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Originally posted by: rulama

Smita,😊

Here is the interpretation to Section 4 of Part 23.

When Arnav looked into Khushi's nervous eyes, he realized that she was being scared of his actions. He deliberately banked the fire in his eyes and let her relax. His intention had been to woo her and not to scare or overpower her.

The song on the radio was, Chatur Sughar Balmaa... calling upon a lover who was wordly wise. It was a call from greenhorn who asked the wiser one why was the hand being held and being inexperienced, needed directions to proceed. Knowing that the other was experienced and proficient, the greenhorn was asking the worldly wise how their should courtship be conducted.

Calling her name, Khushi, Arnav took a step towards her. Getting goosebumps, Khushi jumped down from her perch and scrambled away. Struggling for a steady voice she reminded her Arnavji, that it was time for him to return to his office. Her fingers held on to the magazine in a death like grip as though her life depended on holding it tight. If it had not been inanimate, the book would have certainly squeaked its protest for being held so.

The words in the song were appropriate.

The inexperienced was acknowledging other as the master of seduction, a master of all the ways to lure and seduce a maiden.

Arnav drawled in his husky voice asking her, it is? His voice was mesmerizing Khushi like a snake on its prey before going to sting, kill and swallow whole. Taking slow but firm steps he moved towards her and she moved backwards, until she hit the wall. Wanting to dissuade him, but not understanding how or why she wanted to do so, she breathed, Arnavji. But Arnav was a determined man. He paused only when he was close by, his face just inches from her, with their body nearly touching. Khushi again trying to dissuade him called, Arnavji and said haltingly that, she needed to go home.

The song was belting out that,

she was the most loved and the pampered kid of the family and if he wishes to have her...

In a soft whisper, letting his warm breath whiff at her left cheek, he asked her why. Khushi shivered and gasped, sweets, trying her best not to heave deeply lest her chest touches his.

In the song,

the girl was asking her lover to win over her with his love and she was placing the condition that only after doing so was he eligible to embrace her.

Arnav who couldn't comprehend what she was saying, asked her Sweets? She stammered that, she had to make sweets with badam. Arnav pretending not to understand, enquired seductively, badam? And when she said kismis he drawled, kissmiss making her forget everything other than his kissmiss and she whispered yes.

Arnav rubbing his nose against her cheek asked her, whether they mean more to her than him. Khushi shuddered and tried to back off into the wall which she already had herself plastered to. Arnav who was in an extremely naughty mood, kissed her cheek and his lips moving on her soft, sensitive skin asked her, can badam do this to her? Khushi shut her eyes as waves of feelings and pleasure with his touch engulfed her. The magazine slipped out of her nerveless fingers. Her hand, clutched her dress at her hips in an attempt to gain control over her body, that was desperately hankering for his warmth. Her body swayed towards his, and he moved closer towards hers, bridging the narrow gap that had been there between them. Arnav with his lips at the seam of her lips, and rubbing his lips against the spot, whispered can kissmiss do this Khushi? He made no move to claim her lips. Khushi opened her eyes, her lashes fluttering to take in the naughty look in his eyes and the tempting lips held close to hers, but not on hers. Khushi looked into his eyes for a moment desperate for his kiss. But he stood still and continued to look at her with waiting eyes, tracing the plump soft inviting lines of her lips with his gaze and lingering on the rising desire in her eyes. Even when she parted her lips with the hope that he would understand and comply with her wishes, satisfy this hunger within her that only he could assuage, he remained waiting for her to make the move. Finally, frustrated by the wait for him to make the move, she lifted her arms and caught hold of his shoulders. When she tried to pull him closer and his lips closer to hers, he kept his distance by just looking at her waiting for her to take the first step. Khushi unable to control any longer, gently ran her hand up his shoulders and stopping only at his face. Cupping his face with her hands, she found Arnav smiling at her, loving her need for him, a need she could not conceal, a need she was ready to give into. His smile was the drop that made the cup overflow. Khushi with firm hands on his cheeks turned her head and captured his lips with hers. She knocked the socks off both him and herself. A few minutes later when Arnav and Khushi surfaced for air, Arnav whispered into her ears that he needs her, more than badam and kissmiss do. Khushi tucked her face in the crook of his neck hiding the blush that was rapidly rising on her cheeks.

When Anamika called and spoke to Ganesh, in a calm voice, he knew she was anything but that. He queried asking her to continue what she needed to say. Her name from his mouth sounded like an endearment, a mantra, something sacred. Only he could say her name like that. She told him that Gaurav had met with an accident and was hospitalised. Recovering from the shock after a moment of silence, in a shaken voice, Ganesh asked her, how was he? Anamika whispered that it was a drunken driving that caused it, while Gautam was crossing the road. Ganesh frantic with worry asked her for the details of the hospital and when Anamika gave him he promised her to be there within ten minutes. He asked her with concern, whether she was alone in the hospital, and when she said yes, he asked her to stay put and keep up her courage. He would be by her side in ten minutes.

