
Unwantdly rey had to goo..still with a bleedng brokn heart..
*FLASHBACK*
Rey stud der cnfused..nt seeing anybody der..his face clearly showed his depression..
He was sad..brokn..he wantd to stay alone bt cm just fr swayam..
R8 now he was in a place wer on one side was himself..his heart..his luv nd on d oder hand was water..one of d most essential part of his lyf..his passion..his dance !!
He culdnt stay widout anyone of dem..he nt only wantd dem bt needed dem desperately..he was stuck..he remembered der f8..a while back..he repentd being soo rude wid her bt wat cud he do..she was askng smthng fr him wich he cud not gv..he was trappd..he culdnt evn inhale air proprly..he wantd to break free frm ol d probs..his hrt was cryng..shoutng..breakng..hurtng him cntinuously..!!
He opnd his eys cming to d reality..he wantd to die..he cud nt take it any longr..
He strtd walkin towrds d sea nt in his senses..wen his eyes cot smthng..
Smthng dat soothd his red paining eyes brnging a twinkle to dem..a smile appeard on his dry lips wich wer wet wid tears..his face lightend up wich was pale..his heart wich was brokn strtd mendng nd dancng wid joy n happiness..
In frnt of his eyes was a huge..enormously huge heart engravd on d sand..
Nd in an xtremely beautiful writing it said I LUV U REY !!
Rey knew dat it was none odr dan his luvly..pure at hrt taani who luvd him endlessly..!!
He stud der adorng d heart in beautiful dreams of his taani..hs hrt felt lyk being d happiest prson on earth..he always wondered..wat had he done to get sm1 lyk her ?? She was truly an angel..his angel of luv..
His eyes welled upto d brim..he was cryng bt dis tym in happiness..in joy of hving her who olways stud wid him..
He was all in his thoughts wen a beautiful voice began humming...
http://mobilesongs.audio.pk/download/A/Aashiqui_2_(2013)/Hum_Mar_Jayenge_(www.Audio.PK).mp3
Apni aankhein khaali kar de
Kaash tu meri aankhein bhar de
Kaash tu meri aankhein bhar de

she walked down frm back nd wiped his tears..nd nodded her head signallng him dat she wnt let him cry anymore..
Mere yaara tere gham agar payenge
Humein teri hai kasam, hum sanwar jayenge (x2)

rey held her hand n kissed it..nd dey walkd towrds water hand in hand...dey jst kept adorng each oder..
Do yeh saugaat tum, to zamaane ki hum
Do yeh saugaat tum, rto zamaane ki hum
Har khushi se mukar jayenge
Hum mar jayenge
Hum mar jayenge

rey smirkd naughtily nd pulld taani towrds him..she crashed towrds his chest nd playfully hit him on his chest..
She sang luking deep into his eyes wen rey kept his hand on her mouth stoppng her frm singng wen dose wrds cm 'hum mar jaayenge'
taani kissd his hand telling him dat she culdnt deny d fact dat she cud evn die happily for him..dat was simply LOVE
Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge
Humein teri hai kasam, hum sanwar jayenge

Taani ran towrds d sea nd sat on d sand pullng rey along wid her..
Tere kaandhe se hi lag ke
Yaara beete umar saari
Socho kaisi hogi kismat
Hua yun to phir humaari

she kept her head on his shoulder nd gv a victoruous smyl as if conquerng d wrld..
Saare aansoon toh ho tere
Aur aankhein ho humaari
Tere dard humein, jo mile pyaar mein
Tere dard humein jo mile pyaar mein
Hum khushi se yun bhar jaayenge

rey caressd her cheek nd got lost in her innocence..he jst luvd her..how cud sm1 not luv her..she was soo pure so calm so serene..she was an angel..his angel !!
Hum mar jaayenge ho o..
Hum mar jaayenge
Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge
Humein teri hai kasam, hum sanwar jaayenge

taani sang in eternal bliss frm her hrt..feelng gr8 being wid him
Chaahe dukh ho, chaahe sukh ho
Dil ne tujhko hi pukaara
Tune humko hai banaaya
Tune humko hai sanwaara

rey made her look towrds him..she blushd !! Rey kissed her cheek still lost in her..to his surprise she kissed him too !! She got up n strtd walkng back..
Jahaan ko rab ka hai, humein tera hai sahaara
Bas tera saath ho, chaahe jo baat ho
Bas tera saath ho, chaahe jo baat ho
Tere kehne se kar jaayenge

