ArHi OS: What If?

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Admires your writing style !

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Nicely written, wish the original one had been like this.

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Achu

@arshy4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Beautifull attempt Helee... You are talented indeed...

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MamiaRehman

@MamiaRehman

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

This is Simply Awesome...👍🏼

if something like this really would have happened in the serial as well...

their Confession was mind blowing... beautifully written... loved it

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

So despite saying I will take a while to start reading ...I am here, just needed to take a look to see what was up for grabs and this one caught my eyes, this is a scenario I wished for plenty of times, I hated that it was Shyam who went up to the terrace that day ...

I loved this version, Shyam's desperation and his delusion, depicted pretty hilariously, I am so glad he sees them and their love, am glad that his ploy failed in fact it had the reverse effect...with everyone being a witness to that proposal they will now take matters in their hand and expedite the wedding process...much to his dismay!

Loved the scene on the terrace, the part where both reminisce about the effects and feelings of the day when the fairy light incident took place...I loved reading both their thoughts on it... the proposal and I was anxious, will he or won't he, so enjoyed him going on his knees and confessing ...you wrote their love and their POV, the way he takes her hand, kisses her knuckles, her need to hear the words...beautifully written...

I shall be reading all your work for sure...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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Chetna

@chetna19

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

awesome OS...

write more nd more...

u r wonderful writer...

Edited by chetna19 - 11 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Loved it.

And Shyam's thoughts made me laugh.

Poor Shyam! Lost his Khushi!

Loved the whole proposal scene.

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Awesome!!

If only Arnav reached the terrace first...!

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Mandy

@foreverromantic

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Aww, that was absolutely beautiful!!!! I wish that had happened in the actual show!!!

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RainyDays

@RainyDays

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Beautiful OS !

It was like a series of fortunate events happening there. What we wished to see in the show ( but I just cannot imagine Arnav speaking for that long). This is the perfect terrace scene that could happen.

The confession of Arnav was one of the best confessions ever. Him clearing all his acts which caused hurt to Khushi and all his acts where he showed his indifference towards her. Him baring his past to her and the reason for pushing her away with his hatred, showed how much Khushi had come to mean to him.

The line which I loved the most in the complete OS was:

"I know now that you didn't simply come into my thoughts -you have made a permanent home in my heart"

These lines are so true and touching and the best realisation that Arnav could have...

The confession was just so magical..

I loved how you involved all the characters in the story. And mentioned and gave credit to Lavanya too.

Bechara Shyam, serves him right !

The OS was everything that a Arhi fan dreamed of and Thanks for fulfilling that dream 😊