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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

i hv read all da chapters in one go...
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its such an amaxnggg story...brilliant concept dear...
plxxx continue soon...m craving 4 more...
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thnxxx 4 da pm...

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Amazing chapter
Loved it
Thanks for the pm dear

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Thank you so much for giving us the next chapter very next day…

I loved it….

So, Shyam is a murderer….I really doubt his intentions.

I love every bit of the story.

Cheers for the PM.😛

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Chapter 8

I have a bad feeling about Shyam too, like he was responsible for the murder of Rudy, he wanted the land and did not get it and that's when he decided to pursue Anjali?

So now he comes to Shashi and offers to buy him out and is shocked to find Arnav has beaten him to it. Brilliant!

Loved Akash and payal and their comfortable silence and thier sweetness...they do seem ideal for each other, am glad she is doing something constructive in your story!

Like everyone wondering about Arnav and his reasons to go into Yerba, and him wondering about his actions that make the rest feel that Ela could be his reason.

Khushi...ha ha ha ignorance and indifference ...she executes those emotions with perfection ...

And ofcourse loved him looking at Khushi with emotions he cannot explain and regret for his actions from the previous night as her self appointed protector...and then he strikes again...aah jealousy does suit him and makes him totally irrestible !

A speechless and stunned Khushi is a sight to see...

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Nw d real fun is startng.
khushi got 2 c d killer face.
amazng

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Woww another update😊

So khushi is working in his house hmmm

Shyam was that man whim khushii saw...😲

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Now kushi is going to tutor Drew and Dave, is it like tutoring la in shantivan. Here also Anjali playing Cupid, let the arrowing began soon.

After knowing the chisp of Akash and Payal, want to see th tease of brother sister. Sure Akash is going to be red one because of talkin about Payal and two towards arnav for telling his manipulative sister. Really goose is cooked.

The encounter of the killer and witness and the witness of the encounter, the thriller started. Is the dead man drew and Dave's papa.

Is there any code in the colour of chapter index and chapters with different colours to be decoded. If so give me a hint please because I am thinking there must be some significance in the usage of colors.

IF doesn't accept "tilde" and "n" ( n in espanol) letters. I think you wanted to write "por que" as you put tilde in e, e is erased.
I like you using Spanish words and conversation's especially when I read Yerba, It reminds me the good old days about having "Yerba mAte" with friends. I learn Hindi from IF, sure now readers will learn Spanish with dusty haven.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

For Chapter 8 & 9:

Oh, so Payaji and Aakashji have hit it off! And I thought there was going to be a comedy of errors with the Raizadas acting cupid for the wrong couples, but ASR cleared the air. Yay!

ASR is a good man, swallowing his prejudices for his sister's sake. But what is with BL, whats the secret, why does everyone want it?

She knows he knows she is ignoring him and so she fumes. He knows she knows he is angry so he smirks :D

Khushi is now going to be terrified, the killer is here. And she thinks he recognizes her. Now what ?

I am loving these frequent updates and this story is absolutely charming! Thank you, Madhu :)

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kushigowda

@kushigowda

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

shyam was the one who tried to kill them..
then y didnt shashi recognize him when he went to ask the place???

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Yipee, I was correct it was Shyam...

Loved it, loved their silence, their anger their attraction now just want them to move together in this...love their gazes...

So Khushi is to a teacher to the twins...love how there are similarities yet different from the show...looking forward to that...

I loved the brother sister conversation, loved that his friendship with Ela cleared and his pairing with Paayal brought on ha ha ...loved his reactions ...loved his last comment about Akash...

hope she tells Arnav about Shyam...her running away from him reminded of the time she ran away from him on discovering his identity the day of the puja!

And of he is again, her self appointed body guard and protector to find her...

Cannot wait for him to catch up with her...