ARSHI FF: ~PAWN~ #7 Chap 16 Pg 135 28/05 EXT

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Hira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

ANY CHANCE TO GET A UPDATE...PUPPY FACE

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Hira

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Posted: 12 years ago

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APPY UR THE BEST😃

UPDATE SOON NA MY SUPPER WOMAN😃

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clairvoyance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

the FF is very difficult not just from writers perspective only i guess but readers perspective too

for me

taking care of Khushi, shedding few tears is not the justice.

I wud hv been happy if she wud hv gone in coma.

arnav wud die a death each day .The more he sees her in pain the more he suffers.

arnav shud realise that wen he was treating her like a s**t...still khushi never complained cause she still considered it as his love for her.

he shud remmber all the moments when after being married and reaching guest house by car how she told that she admired him , she was his fan.

the regret shud not just be limited to tears and taking care.

arnav shud suffer too both in physical way and mental way

evry memory shud crush him

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arshi_lover1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Congrats on new thread...plz continue!

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trivedishraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

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OMG! So you updated didi.. Padhne se pehle hei m restless.. 😳

Okay.. So ASR regrets! I hate to read him regretting.. 😡
Coz I love ASR. ☺️
I guess am the only one on IF to love ASR more than Arnav!! 😆

But,ya,much needed repressing.. Very touchingly written.. Only you could give this effect didi.. <3<3

OMG,he called Shashi as dad,this ASR really is regretting! Shit.. 🥺

Woah.. Being forgiven is the best treatment for him to make him look even more down na? 😔

He did fell in love with her,and if Khushi won't forgive him,it would make me loose.. Am already going weak at my knees,trust me am breathing slowly slowly..
Am bout to cry ha.. How much he is thinking yar..

OMG. Am saying this for the first (and May be last) time-LOVE you Shyam! LOL. Ya ya.. He said write,go talk to your wife,she loves you UNCONDITIONALLY!

And ha,this Anjali,Narak ki aag mei jaa k marega uski 'Naa' ki.. (naa ki n nt maa ki,am a good girl who by default did just one mistake to fall for ASR over Arnav. :p )

I liked Shyam over here.. I just can't wait for the extension! Your back Di, and I love you,pata hai na? :D

I love ARSHI.. I know its gonna be ARSHI in extension..

*extension comment coming soon*

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I read the extension all time smiling. .
All I can comment is, wow!
am speechless,dammit!!
Her fears are no more wondering and her price less asset Is so preciously caring for her..

Nani ka comfort and her questions,all noticed and taken on by ASR.. Now toh Arnav hei Arnav hai,par kab tak?

I just loved the end.. :-*
That's it Di,wonderfully drafted.. Its all magical!

Continue soon plz.. 😊
Waitng again,Desperately!

Edited by kuts - 12 years ago