ArHi OS: What If?

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Chanel.

@flirtatious.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Really Really cute <3 It's sooo sweet :)

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magss24

@magss24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

cant believe that this is your first story...loved it..pls do continue writing...

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Sabina

@Guguminti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

very nice :) waiting aggressively for IPKKND2 or a new intense passionate love story of SARUN

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow it's your first attempt... but you write so well 😳

loved it to the core...

keep writing dear

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow excellent os 😊 well written 😊

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: arshi_sravy
Awesome!
Loved Arnav's proposal..
Can't believe it is your first one..
Continue writing..

Thank you! Yup, this is my first attempt. Will bring in more "What If's" soon!

I'll PM you if I do!

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi
hahaha in ur face shyamwa 😈
snakewa's parts cracked me :P
such a beautiful os
cant believe its ur first time
do write more os

Glad you liked the subtle humor! I shall try and write more of it..

Thanks for reading, liking and complimenting!

Originally posted by: Tia_0810
lovely!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: PhenoixTears
Very nice and if its your first time in writing an story thn you did a commendable job. You should continue writing more & more. Loved the cute proposal and Shyam's day dreams were hilarious. Superb work 😊

Thank you for the encouragement! You made my nervousness vanish away with your wonderful reply! I will write more!

Originally posted by: ..Enchantress..
Very beautifully written.
Shyam's condition was hilarious .
And aww...what a cute proposal ❤️

Lovely work.

Hahaha.. Thank you! I was laughing while writing Shyam's parts..

And this is partly how I would like to be proposed, too.. 😳 So it was special to me!

Thank you for reading it!!!

Originally posted by: Stunning_Sarun
Really Really cute <3 It's sooo sweet :)

Thank you!!!

Originally posted by: magi11
cant believe that this is your first story...loved it..pls do continue writing...

Yup, this is my first time writing anything, let alone letting anyone read it. Glad you loved it! Will PM you if I write anything in the future!

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Anne

@Anne_ArHi

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hello, after your exams you were still hibernating, I wondered what you were up to? And now I guess I know the answer. This is what you were doing, writing a mind-blowing story on Arnav and Khushi.

This Shyaam Fiaso and Teraace scene will forever haunt all IPKKNDians. This story is an attempt to help us forget this terrible and horrid scene ever.

When in the show, we all saw Khushi reading that message on the mirror, we all wished it to be Arnav and not Shyaam but the opposite had happened.

Reading this one shot made mine and others dream come alive with your story.

To be honest, the story was almost flawless, beautifully written with correct grammar and spellings. The plot ans story were like a dream scene.

The proposal, the confessions, and romance were right intact and the pathetic, miserable and helpless condition of Shyaam was worth all the fun.

I simply loved the first ever story written by my best friend albeit we have never met. We are Pen friends!

Keep writing such stories and continue to surprise me.

Coming to the dedication, thanks a lot. I simply do nothing for you, it's just you who feel it that way. I like you as a wonderful person that you are and hence the dedication for liking my story so much when nobody did then.

Thanks for the dedication and thanks for being my friend.

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--
Loved d os
tum toh badi chupa rustam nikli
beautifully written
continue to write more

Mistee's comment on your story simply cracked me up. 🤣

BTW, she is right.

And with that comes the end of the comment.

Bye

PS. I Love You! ❤️

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Aawww nycc os

Thank you!! 😊

Originally posted by: Guguminti
very nice :) waiting aggressively for IPKKND2 or a new intense passionate love story of SARUN

Thanks! I would also love to see them both together, lets wait and watch.. But NOTHING can replace IPKKND!! 😊

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
wow it's your first attempt... but you write so well 😳
loved it to the core...
keep writing dear

Thank you!! I will surely write more.. It feels so good to get encouragement from readers.. And I am happy I posted this one!

Originally posted by: HansaN
Awesome work dear thx

Thank you!

Originally posted by: arshi-sugi-ipk
wow excellent os 😊 well written 😊

Thank you so very much! 😊

Originally posted by: Baki
Lovely.

Thank you!!

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

OMG I LOVED IT

IT WAS SO AMAZING

EVERYTHING I ACTUALLY WANTED TO SEE IN IPKKND!!!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--
Loved d os
tum toh badi chupa rustam nikli
beautifully written
continue to write more

Thank you!!! It feels all the more special to have people I know (although I don't ACTUALLY know) like it and comment! Its like having an ArHi FF/SS/OS connoisseur commend my work! I feel so happy!!!!

And I am not a chupa rustam re! Just another avid reader with loads of ideas in the tiny brain of hers.. I will keep writing more, now!!!

🤗 Thank you!!!!

Originally posted by: zoya_quboolhai

Hello, after your exams you were still hibernating, I wondered what you were up to? And now I guess I know the answer. This is what you were doing, writing a mind-blowing story on Arnav and Khushi.

This Shyaam Fiaso and Teraace scene will forever haunt all IPKKNDians. This story is an attempt to help us forget this terrible and horrid scene ever.

When in the show, we all saw Khushi reading that message on the mirror, we all wished it to be Arnav and not Shyaam but the opposite had happened.

Reading this one shot made mine and others dream come alive with your story.

To be honest, the story was almost flawless, beautifully written with correct grammar and spellings. The plot ans story were like a dream scene.

The proposal, the confessions, and romance were right intact and the pathetic, miserable and helpless condition of Shyaam was worth all the fun.

I simply loved the first ever story written by my best friend albeit we have never met. We are Pen friends!

Keep writing such stories and continue to surprise me.

Coming to the dedication, thanks a lot. I simply do nothing for you, it's just you who feel it that way. I like you as a wonderful person that you are and hence the dedication for liking my story so much when nobody did then.

Thanks for the dedication and thanks for being my friend.

Mistee's comment on your story simply cracked me up. 🤣

BTW, she is right.

And with that comes the end of the comment.

Bye

PS. I Love You! ❤️

I was on a self-imposed sabbatical for ummm.. 3-4 days! 😉 😆

There were some problems with the exam at the center, so I might have to give it again 😭 So I have to study again 🤢 And I am dead. LOL

Coming to the OS... I had this in my mind for some time.. I was actually going to ask you to write it for me, but then I thought of surprising you instead! I am SOOO happy you liked it!!!

Obviously, my OS had to be dedicated to special people! You really are the reason I use IF, you know?

And Shyam will face a lot more.. I have loads of fun planned around him.. Wait and watch! Hahahaha!!

This proposal was slightly flawed.. It wasn't as I had wanted it to be, but then I thought to leave it as such. Because in the end, Arnav is flawed too. We can't have perfection everywhere! 😆

And I will keep writing, pakka! Maybe OS/TS/SS, because FF's are too long for me. I would be on my toes writing them!!

Really really really happy you liked it!!!!

And we shall be pen-best-friends now!! You wait.. I shall pen-bug you! Hahahahaha

P.S.: Love you too!!! ❤️ 🤗

Edited by hmtxyz - 12 years ago