She nodded knowing that he would be there even if he had to run all the way from his studio to the hospital.

This update shows absolute condition, pre-requisite, necessity, requirement. It is SINE QUA NON.

What is sine qua non?

It is a Latin word with direct translation meaning 'without which not' meaning for without which it could not be, an indispensable action or condition.

When Arnav corners Khushi, she is split between whether to follow her heart or her mind. Her heart says to follow her instincts and her mind is now split into two. One part asks her to follow her instincts where as the other warns her that she needs to make her way to her sweet shop. Earlier it used to be a 50% division of votes, but now it has come to two thirds for her instincts. What Arnav seeks is, for her to make the move because her last accusation that whether he doesn't recall all the other girls that he had kissed before while kissing her has seared his mind. For him all the others had meant nothing, as the mysterious chemistry to which he could tango was produced only with her. She being a novice has been unable to grasp this. But here as the song that was being belted out said she was seeking his help. He being adamant wanted her to take the initiative to put her mind to rest. Arnav did not want anything to come in between. That was his absolute condition and her initiative was his prerequisite.For him she was not an option but a necessity. For her so far, though his well being was of vital concern she had not made it an indispensable condition. He wants her to realize that being with him was her requirement just like air to breathe.For him it is so. In order to set an antecedent by her action for their future together, he wanted her to initiate the kiss. He wanted her to be on the same footing as himself where their need and wants for each other was concerned. He wanted her to be able to express her needs without any inhibition. So far it was he who had taken initiative and she had acquiesced. Never had she opened up enough to voice out or express her opinion either verbally or by action. When she waits thinking he will as usual sense her wishes and do the needful she realizes that it would be one long wait. So her next move was to do it herself, and the punch they got out of it had them reeling. It was quite a heady sensation. Move from her was an essential condition.

"They always say time changes things, but you actually have to change them yourself"

~ Andy Warhol, The Philosophy of Andy Warhol

Once they came down to earth he told her she was his sweet and it was more essential for him to have her with him than for the badam and kismis to prepare sweets. She was his kissmiss, the prime ingredient for sweetness in his life, without which it could not be.

This was an indispensable action.

"Shallow men believe in luck or in circumstance. Strong men believe in cause and effect"

~ Ralph Waldo Emerson

Anamika when in time of need calls the first person whom she knows she can count on to be her support. It is Ganesh Vidyarthi. He has stood by her through thick and thin and now when Gaurav is hospitalized due to a road accident she thinks only of him to lean on to. She knows his support is unconditional and without hesitation. This she counts on and he does not fail her. This is the absolute condition of their friendship. Even in the moments of happiness it is he whom she calls to share her glee. He is there for her always, hamesha, forever.

This was an indispensable condition.

"There are no mistakes, no coincidences. All events are blessings given to us to learn from"

~ Elizabeth Kubler-Ross

That is why this update is SINE QUA NON.

"Taking charge of your own learning is a part of taking charge of your life, which is the sine qua non in becoming an integrated person"

~ Warren G. Bennis


Reshu it's just wonderful as well as lovely too.

really enjoyed it and loved it very much.

once again I would love to say..Smitaji's story and your interpretation

gives us an another world of realization regarding to each situation.

thanks for the pm.

take care.

Edited by hetaldave - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rulama

Smita,😊

Here is the interpretation to Section 4 of Part 23.

When Arnav looked into Khushi's nervous eyes, he realized that she was being scared of his actions. He deliberately banked the fire in his eyes and let her relax. His intention had been to woo her and not to scare or overpower her.

The song on the radio was, Chatur Sughar Balmaa... calling upon a lover who was wordly wise. It was a call from greenhorn who asked the wiser one why was the hand being held and being inexperienced, needed directions to proceed. Knowing that the other was experienced and proficient, the greenhorn was asking the worldly wise how their should courtship be conducted.

Calling her name, Khushi, Arnav took a step towards her. Getting goosebumps, Khushi jumped down from her perch and scrambled away. Struggling for a steady voice she reminded her Arnavji, that it was time for him to return to his office. Her fingers held on to the magazine in a death like grip as though her life depended on holding it tight. If it had not been inanimate, the book would have certainly squeaked its protest for being held so.

The words in the song were appropriate.

The inexperienced was acknowledging other as the master of seduction, a master of all the ways to lure and seduce a maiden.

Arnav drawled in his husky voice asking her, it is? His voice was mesmerizing Khushi like a snake on its prey before going to sting, kill and swallow whole. Taking slow but firm steps he moved towards her and she moved backwards, until she hit the wall. Wanting to dissuade him, but not understanding how or why she wanted to do so, she breathed, Arnavji. But Arnav was a determined man. He paused only when he was close by, his face just inches from her, with their body nearly touching. Khushi again trying to dissuade him called, Arnavji and said haltingly that, she needed to go home.

