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Posted: 12 years ago
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here goes chap 12 dats it for 2 days guys i'm too tired and i'm back after too long have a lot to catch up.
CHAPTER 12

It was morning.All were sitting and having their breakfast.Aarav nandhini Nikhil and Anu had a feeling that something was gonna happen but didn't know what.They kept the feeling aside and prepared for the party.After some time their neighbour cum arnavs friend ella a blonde was trying her best to work her charms on Arnav but here the young Raizada was not someone who would let any other lady other than his mumma,mummy and kushi rule his heart

Ella(holding his collar seductively):Arnie I love you.

Arnav:I love you too ella in his mind (ya bitch love and U!!! how am I supposed to stop ur nagging presence here?)

Ella: The two of us @ my place tonight at 8

Arnav: Of course baby (even my puppy would hesitate to come to your house)

Ella: Don't u dare bring that kushi with u I hope u understood what I meant

Arnav : Ya baby Bye (u bitch how dare u sa about my kushi like that.Hmm I've to teach her a lesson ,but lemme not think of her on ma b'day I'llsee u later<angrily>)

Ella went back basking in the glory of her success in impressing Arnav.Kushi came their and stood with her hand on her hips she was looking cute in her short skirt and pink top with to ponies which her mummy had tied for her.

Kushi "U!! u r gonna go on our b'day 2 her home dat too without me"

Arnav:Ya lemme go anyway she wont scold me like you :P

Kushi's eyes were filling with tears.Arnav burst out laughing and said.

Arnav:OMG my kushi baby would I do that and that too for that pest.No way .You know You are the best

Kushi gave a watery smile he hugged him quickly

Arnav :Hey hey u'll strangle me to death I wont be able to celebrate my b'day

Kushi (in her cute Indian accent) :Badmaash

It was evening the party was about to begin.The house was decorated like a bride.The guests were pleasantly surprised hough they knew that the proud dads wouldn't leacve any stone unturned in making their kids b'day special.The hall was filled with silence when Arnav and Kushi entered hand in hand.The guests couldn't help but admire how good these two looked with each other.The ake was cut and other celebrations were over.It was night and everybody had left. All 6 were in the hall suddenly some gunshots were heard.The kids were frightened.Aarav immediately hid his kids behing him by the time the security guards had come in .He was schocked out of his wis when he saw his best friend and his sister lying on the floor in a pool of blood.He was numb he couldn't move or think.Later he came back from the numb state on hearing the cries of his kids and wie.Nikhil and anu were taken to the hospital immediately.the doctors were trying their best to save them but the shots had pierced through their heart.Kushi was numb she was't even blinking her eyes .She was in arnavs embrace nd they were sitting outside the Operation theatre by a crying nanditha hugging them as if she was holding onto her dear life. She and Aarav kept on asking themselves and eachother Why god why them why not us.Take our lives and give theirs back.The doctor came out all rushed to them expectantly he gave a sorry face and said:"They're sinking they want to meet you.Make it fast they only have a fw min left.

Aaav and Nandhini couldn't hold it any longer they burst into tears not considering the fact that others were looking at them.

They entered the room Nikhil and anu were attached to many monitors.As they came close the only thing Nikhil said was

Nkhil"Bahiyya and Bhabbi my kushi'"

Aarav :"Don't worry Nikhil and anu we're there for her."

Arnav :Dadda don't worry I'll stay with her till my last breath."

Nikhil and anu were relieved.Suddenly Aarav took both the children towards the devi maiyya statue kept at a corner of the roomand asked

Aarav:Arnav I know I can't force u I'm asking u no pleading u will u marry kushi

Arnav: No dad!!!!never

Edited by annanyaleya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Wat just happened..poor khushi...:(
on her birthday...:(

eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Both the chapters were awesome..
I loved this sentence a lot :
But arnav was arnav he'd dump his girlfriends once he gets a chance to kiss them on their cheek.. It was sooo cute.. 🤣
Why arnav refuse to marry khushi??😲..
Poor Khushi... she is losing both her parents at a very young age..
Continue soon..
Edited by AGirlOfGold - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Loved d update
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Awesome update. Well written.
Again cliffhanger?!! May be arnav meant not to plead him. Ella's part was hilarious. Loved the way u described the angry khushi, that was so cute.
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
arnav said a no y???
they are just kids
but such a drastic decision intresting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Awesome Updates...

Poor Khushi...her parents died on her birthday...

So..that's why they got married at so young age...

Continue Soon...
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
nice update

Poor khushi😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Oh god khushi's parents got shot...that's horrible...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey thnxx fr d pm,loved dis update. Hope dis marrigae was not a result of force, nd dey are keeping a happy facade in frnt of d world now.dis update. Was awsum. Y is arnav sayin a no. I enjoyed it thorougly. Keep updating.

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