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tvserial2012

@tvserial2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

exquisite ...don't stop .Keep writing

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sadhnasoumya
Loved it :)
Doesn't look like ur first time
Their confession was wonderful
Keep the good work 😛

Thank you!! I'm really happy to know you like the emotions!!

Originally posted by: Jyoti_1991
awesome..😊

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: tvserial2012
exquisite ...don't stop .Keep writing

Thank you!! I will definitely try and write as much as I can!!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -Zara-
OH WOW!

Absolutely BRILLIANT SIS! Loved it from start to finish.
Arnav's smooth move and Khushi's shyness was well balanced.
And you know my fav bit!!! IN YOUR FACE SHYAM!!!! 😆

Awww for your first piece this was so adoring! I'm honored that I'm the first person you commented for and also that you like my lame stories,lol. You will be a very fab writer indeed!!!

p.s Don't ever doubt if your my friend or not. OF COURSE YOU ARE!! :D
xxx

I don't know how to thank you, Zara!! Thank you for this wonderful comment, for all the stories you have written, for the emotions you made me go through, for the gifts, for the hugs!!!

As I had tols you earlier, you were my 1st, 50th and 100th comment too!!

And your stories are not lame at all! Trust me... You are one of those few authors who inspired me to write. So this OS is partially yours too!!

Will be making Shyam the scapegoat of many more jokes, if I write!

Loads of love hugs and kisses to my friend!!!

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Gunjan

@..Gunjan..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awesome
Amazing
I felt like in a. Dream land
Like on that day in the serial everything went wrong yaha everything went right
U really write very well
😊

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

just stumbled across ur OS!!!!!!!

if only this was to be true!!!!! but never mind!!!!!!!!

shyam was hilarious!!!!!!! i could see his twitching face n scrunched up nose!!!!!! man, he doesn't classify to be a villian!!!!!!!!

loved your portrayal of the entire terrace scene!!!!!!

keep writing!!!!!!!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Buhahahha.. 😈 Shyam ka toh band bajj gaya .. 🤣

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

sigh... i relived that moment...
with each word..with each sentence i saw it all happening in my mind...all of them in their dresses on that day.. all of their expressions and interactions...it is beautiful...

a dreamy moment...sigh...i loved it...

thank u for writing this and sharing it...brought me a strange kind of peace..and heartfelt delight...
beautiful..so perfect..just like that moment...sigh...

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: fan123GUNJ
Awesome
Amazing
I felt like in a. Dream land
Like on that day in the serial everything went wrong yaha everything went right
U really write very well
😊

Thank you!

That day...even when I knew that everything was going to go wrong, I had hope that it wouldn't. So I was left with a lot of sadness, and I wanted to correct that! 😊

And thank you for the compliment!

Originally posted by: shutter
just stumbled across ur OS!!!!!!!
if only this was to be true!!!!! but never mind!!!!!!!!

shyam was hilarious!!!!!!! i could see his twitching face n scrunched up nose!!!!!! man, he doesn't classify to be a villian!!!!!!!!
loved your portrayal of the entire terrace scene!!!!!!

keep writing!!!!!!!

Hahahaha...He has been accorded a high place in our ArShi's lives for too long. He deserves to be portrayed as he really is- a comic relief! 😆

I will keep writing, thank you! And I hope you keep "stumbling" across my work, and giving such lovely comments 😊

Originally posted by: mishti_17
Buhahahha.. 😈 Shyam ka toh band bajj gaya .. 🤣

True that! Thoda aur bajana tha, par chhod diya. 😉

Originally posted by: basb
awesome

Thank you!! 😊

Originally posted by: ameena671
wow nice os loved it.

Thank you so much!!! 😊

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: princessunara

sigh... i relived that moment...
with each word..with each sentence i saw it all happening in my mind...all of them in their dresses on that day.. all of their expressions and interactions...it is beautiful...

a dreamy moment...sigh...i loved it...

thank u for writing this and sharing it...brought me a strange kind of peace..and heartfelt delight...
beautiful..so perfect..just like that moment...sigh...

Thank you so much for this wonderful comment!

It was really an honor to write about Khushi and Arnav, and have so many people appreciate what I wrote. So, its thanks to you, for reading this, for liking it, and for commenting! 😊

I am glad it could erase even 0.1% of the memories we all have of THAT episode.. 🤢

Thank you, once again!!