Rey strtd singng wat his heart felt for her..his true feelngs..it was true dat he culdnt live widout dance bt to live he needed a soul wich was taani..his very own beloved taani
Hum mar jaayenge ho o..
Hum mar jaayenge

he ran towrds her n huggd her frm d back..nd sang
Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge
Humein teri hai kasam, hum sanwar jaayenge

he jst lukd at her..feelng evry momnt spent at her was lyk heaven..d bliss..d fun..enjoymnt was eternal..
Der luv was immortal..
Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge
Humein teri hai qasam hum sanwar jaayenge

taani sang d last few wrds nd broke d hug nd faced him..he lukd soo ammzng..sooo hndsm indeed..makng ol grls go crazy fr him..bt he was only his..TAANI'S REYAANSH !!
Dey stud facing each odr in d middle of d heart..ol alone in d beach lost in each odrs eyes..der hearts skippng beats..thumpng fastr dan evr..feelng d best !! The emotion dey wer experiencng cannot be describd..it was a feelng of luv..of incredible..eternal..uncnditional..immortal luv !!
Rey intertwined der fingers..still lost in her beautiful..brown..deep eyes wich only depictd luv..luv fr him..
"I LUV U TAANI "
Rey said unconciously bt frm his heart..he was lost in hr..her smile..her eyes..her blsh made him go crzy
To taanis surprise he too blushed ..taani felt shyer nd lukd downwards..
Rey cm out of d trance he was in..he wntd taanis eyes..he wantd to feel d luv..d purity..d serenity in her eyes
Rey liftd her chin makng her luk in his eyes once again..undoubtdly both got lost !!
"I LUV U TOO REY !!" taani blurtd out dees wrds in uttr happiness..she was ecstatic seeing reys smyl..she was successful in makng him happy !!!
Reys hrt jumpd up in ecstacy nd twirld !! He felt being d most lucky person on earth..he gave a naughty smirk nd shoutd out as loud as possible..
"I LUV U THREE..FOUR..FIVE..SIX..SEVEN..EIGHT..NINE..TEN..I JUST LUV U SOOO MUCH"
Reys hands grew wider to show how much he luvd her..bt d length was still short..very short !! Taani jst kept adorng him nd blushed..
This hadnt gone unnoticed by rey..
"Aaye Haaye !!" he said in a total marjaava tone nd a huskily romantic voice makng ol d blud in her body rush beneath her cheeks frming d wrlds most beautiful blush !!
Rey intertwined their fingers promising her to olways be by her side..beside her hrt..no mattr wat..
Taani beautifully smiled nd put her head on his chest promising him to olways supprt him..to gv him ol d luv..ol d affection to him..!!
Dey hugged each other promising to olways be each others no mattr wat..dey wer lost in each oders arms not carng wat d future held fr dem..bt jst knowng dat dey will olways be wid each oder..may not be externally bt internally..frm within their hearts...!!
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NSohi13 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res/unres

Hmm now that is something beyond the simplicity and purety of the Love of two pure Souls ... Totally loved them and the song was just awesome and fully matching with the situation ... Thank you dear :)
Edited by NSohi13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was beautifull... Simply beautiful... Beyond imagination... Loved it... ā¤ļø
brilliant work dear!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mind blowing...
awesome...
love it...
thanks 4 pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kaash aisa d3 mein ho jaaye
Taani samajh jaye that what she is asking from Rey is a lot!!
This was a beautifully pure n serene update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing OS...jus loved it alott <3 <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww it was awsm yaar
i luv it to core it was damm romantic
n emotional nice thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww, it was really sweet n lovely,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum os...
and amazing song selection...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was simply beautiful yaar ā­ļø

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