ArShi FF:ZiNdAgI Ke RaAz #2 THREAD 3 LINK PG146

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PadduBarunHolic

@PadduBarunHolic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Wow Intresting and Amazing

Special Powers and Arhaan wow

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

nice update dear

Butyou really confused us with this Arhaan

Oh poor Arnav felt bad for him

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ankii543

@ankii543

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

To be honest this part was fine...
It was nice but something just dint click...for me...
But as u say its imp for the story...im fine with it...

The note part is EDWARD FROM TWILIGHT SERIES thing...
Reading minds except for hers...lol
not that i have a problem...but u could have mentioned the idea source...

Waiting for the next...all the best maithly...
Thanks for the pm...^_^

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: ankii543
To be honest this part was fine...
It was nice but something just dint click...for me...
But as u say its imp for the story...im fine with it...

The note part is EDWARD FROM TWILIGHT SERIES thing...
Reading minds except for hers...lol
not that i have a problem...but u could have mentioned the idea source...

Waiting for the next...all the best maithly...
Thanks for the pm...^_^

i have not taken it from twilight..

i hav'nt seen it..

its johk if it matched😳

Edited by ..hrideyy.. - 12 years ago

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dershika

@dershika

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

it was a nice chapter sad arnie would be heart broken

such a mysterious story like it

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

well nice update...it makes the story even more interesting...Convo of Khushi with her Dad...shiktal...Arhaan...wow,so many things...waiting for the update...

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Nice update
hope khushi gets to know her relation with arnav asap

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ayaanshi

@ayaanshi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

hey, the chapter was awesome n pls update soon...

i can't comment on the chapter more as my mind is trying to decipher all the info but once the story progresses and my mind gets cleared i will surely pour all my feeling in the comments till then i guess this will be enough for you to know that the story is very very interesting and i hope that we'll get updates soon...