SwaRon OS- Sharon's moment of epiphany? - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just One Word- BEAUTIFUL !
Really Love it... 8-)
Thanks For The Pm. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was beautiful
lovely take on the scene
well written..
kah aisa hota n haron relizeses her love or swayam soon
do write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was so beautiful Mihi...

Loved the way u gave the aftermath of maula mere..the soulful dance ...LOVED IT..

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Hey Mihi...🤗

As i always tell u ...i just LOVE & ADORE the way you write...ur writing is beautiful but its realistic in a strange way...i hardly find any sort of mush there...thats the beauty of ur writing...Maula mere..the sequence which raised Swaron fans hopes to an unmatchable level and we were disappointed ...still i am thankful due to that open ended episode u came up with this OS..

Coming to the OS...i loved it from the beginning..their pain..their confusions..their love...the bottled emotions..

"Right" She said unhappily. "It was a routine." And walked from there. Away from him, disheartened.

Swayam tried to stop her, but to no avail. She wasn't listening to him.

"Swayam, she doesn't need you. Don't cross your limits." He warned himself.

Loved the way sharon trying to find answers to her questions...about her feelings towards swayam lately ...the weirdly beautiful sensation as u said...ahhh..that line was heavenly...


She knew there was some problem, but she was trying hard to figure out what her problem was. She liked Swayam, but nowadays she had a weird kind of sensation near him'. Weirdly beautiful sensation, to be honest.

Swayam was really close to her, she didn't doubt this. But what had the feeling of like turned into? This wasn't like. She liked him a lot, but she never ever felt this way.

She had been in a relationship with him for a long time, and she had always liked him. She liked him a lot. And her like for him had never waned. It could either turn into love or infatuation. She was pretty sure this wasn't love. So was it infatuation?

I so wanted to see these in the show...sharon questioning herself and eventually finding answers...few of my favorite lines from her self realization


Swayam was playing on her mind' He had successfully managed to break all the boundaries of her heart and procure a place in that fist sized involuntary muscle.

Her beautiful realization..her self talk..the new dawn ...so so beautifully portrayed...

And only he could make her smile. He was the only one who could hurt her and at the same time, make her smile. He was the only person who could speak curtly to her, but at the same time, make her realize what he meant to her. He was the only person, who knew Sharon in and out and could figure it when things went out of the way for her.

He was the only person who deserved her love. He was the only person whom she loved. And this love, was never ever going to decrease.

Love, this feeling was beautiful. And this realization seemed so perfect for her.

"I love him. I love Swayam." She smiled and blushed.

I loved the fact that u didnt give a confession here..just the realization...SRP is finally in love...loved this OS...as i said m officially ur fan 😳

Luv
Deep

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome... 😊 dis was exactly wat we wanted to see... 😔

u have expressed Sharon feelings perfectly..
. 👏 nyc wrk dear... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...such a beautiful os mihika...beautifully written...firstly sharons confusion abt like or infatuation...n more over her confidence dat its nt infatuation...n then her feelings,confusion and atleast the most awaited her realisation...wow...loved it each n every part...u portrayed Sharon perfectly...i wish palki mam ye pade aur thoda inspiration le aur Sharon ko show me bhi jaldi apni feeling samajme aaye that shes madly in love wid swayam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THAT WAS SOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!
i luved how you showed the restless side of sharon..
in the end...she finally realized it!!
this was an awesome os!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful OS hope this happens in D3...Cvs please read it 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow this was one beautiful OS to read. For some reason, I really really liked what you had written. Not that I dont usually, but this was a sort of serious OS and you penned her feelings down beautifully. You have a way with words you know. You should do something about this talent. Atleast it's better than medicine🤢 I dunno why this OS had a huge impact on me. More than what you wrote, how you wrote it was wonderful.Keep writing. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: varsh-mayur

hi tanha29...i want u to replace or assist palki mam yaar...its just awesomeee... i dont have words 😊😊😊😊 loved it ...i so wish they show this in episode

same here...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
This wasn't lame, but beautiful.

Sharon did realize her feelings, and also that Swayam loves her, only! 😳 Great.

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