The song was belting out that,

she was the most loved and the pampered kid of the family and if he wishes to have her...

In a soft whisper, letting his warm breath whiff at her left cheek, he asked her why. Khushi shivered and gasped, sweets, trying her best not to heave deeply lest her chest touches his.

In the song,

the girl was asking her lover to win over her with his love and she was placing the condition that only after doing so was he eligible to embrace her.

Arnav who couldn't comprehend what she was saying, asked her Sweets? She stammered that, she had to make sweets with badam. Arnav pretending not to understand, enquired seductively, badam? And when she said kismis he drawled, kissmiss making her forget everything other than his kissmiss and she whispered yes.

Arnav rubbing his nose against her cheek asked her, whether they mean more to her than him. Khushi shuddered and tried to back off into the wall which she already had herself plastered to. Arnav who was in an extremely naughty mood, kissed her cheek and his lips moving on her soft, sensitive skin asked her, can badam do this to her? Khushi shut her eyes as waves of feelings and pleasure with his touch engulfed her. The magazine slipped out of her nerveless fingers. Her hand, clutched her dress at her hips in an attempt to gain control over her body, that was desperately hankering for his warmth. Her body swayed towards his, and he moved closer towards hers, bridging the narrow gap that had been there between them. Arnav with his lips at the seam of her lips, and rubbing his lips against the spot, whispered can kissmiss do this Khushi? He made no move to claim her lips. Khushi opened her eyes, her lashes fluttering to take in the naughty look in his eyes and the tempting lips held close to hers, but not on hers. Khushi looked into his eyes for a moment desperate for his kiss. But he stood still and continued to look at her with waiting eyes, tracing the plump soft inviting lines of her lips with his gaze and lingering on the rising desire in her eyes. Even when she parted her lips with the hope that he would understand and comply with her wishes, satisfy this hunger within her that only he could assuage, he remained waiting for her to make the move. Finally, frustrated by the wait for him to make the move, she lifted her arms and caught hold of his shoulders. When she tried to pull him closer and his lips closer to hers, he kept his distance by just looking at her waiting for her to take the first step. Khushi unable to control any longer, gently ran her hand up his shoulders and stopping only at his face. Cupping his face with her hands, she found Arnav smiling at her, loving her need for him, a need she could not conceal, a need she was ready to give into. His smile was the drop that made the cup overflow. Khushi with firm hands on his cheeks turned her head and captured his lips with hers. She knocked the socks off both him and herself. A few minutes later when Arnav and Khushi surfaced for air, Arnav whispered into her ears that he needs her, more than badam and kissmiss do. Khushi tucked her face in the crook of his neck hiding the blush that was rapidly rising on her cheeks.

When Anamika called and spoke to Ganesh, in a calm voice, he knew she was anything but that. He queried asking her to continue what she needed to say. Her name from his mouth sounded like an endearment, a mantra, something sacred. Only he could say her name like that. She told him that Gaurav had met with an accident and was hospitalised. Recovering from the shock after a moment of silence, in a shaken voice, Ganesh asked her, how was he? Anamika whispered that it was a drunken driving that caused it, while Gautam was crossing the road. Ganesh frantic with worry asked her for the details of the hospital and when Anamika gave him he promised her to be there within ten minutes. He asked her with concern, whether she was alone in the hospital, and when she said yes, he asked her to stay put and keep up her courage. He would be by her side in ten minutes.

She nodded knowing that he would be there even if he had to run all the way from his studio to the hospital.

This update shows absolute condition, pre-requisite, necessity, requirement. It is SINE QUA NON.

What is sine qua non?

It is a Latin word with direct translation meaning 'without which not' meaning for without which it could not be, an indispensable action or condition.

When Arnav corners Khushi, she is split between whether to follow her heart or her mind. Her heart says to follow her instincts and her mind is now split into two. One part asks her to follow her instincts where as the other warns her that she needs to make her way to her sweet shop. Earlier it used to be a 50% division of votes, but now it has come to two thirds for her instincts. What Arnav seeks is, for her to make the move because her last accusation that whether he doesn't recall all the other girls that he had kissed before while kissing her has seared his mind. For him all the others had meant nothing, as the mysterious chemistry to which he could tango was produced only with her. She being a novice has been unable to grasp this. But here as the song that was being belted out said she was seeking his help. He being adamant wanted her to take the initiative to put her mind to rest. Arnav did not want anything to come in between. That was his absolute condition and her initiative was his prerequisite.For him she was not an option but a necessity. For her so far, though his well being was of vital concern she had not made it an indispensable condition. He wants her to realize that being with him was her requirement just like air to breathe.For him it is so. In order to set an antecedent by her action for their future together, he wanted her to initiate the kiss. He wanted her to be on the same footing as himself where their need and wants for each other was concerned. He wanted her to be able to express her needs without any inhibition. So far it was he who had taken initiative and she had acquiesced. Never had she opened up enough to voice out or express her opinion either verbally or by action. When she waits thinking he will as usual sense her wishes and do the needful she realizes that it would be one long wait. So her next move was to do it herself, and the punch they got out of it had them reeling. It was quite a heady sensation. Move from her was an essential condition.

