My first creation!!

Jalebiee thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys..m a newbie on IF...
May BE uhh ...guys..dont know me much...
Bt plzz give sm secnds from ur precious to mah!...thoughtS...
I'll be really honoured...
So here i go!!
AARZOO THI BHT
KEHNE KI UNSE
JO REH GAI BAATE
UN KAHI, UNSUNI SI...
KABHI HM KEHNA NAHI CHATE
KABHI VO SUNNA NAHI CHATE...
BEBASI REH GAI ,KHALIS BANKE DARMIYAAN
AAJ ASHK BHI RUKE HAI
NM AANKHO ME HMARI
KABHI YE BEHNA NAHI CHATE
KABHI HM BAHANA NAHI CHATE...
HO GAYE HE RASTE JUDA AB
SHAYAD MILNA HO NA DOBARA..
FIR BHI AASH HE DIL ME
SAYAD VO ROK LENGE...
PR YE TOH BDKISMATI HE HMARI..
KABHI HM RUKNA NAHI CHATE
KABHI VO ROKNA NAHI CHATE...
SO HWZ...DIS...???
Plzz tell me ur viewzz... 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow it was nice poem and keep it up rock
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwwiee! That was cute!!! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnxx shikha, deepa, nd sumit...<3..<3
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