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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

Wonderful job for your first story. I encourage you to write more!

The shyam parts cracked me up.

Arnav & Khushi are just magical & you captured that beautifully.

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@SarunArshiIpk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome story

Write more OS and FFs

Im sure you will do good

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007
Wonderful job for your first story. I encourage you to write more!

The shyam parts cracked me up.

Arnav & Khushi are just magical & you captured that beautifully.

Thank you!

I wanted to portray Shyam in a funnier way than usual, and I am glad you liked it!

Thanks for liking my efforts!!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SarunArshiIpk
Awesome story
Write more OS and FFs
Im sure you will do good

Thank you!

I will definitely try and write more.. Shall PM you the links if I do write!

Thanks for the vote of confidence! 😊

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chocodilla

@chocodilla

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome!
Loved Arnav's proposal..
Can't believe it is your first one..
Continue writing..

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

hahaha in ur face shyamwa 😈
snakewa's parts cracked me :P
such a beautiful os
cant believe its ur first time
do write more os

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Very nice and if its your first time in writing an story thn you did a commendable job. You should continue writing more & more. Loved the cute proposal and Shyam's day dreams were hilarious. Superb work 😊