"They always say time changes things, but you actually have to change them yourself"

~ Andy Warhol, The Philosophy of Andy Warhol

Once they came down to earth he told her she was his sweet and it was more essential for him to have her with him than for the badam and kismis to prepare sweets. She was his kissmiss, the prime ingredient for sweetness in his life, without which it could not be.

This was an indispensable action.

"Shallow men believe in luck or in circumstance. Strong men believe in cause and effect"

~ Ralph Waldo Emerson

Anamika when in time of need calls the first person whom she knows she can count on to be her support. It is Ganesh Vidyarthi. He has stood by her through thick and thin and now when Gaurav is hospitalized due to a road accident she thinks only of him to lean on to. She knows his support is unconditional and without hesitation. This she counts on and he does not fail her. This is the absolute condition of their friendship. Even in the moments of happiness it is he whom she calls to share her glee. He is there for her always, hamesha, forever.

This was an indispensable condition.

"There are no mistakes, no coincidences. All events are blessings given to us to learn from"

~ Elizabeth Kubler-Ross

That is why this update is SINE QUA NON.

"Taking charge of your own learning is a part of taking charge of your life, which is the sine qua non in becoming an integrated person"

~ Warren G. Bennis


That's it from me. Hope you enjoy it.





wonderful thoughts di...

how do u manage to describe them sooo clearly??????

i always fail to find words for them...

thnks for the PM...

keep it up...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was awed reading last few chapters..
i admit, i fail to find exact words to describe, how i feel after reading it..
can anything be this beautiful..??? 😳

i Love reading each n every part twice.. 😉
one being d actual chapter by Smita di n 2nd Rashmi di's thoughts..

hatsss off to u both.. 🤗 ❤️
u seriously have kept ArShi n IPKKND magic alive.. 😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear thanks a lot for the pm.

Lovely update.

Arshi kiss was damn hot. ❤️

Best dialogue of the update was when Arnav says I need you more than badam and kissmis do😉

Oh Gaurav had an accident.😭

Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful part. 👍🏼
arshi were lurvvvly.
kiss-miss.☺️

uh-oh what happened to gaurav???😲
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First of the update was just Awesome!!!Fantastic!!!!
Smita dear you rock!!!!
Love it when Arnav stopped what he was doing and made her react to it!!!
Kushi herself voluntarily kissed him this time!!!
That was something more understanding than it seems!!!!
Arnav was so sweet!!! He let her take the initiative rather than him doing whatever he wants!!!
The last bit was saddening😭Poor Gaurav!!! I hope he does not have serious injuries!!!
Anamika is devastated and the only person she can count on is Ganesh because she knows he will always be there for her and never disappoint her!!!😊


Rulama's interpretation!!!
Rashmi dear!! if i ever dont understand what smita is trying to convey through her update , i can always count on your interpretation!!!
As i said before and i will say it again,,,your interpretation shows the readers a very different yet a beautiful way of understanding the update.
The kiss miss part was what caught my attention!!! so brilliantly interpreted.
The quotes were awesome and they fit the situation so perfectly!!!(how on earth do you do that?)
"This update shows absolute condition, pre-requisite, necessity, requirement."
very well said dear! it indeed shows the above mention factors.
the quote by Ralph Waldo Emerson totally describes Arnav here. he was always the one to believe in cause and effect!!!
The last quote was just fabulous!!!
The update is indeed SINE QUA NON.
Im glad i get to read your awesome interpretation dear😃
they make me understand the depth of what is laid out in front of us! thank you!😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
She initiated the kiss???!!!! WOW!!!

the anticipation, the wish and greed for the contact was so intense and so well written, it seemed as if i was watching the scene in my mind's eyes.

The way Arnav advanced and the way she retreated is something that we have seen a hundred times and yet with a different situation and with the way u have written it, it was still worth a second read.

Ganesh and Anamika share a strong bond, something which is deeper than what meets the eye and i am waiting for that revealation, so is the bond or concern shared between Ganesh and Anamika's son.

Wonderful, beautiful and simply superb romantic update.

Will be waiting impatiently for the next one Smita.

Rashmi thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update!
Gaurav in a hospital. His mom worried!!
Ganesh n Anamika

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