Virika SS- love at once! *PART 14 UPDATED* - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
aww viren not married to jeevika yet :(, hopefully they get married soon! waiting for the next part, do update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woh awesome yaar...their little romance is too cute...jeevs is blushing...wow...viren wants sum space & jeevs get the shock of her life...brilliantly written dear...update soon & its my order ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
awesome update
damn good
loved it
wht did jeevika saw
continue soon
excited for nxt update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
god you should not have stopped here..!!
really loved it

continue soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Continue soon n pm me when u update the next part
I loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Can't you please make it a SS?
Coz I totally love this! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 4-B

On the whole floor from the doorway to the staircase there was a blanket of rose petals and their were red heart balloons all over.

Viren came behind her and put his arms around her. Jeevika was still shocked

Viren- kaisa laga surprise?

Jeevika –its beautiful! Par yeh sab kyun?

Viren – aaj kuch special hai!

Before Jeevika could say or ask anything else, Viren picked her up and walked inside the house. When they entered the house Jeevika saw that even the stairs were covered with rose petals. She could just not understand why viren was doing all this all of a sudden today. They went up to the balcony and he put her down. It was pitch dark.

Jeevika- viren !ho kya raha hai?

Viren – Jeevika can i ask you something!

Jeevika- yeah sure!

Viren- there is a pair of everything in our body has a pair like our hands, ears, kidneys etc right?

Jeevika- yeah! Was this the question?

Viren- i want your heart to be my pair , will you give it to me?

As soon as he says this viren kneels to the ground and takes out a small velvet box and claps his hand. As soon as he claps and light bulbs come on. Jeevika blinks a little but then is shocked to see that the light bulbs are arranged in a pattern which said "WILL YOU MARRY ME".

Jeevika- oh my god viren!

Viren- will you marry me jeevs!

Jeevika –yes ! yes! Yes!

As viren opened the box, Jeevika saw the most beautiful ring in the world. It was simple yet very classy! She loved it. But for viren the rings beauty only intensified as he slipped it on jeevika's finger. He got up and saw that jeevika was crying.

Viren – arrre ! itna bura hoon mein mujse shaadi karne se daar lag raha hai?hahah

Jeevika- shut up viren! Tumhe toh yeh bhi nai pata ki ring pehna kar karte kya hai!

Viren- ohhh! Jitni films maine dekhi hain unme toh voh film hi khatam kar dete hain .. kyunnki next part A rated hota hain na!

Jeevika blushed so hard. Viren could not handle himself so he leaned in and tried to kiss her, but Jeevika sensing viren's action ran down into the house.

Viren- kaha jaoogi bhag ke ! end mein aana toh mere paas he hain!

He walked down and saw Jeevika in their room. She was standing next to the dressing table removing her jewellery. She was just removing her necklace when she felt his hand on her neck. He removes the necklace and kissed her softly on her nape.

Jeevika- vir...viren

Viren- shhh aaj nai shona please!

Jeevika gave up. As viren was kissing her neck Jeevika was getting weaker in the knees, her head was on his shoulder turned to the opposite side so that he had ample space to explore. He held tightly from her waist, to stop her from falling. Jeevika was still lost in his touch when she felt herself being lifted. He carried her to the bed, put her down and came on top of her. As they were getting closer viren could not take it anymore he just went straight in and kissed her straight on her lips. They kissed until Jeevika was breathless. Viren then went back to marking jeevika's neck and slowly move his hands from his waist to her back. As his hands reached their destination he unravelled her blouse and took of the sari along with his shirt. He pulled over the sheets and they spent the night together in each others arms.

in the morning

jeevika woke up and was the happiest person on this earth ! she was in the arms of her love what ese could she want!

viren- subah subah! itna haas kyun rahi hoon!

jeevika- tumhari bahoon hoon na isliye! accha by the way ab shaadi kab karoge?

viren- jab tum chahoon! mein toh eveready hoon!

jeevika-viren can we get married on the beach or in a yatch (they live in miami 😃😆)

viren- beach pe! not the yatch...

jeevika- ok! lets tell virat maanvi first at least!

viren- ok! you go shower il call them!

thats it for today guys! i love you all for commenting and liking ! it really boosts my moral thank you very much!

~aashna

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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
yay first to comment, anyway this is amazing! i knew he would propose to her but love the way he did though, so ROMANTIC!! it was so adorable! do update soon and hopefully they get married soon too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really very sweet update

Viren- i want your heart to be my pair , will you give it to me?

I just loved this line a lot
Continue soon
Edited by NeetuHarshi - 12 years ago

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